Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler words and incorrect constructions (e.g., "I'm always don't use" → "I usually don't use"). Use linking words like "however" to contrast English and Korean.

예시: I prefer handwriting for English but typing for Korean. For example, I find handwriting helps me think more clearly in English, whereas in Korean I type quickly on a computer because I grew up using keyboards.

제안: Open with a direct answer (desktop/laptop/both), then give a concise reason and timeline. Avoid awkward phrases like "forced to" and unclear expressions such as "situation after company." Use linking words like "but" and "recently" correctly and keep sentences short.

예시: I usually type on a desktop at work, but recently I've been using a laptop at home. Since my company allowed remote work, I've been practising laptop typing every day to get more comfortable.

제안: Give a clear timeframe and a concise description of where and how you learned. Remove hesitations and redundant phrases. Use linking words like "however" to contrast and include a specific detail (age or year) if possible.

예시: I learned to type in English when I was a teenager at an English academy. The teacher used desktop typing games to teach touch-typing, which helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

제안: Start with a clear method and give concrete practices. Avoid absolute statements like "no skills or ways"; instead, recommend effective techniques and give a brief example of your own practice. Reduce fillers and correct grammar ("teach how to type" not "teaching how to type it").

예시: I improve my typing through daily practice and targeted exercises. For instance, I practise 20 minutes a day on accuracy drills, use online typing tests to track speed, and taught my sister basic touch-typing techniques to reinforce my own skills.

× Umm it depends.

✓ Umm, it depends.

Missing comma after the interjection 'Umm' for natural pause and clarity; insert a comma to improve sentence flow.

× I'm not really used to typing in English so and when it comes to English I prefer to hand write.

✓ I'm not really used to typing in English, so when it comes to English I prefer to handwrite.

Redundant conjunction 'and' and incorrect spacing in 'hand write'. Remove 'and' and use 'handwrite' as one verb; add a comma before 'so' to join clauses correctly.

× But in Korean I'm very good at typing so I'm always don't use pen or paper, just type it on the computer.

✓ But in Korean I'm very good at typing, so I always don't use a pen or paper; I just type on the computer.

Incorrect placement of 'don't' with 'always' and missing article 'a' before 'pen'; use 'I always don't use' is unnatural — better: 'I don't always use' or if meaning is 'I never use', use 'I never use a pen or paper'. Punctuation adjusted for clarity.

× Yeah, obviously I work on the office job, so I am forced to type on a desktop every day.

✓ Yeah, obviously I work in an office job, so I am forced to type on a desktop every day.

Incorrect preposition 'on' with 'office job' and unnecessary definite article 'the'. Use 'in an office job' to indicate employment context.

× But these days recently I need to work from home because of my situation after company.

✓ But recently I need to work from home because of my situation after leaving the company.

Redundant adverbs 'these days recently' — use one. Phrase 'situation after company' is unclear; likely 'after leaving the company' to indicate a change in employment.

× So yeah, these days I try to get used to the typing on the laptop.

✓ So yeah, these days I am trying to get used to typing on the laptop.

'Try to get used to' is better expressed as progressive 'am trying to get used to' for an ongoing adjustment; remove 'the' before 'typing' as it's uncountable here.

× Umm, I don't have any memories of learning how to type in Korean, but I can definitely remember the situation or experience of learning how to type in English.

✓ Umm, I don't have any memories of learning how to type in Korean, but I can definitely remember the experience of learning to type in English.

Wordy 'situation or experience' can be simplified to 'experience', and 'learning how to type' can be shortened to 'learning to type' for natural English.

× So I went to the English Academy and the teacher taught me how to type in with some typing games on the desktop.

✓ So I went to the English academy and the teacher taught me how to type using some typing games on the desktop.

Remove unnecessary preposition 'in' after 'type' and use 'using' to show method. Lowercase 'academy' unless it's a proper name.

× Umm, I think there is no skills or ways that you can improve your typing skills drastically.

✓ Umm, I think there are no skills or ways by which you can drastically improve your typing skills.

Subject-verb agreement: use 'there are' with plural 'skills or ways'. Also improve word order: place adverb 'drastically' before 'improve' or after 'can' for clarity.

× Just type it repetitively and regularly, then you will get the skills.

✓ Just practice typing repetitively and regularly, and then you will develop the skill.

'Type it' is unnatural; use 'practice typing'. 'Get the skills' is vague — 'develop the skill' or 'improve your skills' is clearer. Add conjunction 'and' for smoother transition.

× And yeah, so I have experience of teaching how to type it to my, umm, sister, so yeah.

✓ And yeah, so I have experience teaching my sister how to type, so yeah.

Incorrect preposition 'of' after 'experience' and wrong word order 'teaching how to type it to my sister'. Use 'experience teaching my sister how to type'. Remove unnecessary 'it' and extra commas.