Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, give one specific reason with a linking word, and avoid grammatical errors. Reduce redundancy and keep to 2–3 sentences. For example, use correct verb forms and articles, and say what you mean clearly (e.g. "I prefer handwriting because...").

예시: I prefer handwriting. For example, I keep a daily diary on paper because writing by hand helps me remember events better and it feels personal.

제안: Give a direct answer first, then a clear supporting detail. Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases. Explain what you type and how often, and correct word choice (e.g. 'practice' instead of 'exercise'). Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words if needed.

예시: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day. I practice by writing emails and short texts, which helps improve my speed and accuracy.

제안: Start with a clear time reference, then give one or two specific details. Fix grammar (past tense, articles) and use linking words to make it coherent. Avoid repeating the same idea. For example, say when and describe the lessons briefly.

예시: I learned to type in primary school when we had computer classes. The teacher showed us basic typing techniques and we practiced using simple exercises on desktops.

제안: Answer directly and provide a specific method and frequency, with a linking word to explain the benefit. Use correct prepositions and verb forms. Keep it concise and avoid 'I think' if you are certain.

예시: I improve my typing by writing essays on my laptop every day, which helps increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting, although nowadays phone and laptop is popular, but for me write down the daily diary is a nice hobby to keep the memories.

✓ I prefer handwriting, although nowadays phones and laptops are popular, but for me writing a daily diary is a nice hobby to keep memories.

Problems: (1) 'phone and laptop is popular' — subject is plural so verb should be 'are' and the nouns should be plural 'phones and laptops' (Grammar Problem Type IDs 1 and 27). (2) 'write down the daily diary' — incorrect verb form and article: use the gerund 'writing' and the indefinite article 'a' with 'daily diary' (Grammar Problem Type IDs 8 and 22). (3) 'the memories' — usually 'memories' without 'the' is more natural here (Article errors 22). Suggestion: make subjects and verbs agree in number, use gerund when describing a hobby, and choose appropriate articles ('a' for one diary, omit 'the' before plural abstract noun 'memories').

× Umm, I usually type on laptop keyboard for exercise. My uh, typing experience and speed for the Ayers text.

✓ Umm, I usually type on a laptop keyboard for practice. My typing experience and speed are for the Ayer text.

Problems: (1) 'on laptop keyboard' needs an article: 'on a laptop keyboard' (Article errors 22) and 'for exercise' is unnatural; use 'for practice' (Incorrect use of prepositions 11). (2) 'My uh, typing experience and speed for the Ayers text.' is a fragment missing a verb and the noun is unclear; add 'are' to link subject and complement and correct proper noun spelling if needed (Sentence without a verb 23 and Subject-verb agreement 27). Suggestion: include articles before singular countable nouns, choose appropriate prepositions, and ensure a verb completes the sentence; clarify the text name 'Ayer' if required.

× I let it. When I'm in the primary school, we have a courses, computer courses, which is teach us how to tap and how to use the computer.

✓ I learned it when I was in primary school; we had computer courses, which taught us how to type and how to use the computer.

Problems: (1) Tense inconsistency: 'I let it' is incorrect; the past tense 'I learned it' or 'I learned' fits the question asking when (Past tense issue ID 5). (2) 'When I'm in the primary school' should be past: 'when I was in primary school' (Present tense issue 6 vs Past tense 5). (3) 'we have a courses' — plural/article error: use 'we had computer courses' (Singular and plural issue 1 and Article errors 22). (4) 'which is teach us' — wrong tense and agreement; use 'which taught us' (Past tense issue 5 and Subject-verb agreement 27). (5) 'how to tap' — incorrect verb: 'type' is correct (Verb form ID 8/9). Suggestion: use past tense throughout when describing past learning, match plural nouns with correct articles, and use correct verb forms ('taught', 'type').

× I think it's a nice experience for me. I learned how to type on computer and laptops.

✓ I think it was a nice experience for me. I learned how to type on computers and laptops.

Problems: (1) Tense consistency: original earlier sentence was past; use past 'it was a nice experience' (Past tense issue 5). (2) 'type on computer and laptops' mixes singular and plural and misses an article: use plural 'computers and laptops' or 'a computer and a laptop' (Singular and plural issue 1 and Article errors 22). Suggestion: keep tense consistent when reflecting past experiences and match number between nouns; use plural for general categories ('computers and laptops').

× I think I improve my typing on writing essays on the laptop keyboard every day.

✓ I think I improve my typing by writing essays on the laptop keyboard every day.

Problems: (1) Use of preposition: 'on writing essays' is incorrect; use 'by writing essays' to show means (Incorrect use of prepositions 11). (2) 'improve my typing on writing' — gerund 'writing' is fine but must follow correct preposition; ensure article 'the' before 'laptop keyboard' is acceptable but 'on the laptop keyboard' is correct (Article errors 22). Suggestion: use 'by + -ing' to express how you improve a skill, and keep articles consistent for specific objects.