Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and use clearer phrasing. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons. Avoid repetition and vague phrases (e.g., “more emotional emotions”). Use linking words like “however” to contrast preferences.

예시: I prefer typing for most tasks because it’s faster and more convenient. However, when writing a personal letter I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and sincere, showing extra effort.

제안: Clarify the sentence and remove hesitations. Give a concise topic sentence, then a specific reason. Avoid fillers and correct grammar (e.g., “I have AI have my job” unclear).

예시: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because my job involves writing reports and emails. Using a laptop lets me work flexibly from different locations.

제안: Organize the answer chronologically and avoid contradictory statements. Start with a clear statement about when you learned, then give specific details (age, context). Remove redundant phrases and correct grammar.

예시: I first learned touch-typing in primary school when we had computer classes. Later, I practiced more online typing lessons to improve my speed and accuracy.

제안: Give a clear method and one or two specific strategies. Avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to show steps or examples of practice methods.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing tests and timed exercises. I also focus on accuracy by slowing down initially and using keyboard-training software to correct bad habits.

× I prefer typing because my handwritten is bad, but I do think if I want to write a letter, handwriting is so much better.

✓ I prefer typing because my handwriting is bad, but I do think if I want to write a letter, handwriting is much better.

The phrase 'my handwritten' incorrectly uses an adjective form instead of the noun 'handwriting' (pronoun/possessive error). Also 'so much better' is acceptable but 'much better' is more natural. Suggest using the noun 'handwriting' and keep comparative adverb as 'much better.'

× It is with more emotional emotions and yeah it feels more serious.

✓ It is more emotional and it feels more serious.

The phrase 'with more emotional emotions' is redundant and ungrammatical; 'emotional' already describes the noun. Remove redundancy and reorder: 'It is more emotional.' Also replace the casual 'yeah' with 'and' for a clearer sentence. Suggest saying 'It is more emotional and it feels more serious.'

× I do type on a laptop keyboard everyday because I have AI have my job and I I have to type a lot for my work.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because of my job, and I have to type a lot for work.

Use 'every day' (two words) for frequency. The phrase 'I have AI have my job' is unclear and likely a mistake; interpret as 'because of my job.' 'For work' is more natural than 'for my work.' Remove duplicated 'I.' Suggest: 'I type on a laptop keyboard every day because of my job, and I have to type a lot for work.'

× To be honest, I didn't learn because I type English most of the time so I don't have to learn.

✓ To be honest, I didn't learn formally because I type in English most of the time, so I didn't have to learn.

Tense inconsistency: 'didn't learn' (past) should match reasoning. 'I type English' needs preposition 'in.' Also 'don't have to learn' mixes present with past; change to 'didn't have to learn' to keep past perspective. Suggest: 'I didn't learn formally because I type in English most of the time, so I didn't have to learn.'

× But I used to learn about how to type in type on keyboard in Chinese.

✓ But I used to learn how to type on a keyboard in Chinese.

Remove redundant 'about' and duplicate 'type in type.' Use 'on a keyboard' for correct preposition. Keep 'in Chinese' to indicate language. Suggest: 'I used to learn how to type on a keyboard in Chinese.'

× I used to learn it when I was in primary school and also I learned it learned that on Internet.

✓ I learned it when I was in primary school, and I also learned it on the Internet.

Redundant 'used to' then 'learned' is acceptable but keep consistent past tense: 'I learned it when I was in primary school.' Fix duplication 'learned it learned that' and use 'on the Internet' (include article 'the'). Suggest: 'I learned it when I was in primary school, and I also learned it on the Internet.'

× I would say practice makes perfect if you type more than you type faster.

✓ I would say practice makes perfect: the more you type, the faster you become.

The original comparative structure is incorrect. Use the correlative comparative 'the more... the faster...' and use 'become' to show change. Also 'practice makes perfect' is fine but needs punctuation. Suggest: 'Practice makes perfect: the more you type, the faster you become.'

× The more you type, the faster you type.

✓ The more you type, the faster you type (but better: 'The more you type, the faster you become').

Repeating 'type' in both clauses is grammatical but stylistically poor; it is clearer to change the second verb to 'become' or 'get' to show improvement. Suggest using 'the faster you become' for natural phrasing.

× Actually I would say.

✓ Actually, I would say that practice makes perfect.

This sentence is a fragment lacking an object or complement. Add what you would say to complete the sentence. Suggest: 'Actually, I would say that practice makes perfect.'