Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more concise and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words and correct grammar. Avoid repetition and fillers like "you know."

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing because I was educated in a place without computers, so I’m very comfortable writing on paper. For example, throughout school I practiced cursive and neat note-taking, which makes handwriting faster and more accurate for me than typing.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add a concise reason using a linking word. Correct grammar (tenses and articles) and avoid redundant phrasing like "we didn't have and we don't have."

예시: I mainly type on a desktop at work because my office does not provide laptops. Therefore I use a desktop computer for all my daily tasks.

제안: Give a clear timeline in one or two sentences using correct past tenses and linking words. Be specific about when and how your skills improved, and avoid awkward phrasing.

예시: I first learned basic typing in grades 9 and 10 at school, but I wasn’t very skilled then. Later, after high school I took a computer course where I practiced regularly and significantly improved my typing ability.

제안: Provide a clear method and a specific example of practice. Use correct verb forms and linking words (for example, "because", "so", "therefore"). Avoid vague phrases like "made me perfect"; instead, describe measurable improvement.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing every day at work because I regularly enter records and reports on the desktop. For instance, typing the same forms repeatedly has increased both my speed and accuracy over time.

× I prefer the handwriting because you know, I'm very used to the do the handwriting from my schooling is because we didn't have any computer based and in our country we didn't have a computer.

✓ I prefer handwriting because, you know, I am very used to doing handwriting from my schooling since we did not have computers in our country.

Errors: unnecessary definite article 'the' with 'handwriting' and awkward verbs. Use 'handwriting' without 'the' when speaking generally (article error, ID 22). 'Used to do' should be 'used to doing' or 'used to + verb' (verb + -ing form, ID 8). 'Computer based' is incorrect; 'computers' plural is needed (singular/plural issue, ID 1). Also 'we didn't have any computer based' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'we did not have computers'. Suggestion: remove 'the', change 'to the do the handwriting' to 'to doing handwriting', and pluralize 'computer'.

× We just wrote on the paper.

✓ We just wrote on paper.

Using 'the paper' is unnecessary when speaking generally (article error, ID 22) and makes the sentence awkward (sentence structure error, ID 26). Use 'on paper' for a natural expression. Suggestion: drop 'the'.

× So we are very confident about the writing the paper.

✓ So we are very confident about writing on paper.

Incorrect use of the definite article 'the' before 'writing' and 'paper' (article error, ID 22) and awkward noun phrase 'the writing the paper'. Use the gerund 'writing' as the object and 'on paper' as the medium. Maintain present-tense general statement (present tense issue, ID 6).

× Even I have a very good handwriting, so I.

✓ I even have very good handwriting, so I...

Placement of 'even' is awkward; 'a very good handwriting' is incorrect because 'handwriting' is an uncountable noun here (article error, ID 22 and singular/plural issue, ID 1). Use 'very good handwriting' without 'a'. Also the sentence is incomplete; add ellipsis to indicate trailing off. Suggestion: remove 'a' and reposition 'even'.

× Actually I type in the computer or desktop because in my workplace we didn't have and we don't have a laptop.

✓ Actually, I type on a computer or desktop because at my workplace we did not have and still do not have a laptop.

Preposition 'in' is incorrect for using a computer; use 'on' (preposition error, ID 11). 'the computer or desktop' should be 'a computer or desktop' (article error, ID 22). Tense mix 'we didn't have and we don't have' is inconsistent; use past and present perfect or 'did not have and still do not have' to show continuity (present tense issue, ID 6 and past tense issue, ID 5). Suggestion: use 'type on', 'a computer', and 'did not have and still do not have'.

× So instead of the laptop we are using the desktop.

✓ So instead of a laptop, we use a desktop.

Article 'the laptop' is incorrect in this generic contrast; use 'a laptop' (article error, ID 22). Present continuous 'we are using' is odd for habitual action; simple present 'we use' fits better (present tense issue, ID 6). Suggestion: use 'a laptop' and 'we use'.

× I learned how to do on type of the keyboard from my the schooling when I was in the grade 9 and 10, but I didn't learn very much at that time.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard during my schooling when I was in grades 9 and 10, but I did not learn very much then.

Multiple errors: 'do on type of the keyboard' is incorrect word order and unnecessary 'do' (sentence structure error, ID 26). Preposition should be 'type on' (preposition error, ID 11). 'from my the schooling' uses wrong article (article error, ID 22); use 'during my schooling'. 'the grade 9 and 10' should be 'grades 9 and 10' (singular/plural issue, ID 1). 'at that time' can be 'then' for concision. Suggestion: use 'learned how to type on the keyboard during my schooling in grades 9 and 10'.

× When I finished my high school I went to go for the computer class and that time I learned very well how to use the keyboard.

✓ When I finished high school, I took a computer class and at that time I learned well how to use the keyboard.

'Finished my high school' is unnatural; use 'finished high school' (article error, ID 22). 'Went to go for the computer class' is redundant and unidiomatic (sentence structure error, ID 26); use 'took a computer class'. 'Learned very well' is awkward; 'learned well' or 'learned how to use the keyboard properly' is better (incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs, ID 13). Suggestion: replace with 'took a computer class' and 'learned how to use the keyboard properly'.

× I learned to from the keep practicing is because every day when I go to the work, I have to fulfill all my record and the my work in the computer and the desktop.

✓ I learned by keeping practice because every day when I go to work, I have to complete all my records and my work on the computer and desktop.

'Learned to from the keep practicing' is ungrammatical; use 'learned by keeping practice' or better 'I learned by practicing continuously' (verb + -ing form, ID 8). 'Go to the work' should be 'go to work' (article error, ID 22). 'Fulfill all my record' is wrong collocation; use 'complete all my records' or 'update my records' (sentence structure/word choice, ID 26). Use 'on the computer' not 'in the computer' (preposition error, ID 11). Suggestion: use 'I learned by practicing every day' and 'complete my records on the computer'.

× So I did the keep practicing and that practice makes me perfect.

✓ So I kept practicing, and that practice made me better.

'Did the keep practicing' is ungrammatical; use past simple 'kept practicing' for a past habitual action (verb -ing/form and past tense issues, ID 8 and 5). 'Makes me perfect' is unrealistic and nonnative; use 'made me better' or 'improved my skills' (incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs, ID 13). Suggestion: use 'kept practicing' and 'improved my skills' or 'made me better'.