Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答自然且信息完整，但可以更精练并使用更多具体细节和连接词来增强表达。注意句子长度不超过五句，并避免冗余。练习时可补充具体例子（如拍摄的场景或使用的相机/手机），并用“because”或“so”类连接词使逻辑更清晰。

예시: Yes, I do. I love capturing beautiful scenery when I travel because photos help me remember special moments and places. For example, I often photograph mountain sunrises and local markets to share on social media and with friends.

제안: 回答表达了偏好但存在语法和连贯性问题（如动词形式、句子残缺）。应直接给出主题句然后用一到两句具体理由或例子支持，使用连词如“because”或“so”。注意语法（例如“it makes me relaxed”）。

예시: I prefer rural views because they make me feel relaxed and peaceful. For instance, I enjoy photographing quiet lakes and green fields, which help me disconnect from the city noise.

제안: 回答含混且有多处语法与词汇错误，未能清楚表达比较理由。应先给出明确立场，然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持，避免重复词语并使用正确短语（例如“views in other countries”）。如果想表达“没见过的景色”，可用“I haven't seen before”。

예시: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy discovering scenery I haven't seen before. For example, I love photographing coastal cliffs abroad since they look very different from landscapes at home.

× I prefer views in rural areas because it's make me relaxed and.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they make me relaxed.

原句中“it's make me relaxed and.”有多处错误：1) 使用了缩写“it's”（it is），但主语应与“views”（复数）一致，应该用复数代词“they”；2) 动词形式错误，因主语是复数，应使用原形动词“make”与复数主语连用；3) 句尾多余的“and.”导致句子不完整。正确表达为“they make me relaxed”。建议：注意代词要与先行词数一致（单复数一致），并确保句子完整不要残留连接词。

× I prefer reuse in other countries because I think other countries. Other countries scenery is is I didn't view it.

✓ I prefer to travel in other countries because I think I haven't seen their scenery before.

原句问题较多，属于句子结构错误：1) “I prefer reuse in other countries” 中“reuse”使用错误，应该表达“travel”或“seeing views”，且“prefer to travel in other countries” 或 “prefer views in other countries”；2) “because I think other countries.” 为不完整从句，缺少谓语和完整想法；3) “Other countries scenery is is I didn't view it.” 不合语法，重复“is is”，“I didn't view it”时态与语义不匹配且语序混乱。综合改为“ I prefer to travel in other countries because I think I haven't seen their scenery before.” 保持时态与原意一致（谈一般偏好与过去未曾看见的事实）。建议：重写时保证主语、谓语完整，避免拼写错误和重复词，使用合适的不定式结构（prefer to do）或直接加动名词（prefer doing）。