Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: The answer is not relevant to the question and gives no information. Provide a direct response with a clear topic sentence, then one or two supporting details. Keep it natural, concise and up to five sentences. Use linking words if you add details.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph city skylines and lakes because the light and colors change throughout the day, which makes each photo unique.

제안: The answer is relevant and short but too brief and lacks supporting details. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons or an example using a linking word (for example, because, so, and). Keep it natural and no more than five sentences.

예시: I prefer rural areas because they are quieter and offer more natural scenery. For example, I enjoy photographing rolling hills and forests since the peaceful atmosphere helps me focus on composition and light.

제안: The answer is somewhat unclear ("using my country") and lacks specifics. Give a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why with a specific detail or comparison to other countries. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep it concise.

예시: I prefer views in my own country, especially around Northern New York, because I know the locations well and can return at different times to capture changing seasons. In contrast, views abroad are interesting but harder to revisit for improvements.

× Take down the password.

✓ No, I prefer taking photos of landscapes.

The student's reply is irrelevant and lacks proper sentence structure for the question. The examiner asked about liking taking pictures of different views; the student replied with an imperative unrelated phrase 'Take down the password.' This is a sentence structure and relevance error. Suggestion: respond with a complete, relevant sentence that matches the question, e.g., 'Yes, I like taking pictures of different views' or more specifically 'I prefer taking photos of landscapes.' Ensure subject and verb are present and the response directly addresses the question. Note: This correction follows the requirement to fix sentence structure rather than other grammatical categories.

× I would prefer rural areas.

✓ I prefer rural areas.

Using 'would prefer' is not incorrect, but in a general preference question 'Do you prefer ...?' the simple present 'I prefer' is more natural and directly answers the question. 'Would prefer' implies a conditional or hypothetical situation. Suggestion: Use 'I prefer rural areas' for a clear, direct statement of general preference. If you want to express a specific choice now, you could say 'I would prefer rural areas for this trip.' This correction targets modal verb usage as listed.

× I would prefer using my country, Northern New York.

✓ I would prefer places in my own country, Northern New York.

The original sentence uses 'using my country,' which is unnatural and incorrect in this context. The structure 'prefer using' incorrectly treats 'my country' as a tool. The intended meaning is preference for locations within one’s own country. 'I would prefer places in my own country' or 'I prefer sites in my own country' is correct. Suggestion: Replace 'using' with 'in' and clarify 'places' or 'views' to express the intended meaning. Also ensure consistency with the modal 'would prefer'—it's acceptable if implying a choice between options.