Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your response repeats the examiner's question instead of answering. Give a direct opinion, add one or two brief supporting details, and keep it natural and concise (no more than 5 sentences). Use correct grammar and singular/plural forms.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I especially like landscapes because they capture the atmosphere of a place, and I often try to photograph them at sunrise or sunset to get warm light. For example, last month I photographed a riverside view and the colors made the image more striking.

제안: Again you repeated the question and changed words incorrectly. Answer directly (urban or rural), then add a clear reason and a short example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and correct place names if needed.

예시: I prefer rural views because they feel calmer and more natural. For instance, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and fields since they offer peaceful scenes and interesting textures. When I visit the countryside I can spend more time composing shots without distractions.

제안: You again echoed the question without answering. State your preference, give a reason and a brief contrast if helpful (e.g., familiar vs. exotic). Keep sentences grammatical and avoid repeating the examiner's words verbatim.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because they often feel more exotic and offer different architecture and landscapes. For example, I traveled abroad last year and was fascinated by coastal villages that were unlike anything at home. That variety inspires me to take more creative photos.

× Do you like taking picture of different view?

✓ Do you like taking pictures of different views?

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because 'different' implies more than one; similarly 'view' should be plural 'views'. Use plural nouns when referring to multiple items. Suggestion: change 'picture' to 'pictures' and 'view' to 'views'. ID:1

× Do you prefer views in Aspen area or rural areas?

✓ Do you prefer views in the Aspen area or rural areas?

The phrase 'Aspen area' requires the definite article 'the' before a specific named area: 'the Aspen area'. Without 'the' it sounds unnatural. Suggestion: add 'the' before 'Aspen area'. ID:11

× Do you prefer view in your own country or in other countries?

✓ Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?

The noun 'view' should be plural 'views' because the question compares types or instances of views in countries; also use 'in' before both locations for parallel structure. Suggestion: change 'view' to 'views' and maintain 'in' before each location for clarity. ID:1