Views— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Старайтесь отвечать более естественно и конкретно: начните с прямого утверждения, затем добавьте одно-два конкретных объяснения или примера. Избегайте слов-паразитов (например, "actually") и общих прилагательных без деталей. Также следите за грамматикой и порядком слов.

예시: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because each scene tells a story; for example, I like capturing sunrise over the river for its soft colors and calm atmosphere.

제안: Дайте более структурированный ответ: назовите предпочтение (или скажите, что предпочитаете оба), затем поясните причину в одной-двух ясных фразах с конкретными деталями. Избегайте неясных выражений ("large capitals") и повторов; используйте связки (for example, whereas, because) для плавности.

예시: I like both, but for different reasons. In cities I enjoy photographing modern architecture and busy streets, whereas in the countryside I prefer peaceful landscapes and natural light.

제안: Отвечайте чётко и избегайте повторов и грамматических ошибок. Начните с прямого ответа, затем дайте 1–2 конкретные причины и пример. Не используйте фразы типа "first one" без ясности; вместо этого говорите "my own country". Уточняйте, что вы имеете в виду под "symbols" (памятники, пейзажи и т.д.).

예시: I prefer views in my own country because I know the culture and history behind many landmarks; for instance, I often photograph old monuments and coastal scenery that remind me of home.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because actually it's so interesting and beautiful.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because they are very interesting and beautiful.

The pronoun 'they' is needed to refer back to 'views' (plural). 'Actually' is informal and unnecessary here; use 'they are' to link subject and adjectives. Use 'very' instead of 'so' for more neutral register. Suggestion: include a proper subject ('they') and verb ('are') to form a complete sentence.

× I prefer both areas because in urban areas we have a lot of large capitals and large business center and in rural areas a lot of views.

✓ I prefer both because in urban areas we have large capitals and many business centers, and in rural areas there are many beautiful views.

'Capitals' and 'business centers' need plural or appropriate determiners; 'a lot of large capitals' is awkward. Use 'many' with countable nouns. Add 'there are' to introduce existence in rural areas. Also change 'views' to 'beautiful views' for clarity. Ensure plural agreement between nouns and quantifiers.

× I prefer first one because in own country we have beautiful views and large a lot of business center and I like I love my country.

✓ I prefer the first option because in my own country we have beautiful views and many business centers, and I love my country.

Use 'the first option' to be clear. 'My own country' requires possessive 'my'. 'Large a lot of business center' is ungrammatical; use 'many business centers'. Remove duplicate 'I like I love' and keep one verb 'I love'. Also adjust word order and articles for natural English.

× And we have beautiful symbols.

✓ We also have beautiful landmarks.

'Symbols' is not the natural collocation here; 'landmarks' or 'scenic landmarks' fits better. Begin with 'We also' rather than starting a sentence with conjunction 'And'. This produces a more natural sentence.