Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 主題に直接答え、文法と語順を正すことに集中してください。具体的には：1) 明確なトピック文を最初に入れる（例："Yes, I enjoy photographing landscapes."）。2) 不必要な語や繰り返しを避け、理由や目的を1〜2文で簡潔に述べる（例：理由、いつ撮るか、どんな風に感じるか）。3) 文法（時制、代名詞、前置詞）と発音ミスを練習して自然さを高める。4) 接続詞（because, so, which）を使って支持文をつなげ、論理的に話す。練習例としては、短いフレーズを正確に言う反復練習と、1分以内で理由を2つ述べる練習を行ってください。

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing landscapes. I usually take pictures to capture the mood of a place and to remember how it looked. For example, when I visit the countryside I photograph the fields and rivers because their colours and light change throughout the day.

제안: より自然で正確な表現に直し、語彙と文の流れを改善してください。具体的には：1) 比較表現を正しく使う（"prefer rural areas to urban areas"）。2) 形容詞の選択を適切にする（"relaxing"や"calm"の使い方）。3) 繰り返しや不要な言葉（"so umm, absolutely"）を減らす。4) 理由を一つか二つの具体例で補強する（例えば静けさ、自然の美しさ、空気の良さ）。発音で流暢さを磨く練習も役立ちます。

예시: I prefer rural areas to urban areas because they are more peaceful and relaxing. For instance, I enjoy walking in the countryside where I can hear birds and breathe fresh air, which helps me unwind.

제안: 文意を明確にして文法と語彙の誤りを直す必要があります。具体的には：1) 意図する理由を明確に述べる（例えば慣れ親しんでいる、文化的に馴染みがある、思い出がある等）。2) 不明瞭なフレーズ（"site on me site on my prefabrication"など）を避ける。3) 所有格や複数形（"country's" vs "countries"）の使い方を正す。4) 理由を簡潔に2文以内で述べ、具体的な例を加える。音読練習で正しい語順と発音を確認してください。

예시: I prefer landscapes in my own country because I feel familiar with them and they remind me of home. For example, the countryside here brings back childhood memories and I appreciate the traditional scenery and local colours.

× I like to take a picture of landscapes and I want to correct to look after.

✓ I like taking pictures of landscapes and I want to keep them to look back on.

The verb pattern 'like + to + verb' is acceptable but 'like taking' is more natural when talking about hobbies; 'take a picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match general habit. 'I want to correct to look after' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended meaning is to keep photos to 'look back on' or 'remember'. Use the gerund 'taking' for activities and a clear phrasal verb 'look back on'. Suggestion: practice using 'like + -ing' for habitual actions and standard phrasal verbs for remembering photos.

× So I really enjoy to take a picture.

✓ So I really enjoy taking pictures.

After 'enjoy' the verb should be in the -ing form (present participle); 'enjoy to take' is incorrect. Also use plural 'pictures' when speaking generally. Suggestion: memorize common verbs that require -ing after them (enjoy, avoid, consider, etc.) and replace infinitives accordingly.

× I prefer the rural areas because I like the place that I can feel calm and relaxable.

✓ I prefer rural areas because I like places where I can feel calm and relaxed.

'Relaxable' is not a correct adjective here; the correct adjective describing a person's state is 'relaxed'. Also 'the rural areas' is overly specific; 'rural areas' or 'the countryside' is more natural. Use 'places where' or 'places I can feel' rather than 'the place that I can feel'. Suggestion: use 'relaxed' for feelings and 'places where' for describing locations.

× So umm, I absolutely prefer the rural areas than urban areas.

✓ So, I absolutely prefer rural areas to urban areas.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by 'to' when comparing two things (prefer A to B), not 'than'. Remove unnecessary article 'the' before general nouns. Suggestion: practice the structure 'prefer X to Y' for comparisons.

× I prefer my own country's landscape because it's site on me site on my prefabrication so umm such as peaceful and lyrics for praise.

✓ I prefer my own country's landscapes because they feel familiar to me and are peaceful and beautiful.

The original sentence has severe structure and word choice issues: 'site on me site on my prefabrication' and 'lyrics for praise' are nonsensical. Likely intended meaning is that domestic landscapes feel familiar and peaceful. Use plural 'landscapes' for general preference, 'familiar to me' for personal connection, and clear adjectives like 'peaceful' and 'beautiful'. Suggestion: when a sentence becomes confusing, simplify into shorter clauses: reason + examples, and choose common adjectives.

× So I prefer my own countries side.

✓ So I prefer my own country's side.

The original has a missing apostrophe in 'country's' and 'countries' is plural which conflicts with 'my own'. Use the singular possessive 'country's'. However, 'side' is awkward; better 'landscapes' or 'scenery'. Suggestion: ensure possessive apostrophes are used and match singular/plural with the possessive noun.