Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep to 2–4 sentences and avoid fragments.

예시: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. I often photograph familiar places and natural landscapes because they change with the light and seasons, which makes each photo unique. For example, I like to take photos of the river near my home at sunrise because the colors are beautiful.

제안: Give a clear preference and support it with concise, specific reasons. Use linking words (because, however) to contrast rural and urban scenes. Avoid unclear phrases and keep sentences complete.

예시: I prefer rural views because I work in the countryside and there are many natural scenes to photograph, such as fields and quiet roads. However, I also appreciate urban views because my hometown has interesting streets and everyday moments that tell stories about people's lives.

제안: State your preference directly and give specific reasons with linking words. Use clearer vocabulary to describe feelings and novelty, and limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer views in other countries because traveling makes me excited to see new landscapes and cultures. For example, visiting a foreign countryside lets me photograph unfamiliar architecture and local festivals, which I find inspiring.

× Teacher mean taking for a photo I love it.

✓ Teacher means taking photos. I love it.

The student used 'Teacher mean' which lacks third person singular agreement and misuses 'mean' instead of 'means'. Also 'taking for a photo' is incorrect; say 'taking photos'. Use third person singular verb 'means' when referring to 'teacher' and plural 'photos' for general activity. Suggestion: use 'means' and 'taking photos'.

× I often taking photo from a familiar place and.

✓ I often take photos from familiar places.

The phrase 'often taking' incorrectly uses the -ing form; after 'often' use the base verb 'take'. 'Photo' should be plural 'photos' for habitual actions; 'a familiar place' changed to plural 'familiar places' to match general habit. Remove trailing 'and'.

× Landscape because.

✓ I enjoy landscapes because they are relaxing.

The fragment 'Landscape because.' is an incomplete sentence lacking a verb and subject. Provide a complete clause explaining why: e.g. 'I enjoy landscapes because they are relaxing.' Ensure subject and verb are present and connect to previous sentence for coherence.

× Currently I'm working in rural areas so it's have many places to capture with your eyes on wheels and but my hometown is stay in urban so I prefer board to capture all of the thing that's happened in my life.

✓ Currently I'm working in a rural area, so there are many places to capture while traveling, but my hometown is in an urban area, so I prefer to capture the things that have happened in my life.

Multiple tense and grammar issues: 'it's have' is incorrect — use 'there are' (there be issue). 'Rural areas' vs 'a rural area' clarified. 'to capture with your eyes on wheels' is awkward; 'while traveling' is clearer. 'my hometown is stay in urban' incorrect verb; use 'is in an urban area'. 'I prefer board to capture' unclear; use 'I prefer to capture'. 'all of the thing that's happened' should be 'the things that have happened' (plural and present perfect). Suggestions: use correct 'there are', correct preposition 'in', and proper verb forms and plural nouns.

× so it's have many places to capture with your eyes on wheels and

✓ so there are many places to capture while traveling,

The phrase 'it's have' is ungrammatical. Use the existential 'there are' to indicate existence of places. Also replace awkward idiom 'with your eyes on wheels' with 'while traveling'.

× my hometown is stay in urban

✓ my hometown is in an urban area

Use the preposition 'in' to indicate location. 'Stay' is incorrect here; use 'is'. Also include the article 'an' before 'urban area'.

× I prefer board to capture all of the thing that's happened in my life.

✓ I prefer to capture all of the things that have happened in my life.

'Board' is incorrect word choice. 'All of the thing' should be plural 'all of the things'. Use present perfect 'have happened' to describe experiences up to now. Suggestion: use 'prefer to capture' and plural 'things'.

× To be honest, when I'm going abroad, I'm so excited all of the view or the thing that's very happening for my life and situation that will come because of other countryside is like a new thing that you will see.

✓ To be honest, when I go abroad, I get very excited by all the new views and experiences that come because other countries feel new to me.

Tense and aspect issues: 'when I'm going abroad' is better as simple present 'when I go abroad' for habitual or general statements. 'I'm so excited all of the view' is ungrammatical; use 'I get very excited by all the new views and experiences'. 'the thing that's very happening' is incorrect; 'experiences that come' or 'things that happen' is correct. 'other countryside' should be 'other countries' or 'other countryside' rephrased; choose 'other countries'. Simplify sentence for clarity and correct verb forms.

× So if you ask me, I prefer other country.

✓ So if you ask me, I prefer other countries.

'Country' should be plural 'countries' when speaking generally. Use plural to indicate preference for visiting non-native countries in general. Suggestion: use 'other countries'.