Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many unrelated words. Aim to give a short, direct topic sentence that answers the question, then one or two specific supporting details. Use simple, correct vocabulary and keep to 1–3 sentences. For example, say whether you enjoy taking photos and mention what kinds of views you like and why.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I like photographing city skylines at sunset because the light makes the buildings look dramatic and the colours are beautiful.

제안: The answer is not relevant to the question and is difficult to understand. Start with a clear preference (urban or rural), then give one or two specific reasons and a brief example using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Keep sentences short and coherent.

예시: I prefer rural views because I enjoy the peace and natural scenery. For example, I like wide fields and mountains where I can relax and take clean, calm photos.

제안: The response is confusing and does not directly state your preference. Answer the question directly (own country or other countries), then add a specific reason and an example. Mention cultural differences or unique scenery if you prefer other countries.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy seeing different landscapes and cultures. For instance, when I visited the Netherlands I loved the flat countryside and quaint canals, which were very different from scenery at home.

× Veluxova compounding rules with a picture of the different really logos to follow my life teacher.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because they remind me of my life and my teacher.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear: words are misplaced and the structure does not form a complete, coherent sentence. This is a sentence structure error (type 26). To fix it, create a clear subject and verb (I like), specify the object (taking pictures of different views), and add a reason or explanation using a conjunction (because). Ensure vocabulary fits the context (remove unrelated words like 'Veluxova', 'compounding', 'logos'). Suggestion: Identify the intended meaning, then write a simple sentence with subject + verb + object and, if needed, a clause introduced by because or that to provide explanation.

× How lifeguard unveiled Arium Sukhov So much people lack of superior view and uh, I live life today.

✓ I prefer rural views because many people there have a better view of nature, and I enjoy living close to that scenery.

The original sentence contains mixed fragments and irrelevant names, producing an unclear run-on sentence. This is a sentence structure error (type 26). To correct it, choose a clear subject and verb (I prefer), state the reason (because many people there have a better view of nature), and connect ideas coherently (and I enjoy...). Avoid inserting unrelated proper nouns or fragments. Use quantifiers correctly ('many people' not 'so much people'). Suggestion: Break ideas into clear clauses, use appropriate quantifiers, and keep sentences focused on the question about urban vs rural views.

× Lot of people or other countries. I like you and mostly my my Dutch people, my different families. There have a lot of people who mostly like the life of my picture.

✓ I like views in other countries because many people there, including members of my Dutch family, enjoy taking and sharing photos of everyday life.

The original contains sentence fragments, repetition, and incorrect structures, making it unclear. This is a sentence structure error (type 26). Fix by forming a complete sentence that answers the question: state preference (I like), the place (in other countries), and the reason (because many people there, including my Dutch family, enjoy taking photos). Replace incorrect phrases ('There have a lot of people') with grammatical ones ('many people there'). Suggestion: Use complete sentences with clear subjects and verbs, avoid repetition, and use proper relative or appositive phrases to add information about family.