Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and correct mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, fix grammatical errors (e.g. "by hand", "vocabulary"), and add one specific example with a linking word. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer handwriting because I retain information better when I write by hand. For example, when learning new vocabulary I copy each word and a sentence using it, which helps me remember the meaning and usage.

제안: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Use one clear sentence stating which device you use, then add a specific reason with a linking word. Reduce vague phrases like "I would search out things".

예시: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I use it for research, emailing, and writing assignments, so I need it for most of my study tasks.

제안: Be more direct and correct wordiness. Start with a simple statement of time, then give a brief reason or context. Remove repetitions and improve grammar (e.g. "the first time I started").

예시: I learned to type when I was in Year 9. At that time, school projects required using a computer, so I practiced regularly and improved quickly.

제안: Give a clear method with specific details and correct errors. State one or two concrete strategies (timed practice, typing exercises, frequent assignments) and use linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like "get in touch with hyper."

예시: I improved my typing mainly through regular practice: I completed timed online exercises and typed many school assignments daily, which increased my speed and accuracy over time.

× Personally, I prefer handwriting because usually I tend to retain information better when I write nose by hand, for example when learning new vocabularies or when I'm trying to remember some specific context.

✓ Personally, I prefer handwriting because I usually tend to retain information better when I write notes by hand, for example when learning new vocabulary or when I'm trying to remember some specific context.

Wrong word 'nose' should be 'notes' (typo) and 'vocabularies' is uncountable in this sense and should be 'vocabulary'. Use 'I usually tend' or just 'I tend' to avoid redundancy; corrected sentence keeps intended meaning and appropriate noun forms.

× It helped me to memorize it better.

✓ It helps me memorize things better.

Tense inconsistency: the student speaks generally about a habitual effect, so present tense 'helps' is appropriate rather than past 'helped'. Also 'memorize it' is vague; use 'memorize things' for general statements. Removed unnecessary 'to'.

× Yes, I'd have to admit that I do because nowadays people do rely on laptops and desktops.

✓ Yes, I have to admit that I do, because nowadays people rely on laptops and desktops.

'I'd have to admit' (would) is conditional and sounds unnatural for a simple admission; 'I have to admit' or 'I must admit' is correct. Also 'do rely' is emphatic but unnecessary; simple present 'rely' is preferred for general truth.

× So yes, I do need to search, do research, or I would search out things every day using a laptop keyboard.

✓ So yes, I need to search for information or do research every day using a laptop keyboard.

Unclear mixed modal and conditional forms: 'I would search out' is conditional and incorrect here. 'Search for information' is the correct collocation; simplify to present tense habitual action 'need to' and 'do research'.

× I'm probably not the type of person who got in touch with electronic devices really young.

✓ I probably wasn't the type of person who got in touch with electronic devices very young.

Tense and auxiliary: 'I'm probably not the type' conflicts with past 'got'; change to past 'wasn't the type' for consistency. Also 'really young' is better as 'very young'.

× So I think I remember the first when the first time when I started using a keyboard was when I was in year 9.

✓ So I think I remember the first time I started using a keyboard: it was when I was in Year 9.

Redundant 'the first when the first time when' is ungrammatical; simplify to 'the first time'. Capitalize 'Year 9' and restructure for clarity.

× So probably in year 9 I really learned how to type on a keyboard.

✓ So probably in Year 9 I learned how to type on a keyboard.

Remove redundant 'really' which weakens formality and capitalize 'Year 9'. Present tense issue: original used past 'learned' which is correct; only stylistic cleanup applied.

× I think you would probably improve your typing through regular practice or obviously through time because for example, I did a lot of lot of school assignments every day which forced me to type frequently, so I had to get in touch with hyper more frequently which in.

✓ I think you can probably improve your typing through regular practice and, over time, because I did a lot of school assignments every day which forced me to type frequently.

Several issues: 'would probably' is conditional; 'can probably' or 'will probably' fits better for general advice. Remove duplicated 'lot of'. 'Get in touch with hyper' is meaningless—likely intended 'use a computer' or 'type more frequently'; clarified by removing the fragment 'get in touch with hyper' and trailing 'which in'. Also cleaned sentence structure and punctuation.