Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid fillers (uh) and repetitive phrases. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "autocorrect", "more organized").

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more organized. For example, autocorrect and editing tools help me fix mistakes quickly, and digital notes are easier to store and search for later.

제안: Answer directly and clearly: begin with a brief yes/no statement, then explain concisely why. Avoid unclear phrasing ("talk to type") and unnecessary repetition. Give a specific frequency if possible.

예시: No, I don't type on a laptop every day because my schedule is very busy. Instead of messaging, I usually call my friends, so I only type occasionally when I need to send quick messages.

제안: Provide a clear time reference and simplify the sentence. Use linking words to show sequence and avoid grammatical errors. Focus on one or two specific details about how you learned.

예시: I learned to type in first grade during school computer classes. My teacher showed me the keyboard layout and practiced typing exercises with us, which helped me build basic skills quickly.

제안: Be specific about methods and results: start with a topic sentence, then describe particular activities (typing practice, apps, timed drills) and mention any improvement. Avoid vague phrases like "learning new vocab words" if not directly linked to typing speed/accuracy.

예시: I improve my typing by practising daily on my phone when messaging friends and using typing apps for drills. For example, I use a typing tutor app for 10 minutes each day to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing over the handwriting because, uh, due to the advanced technology, if we type wrong or our sense of expressing the idea is totally wrong, then there are features in the mobile phones to auto correct the spelling and to explain our situation more clearly and in organized way.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because, due to advanced technology, if we type something wrong or express an idea poorly, mobile phones have features that autocorrect spelling and help explain our meaning more clearly and in a more organized way.

The original has multiple issues: 'over the handwriting' is awkward and should be 'to handwriting' (article errors/word choice). The phrase 'the advanced technology' uses an unnecessary definite article; use 'advanced technology'. 'Type wrong' needs an object 'something' and 'our sense of expressing the idea is totally wrong' is unclear and wordy, so change to 'express an idea poorly'. 'Features in the mobile phones to auto correct' is unidiomatic; use 'mobile phones have features that autocorrect'. 'autocorrect' should be one word and 'in organized way' needs the article and adverb form: 'in a more organized way'. Suggestions: prefer concise, natural collocations, avoid unnecessary articles, and use correct compound words like 'autocorrect'.

× No, I do not type on laptop keyboard everyday because due to my busy schedule I have not enough time to talk to type or chat with my friends. So in order to interact with them, I usually communicate with them through the calls.

✓ No, I do not type on a laptop keyboard every day because, due to my busy schedule, I do not have enough time to text or chat with my friends. So to interact with them, I usually call them.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' (article error). 'everyday' is an adjective; use the adverb 'every day' (adverb form). 'I have not enough time' is nonstandard word order; use 'I do not have enough time' (sentence structure/tense). 'to talk to type' is unclear; likely intended 'to text' or 'to type messages' (word choice). 'communicate with them through the calls' is awkward; use 'call them' or 'through calls'. Suggestions: use correct articles, distinguish 'everyday' vs 'every day', use natural verbs like 'text' or 'call', and keep subject-verb order correct.

× When I was in the first standard in my school's computer classes are provided to each and every student and my teacher helped me to enhance my vocabulary and tell me the features about the keyboard by guiding me with proper and then I learn how to type.

✓ When I was in the first grade, my school's computer classes were provided to every student, and my teacher helped me improve my vocabulary and explained the keyboard features, then I learned how to type.

Problems: 'first standard' is nonstandard; use 'first grade' (word choice). 'computer classes are provided' mixes present tense with past context; use past passive 'were provided' (past tense issue). 'tell me the features' should be past 'explained' to match tense. 'by guiding me with proper and then I learn' is ungrammatical and mixes tenses; change to 'and explained the keyboard features, then I learned how to type.' Suggestions: maintain consistent past tense when describing past events, use standard terms like 'grade', and simplify sentence structure to avoid run-on sentences.

× I improve my typing by communicating with my friends on the daily basis on the mobile phone and learning the new vocab words from the social media like through the ChatGPT.

✓ I improve my typing by communicating with my friends daily on my mobile phone and by learning new vocabulary words from social media, for example using ChatGPT.

Issues: 'on the daily basis' is incorrect; use 'daily' or 'on a daily basis' (adverbial phrase). 'on the mobile phone' should be 'on my mobile phone' (pronoun/article). Parallel structure: when listing activities after 'by', keep parallel gerunds: 'by communicating... and by learning...' or both gerunds without repeating 'by'. 'the new vocab words' is awkward; use 'new vocabulary words' or 'new vocabulary'. 'from the social media like through the ChatGPT' is unidiomatic; use 'from social media, for example using ChatGPT'. Suggestions: keep parallel gerund forms, use correct determiners, and prefer natural collocations like 'mobile phone', 'vocabulary', and 'ChatGPT'.