Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, use correct verb forms, and add one clear reason with linking words. Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing (e.g., "typing in computer"). Focus on natural phrasing and limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer handwriting because it makes me feel more comfortable and confident. Moreover, since my typing skills are limited, I find it quicker and less stressful to write by hand for tasks and assignments.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, umm), and complete the thought. Use linking words if explaining why. Be specific (e.g., laptop, tablet) and finish the sentence clearly.

예시: I don't use a desktop every day; I usually type on a laptop. In my country, students often do assignments using simple programs, so a laptop is more convenient for my schoolwork.

제안: Start with a clear time reference and avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases (e.g., "when I was scared" or "write in my coffee"). Use linking words to connect background and result, and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I started learning to type when I was in grade eight after my parents bought me a new laptop. At first it was difficult, but I practiced regularly and gradually improved.

제안: Give a clear method and use correct grammar. Mention specific practices (online lessons, exercises, timed tests) and use linking words to show progression. Keep it concise and avoid filler words.

예시: At first typing was difficult because I lacked computer skills. However, with regular practice, online typing lessons, and timed exercises, I have become faster and more accurate.

× I would say I will prefer handwriting because I feel more comfortable and confident by writing with my own hand instead of typing in computer and as I don't have a good typing skill I would prefer handwriting to do any tasks or assignment.

✓ I would say I prefer handwriting because I feel more comfortable and confident writing by hand instead of typing on a computer, and since I don't have good typing skills I prefer handwriting for tasks or assignments.

This sentence contains multiple related grammar issues: incorrect modal/tense combination ('would say I will prefer' is awkward), incorrect verb form and preposition use ('by writing with my own hand' -> 'writing by hand', 'typing in computer' -> 'typing on a computer'), article and count noun errors ('a good typing skill' -> 'good typing skills'), and parallel preference repetition. Suggestions: use 'I would say I prefer' (simple present for habitual preference), use 'writing by hand', use preposition 'on' with 'computer', use plural 'skills' for ability, and keep consistent phrasing 'I prefer handwriting for tasks or assignments.' This improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Well, every day I don't use a desktop or laptop umm, so that, uh, I really, uh, type on laptop uh, because, uh, in my country I uh, do my assignment in or copy with paint, so I use my.

✓ I don't use a desktop or laptop every day; I usually type on a laptop. In my country I do my assignments or copy work using Paint, so I use my laptop for that.

Errors include incorrect word order ('every day I don't use' is acceptable but less natural than 'I don't use...every day'), missing articles ('type on laptop' -> 'type on a laptop'), sentence fragments and omissions ('so I use my.'), and unclear verb/noun choices ('do my assignment in or copy with paint' -> 'do my assignments or copy work using Paint'). Suggestions: reorder to natural English, add article 'a', complete the final noun ('laptop'), and use 'assignments' plural and 'using Paint' to show the tool.

× So usually when I was scared, I used to write in my coffee. But umm, later with the growing technology, when I was in grade 8, uh, I was introduced to a new laptop by my parents. So I started to learn typing at that time.

✓ When I was younger, I used to write in my notebook. Later, with advancing technology, when I was in grade 8 my parents bought me a new laptop, and I started to learn how to type then.

Problems: 'when I was scared' is likely incorrect word choice for age ('younger'), 'write in my coffee' is nonsensical and likely meant 'write in my notebook'—this is a word choice error, and passive 'I was introduced to a new laptop by my parents' is grammatical but unnatural; 'my parents bought me a new laptop' is clearer. Also 'learn typing' should be 'learn how to type'. Suggestions: replace incorrect words with intended nouns, use active voice for clarity, and use 'learn how to type' for idiomatic expression.

× Uh, initially it was really difficult for me to do typing because, uh, I don't have a, uh, good computer skills.

✓ Initially it was really difficult for me to type because I didn't have good computer skills.

Errors: 'to do typing' is unidiomatic; use 'to type'. Tense inconsistency: talking about past difficulty requires past tense 'didn't have' rather than 'don't have'. Article and number: 'a good computer skills' mixes singular article with plural noun—use 'good computer skills' without 'a'. Suggestions: use past tense and correct noun form: 'It was difficult for me to type because I didn't have good computer skills.'

× But after with my consistent, uh, learning and practicing, typing has become a more convenient and fast then which is used to be in the past.

✓ But after consistent learning and practice, typing has become more convenient and faster than it used to be in the past.

Problems: unnecessary 'after with', word form issues ('practicing' -> 'practice' to parallel 'learning' or use 'practising'), comparative forms incorrect ('a more convenient and fast' should be 'more convenient and faster'), and word order 'then which is used to be in the past' is incorrect; correct is 'than it used to be'. Suggestions: remove filler words, keep parallel noun forms ('learning and practice' or 'learning and practising'), use comparative adjectives 'more convenient and faster', and use 'than it used to be' to compare present and past.