Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự từ, dùng câu ngắn gọn hơn để tự nhiên và rõ ràng. Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi chia động từ (e.g., "taking photos"; "different views"). Thêm một câu hỗ trợ với chi tiết cụ thể về loại khung cảnh bạn thích chụp và cảm xúc kèm theo. Ví dụ: nói loại cảnh (bãi biển, núi, kiến trúc) và vì sao nó quan trọng với bạn.

예시: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. I especially enjoy photographing coastal sunsets because the colors are always changing and they help me remember peaceful moments. For example, last summer I took photos of a sunset that reminded me of a relaxing holiday, and I often look at them when I need to unwind.

제안: Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và hoàn thành câu. Dùng linking words để kết nối lý do và ví dụ (e.g., "because", "for example"). Tránh câu quá dài và không hoàn chỉnh; thêm chi tiết cụ thể về loại cảnh ở nông thôn bạn thích và một ví dụ ngắn về trải nghiệm cá nhân.

예시: If I had to choose, I would prefer rural views because they are quieter and help me relax after a busy week. For example, I enjoy photographing green fields and small streams in the countryside, which make me feel calmer and more connected to nature.

제안: Làm rõ câu trả lời trực tiếp (có/không) và sửa ngữ pháp. Tránh những từ lặp và tiếng ừ ừ; dùng câu có cấu trúc: topic sentence + lý do + ví dụ. Nên giải thích cụ thể điều gì làm cho cảnh ở nước mình đặc biệt (văn hóa, thiên nhiên, ký ức).

예시: Yes, I prefer views in my own country because they remind me of my culture and childhood memories. For instance, the traditional landscapes and local festivals at home feel familiar and meaningful, so I enjoy photographing them more than places abroad.

× Absolutely yes. To be honest I am a big fan of taking photo in a different views just because it helps me catch the memory but also allow me to look back on that photo in the future that that's why I love it.

✓ Absolutely. To be honest, I am a big fan of taking photos of different views because it helps me capture memories and allows me to look back at those photos in the future; that's why I love it.

Use plural 'photos' and plural 'views' for countable nouns (Singular and plural issue). Use 'taking photos of' (correct preposition). Use 'capture memories' instead of 'catch the memory' (idiomatic verb). Ensure verb agreement: 'helps me capture' and 'allows me' (third person singular subject 'it' requires 'allows'). Replace the long clause with clearer punctuation. Suggestions: pluralize countable nouns, use 'capture' for memories, use 'of' after 'taking', and keep verbs parallel.

× Well, if I have to choose, I think I will lean toward in a rural area rather than urban area just because it helps me relax and allows me to recharge my energy after a busy week. Rural area has many different view and.

✓ Well, if I had to choose, I think I would lean toward rural areas rather than urban areas because they help me relax and allow me to recharge my energy after a busy week. Rural areas have many different views.

Use conditional 'if I had to choose' and 'would' for hypothetical preference (Future/conditional tense). Preposition 'toward rural areas' without 'in'. Use plural 'areas' and 'views' for general statements (singular/plural). Use 'they help' to match plural subject (pronoun agreement). Complete the sentence. Suggestions: use conditional 'would' for preferences, omit unnecessary 'in', pluralize general nouns, and match subject-verb number.

× Absolutely. The view in my country, uh, I think many people love it just because, uh, all of the people love the, the place that we, that they was born and bred. That's what that's not, that's so special.

✓ Absolutely. The views in my country are loved by many people because everyone loves the place where they were born and raised. That's what makes it so special.

Use plural 'views' for general reference (singular/plural). Use 'where they were born and raised'—correct relative clause and past tense passive 'were' for birth (past tense issue and passive form). Avoid incorrect 'was' with plural 'they' (subject-verb agreement). 'Makes it so special' corrects awkward phrasing. Suggestions: use 'were born and raised', match verb number with subject, and rephrase for clarity.