Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid redundant phrases and grammar errors (e.g., tense and article use).

예시: I prefer handwriting. Firstly, I've used it since primary school, so it feels natural and comfortable. Secondly, I find handwriting helps me remember information better, for example when I take notes during lectures.

제안: Give a direct answer then briefly explain with a specific reason. Use linking words (but, however, because) correctly and avoid vague phrasing like "like the idea of".

예시: I type on a laptop every day because I own one and use it for work and study. However, I prefer desktops for gaming because they usually have better performance and a larger screen.

제안: Start with a clear time reference (e.g., "I learned...when...") and avoid repetition. Provide a concise reason or brief background with correct grammar and linking words.

예시: I learned to type when I got my first laptop in college. Before that I was fascinated by people using computers at work, so I practiced a lot once I had my own device.

제안: Answer directly and give one or two specific methods with clear explanation and correct vocabulary. Use linking words to organise points and avoid unclear phrases.

예시: I improve my typing by practising on online platforms like Monkeytype. For example, I take timed tests there to track my words-per-minute and focus on accuracy; additionally, I do daily drills to practice common letter combinations.

× Actually I prefer handwriting because it's more conventional method and that is something that you are used to since you were childhood, since you were in primary school, 2 year college.

✓ Actually I prefer handwriting because it's a more conventional method and it is something that you have been used to since your childhood, since you were in primary school and for two years in college.

The sentence is missing the definite/indefinite article 'a' before 'more conventional method' (Article errors/definite article). 'That is something that you are used to' should be 'it is something that you have been used to' to use the present perfect to indicate a state continuing from the past to the present (Present tense issue). 'Since you were childhood' is incorrect; use 'since your childhood' (incorrect use of pronouns/phrases). '2 year college' needs to be 'for two years in college' (incorrect use of quantifiers and noun phrase). Suggestion: add the indefinite article 'a', use 'have been used to', say 'your childhood', and spell out numbers in this context as 'two years'.

× I own laptops, so yeah, I type on laptops, but I like the idea of desktop because you can play video games in it.

✓ I own laptops, so yeah, I type on laptops, but I like the idea of a desktop because you can play video games on it.

'the idea of desktop' needs an article: 'a desktop' (Article errors/definite article). Also preposition 'in it' is incorrect for electronic devices; use 'on it' (incorrect use of prepositions). Suggestion: add 'a' before 'desktop' and use 'on it' when referring to playing games on a computer.

× Oh, actually I always first, I was always fascinated by like how people in office have their own computer and the type of for their work.

✓ Oh, actually at first, I was always fascinated by how people in offices had their own computers and the types they used for their work.

'I always first' is incorrect word order; use 'at first' (sentence structure errors). 'People in office' requires plural or article: 'people in offices' or 'people in the office' (article/pronoun error). 'Have their own computer' should match past context if speaking about earlier times: 'had their own computers' (past tense issue). 'the type of for their work' is ungrammatical; use 'the types they used for their work' (sentence structure/word choice). Suggestion: use 'at first', pluralize 'offices' and 'computers', and clarify 'types they used'.

× So I was always fascinated. But I got my first laptop when I was in college, so since then I've been typing on that only.

✓ So I was always fascinated. But I got my first laptop when I was in college, and since then I've been typing on that one.

The final clause 'since then I've been typing on that only' uses 'only' awkwardly; 'that one' is the natural referent. Tense 'I've been typing' is correct (present perfect continuous) to indicate an action continuing to present (present tense issue handled). Suggestion: replace 'only' with 'one' for natural English and join clauses with 'and' for flow.

× I use multiple websites. One of the website name is monkey type.

✓ I use multiple websites. One of the websites' names is Monkeytype.

'One of the website name' is incorrect: after 'one of the' the noun should be plural ('websites') and the possessed noun should be in possessive or rephrased ('name' -> 'names' or 'is called') (incorrect use of quantifiers/article errors). Also brand name capitalization: 'Monkeytype'. Suggestion: say 'One of the websites' names is Monkeytype' or 'One website is called Monkeytype'.

× It helped me to build my typing speed on a level where the screen shows itself.

✓ It helped me to build my typing speed to a level where the screen updates by itself.

'Build ... on a level' is unnatural; use 'to a level' (incorrect preposition/phrase). 'Where the screen shows itself' is unidiomatic; likely intended 'updates by itself' or 'advances automatically' (incorrect verb usage). Suggestion: use 'to a level' and replace 'shows itself' with 'updates by itself' or similar.

× This goes by the screen and you can just type in and check your speed like what word per second you could type in.

✓ The test runs on the screen and you can just type and check your speed, for example how many words per second you can type.

'Goes by the screen' is incorrect; use 'runs on the screen' or 'appears on the screen' (incorrect use of prepositions/phrasing). 'Type in and check' should be 'type and check'—'type in' is unnecessary here. 'What word per second you could type in' is ungrammatical and mixes tenses; use 'how many words per second you can type' (incorrect use of quantifiers and tense). Suggestion: use 'runs on the screen', remove redundant 'in', and rephrase speed measure as 'how many words per second you can type'.