Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammatical errors; start with a clear topic sentence and add one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid hesitation and use correct word forms (e.g., 'childhood').

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing because I grew up writing by hand. Moreover, handwriting feels more personal and helps me remember information better.

제안: Give a direct answer naming desktop or laptop, remove hesitations and explain briefly why. Use a linking word to connect the reason and correct awkward phrasing (e.g., 'necessary in today's world').

예시: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I use a laptop for work. Also, typing is essential in today's workplace, so I use it constantly.

제안: Provide a clear time reference and one specific detail about how you learned. Avoid vague phrases and incorrect verbs (use 'taught' not 'touched' and remove repeated phrases).

예시: I learned to type in primary school during computer classes when I was about eight. My teacher taught us basic typing exercises and we practiced daily on simple programs.

제안: Give a concise structured answer: topic sentence plus one or two specific methods with linking words. Remove fillers and use correct form ('every day').

예시: I improve my typing mainly by regular practice. For example, I use online typing exercises and try to type emails and reports daily to build speed and accuracy.

× Well, to be honest, I do like the handwriting more because I'm very familiar with it, especially in my childrenhood.

✓ Well, to be honest, I prefer handwriting because I am very familiar with it, especially in my childhood.

Use 'prefer handwriting' instead of 'do like the handwriting more' for natural expression; 'in my childhood' is the correct prepositional phrase, not 'in my childrenhood'. Also avoid contraction mix; use 'I am' for clarity. Common improvement: say 'I prefer handwriting' and 'in my childhood.'

× Uh, uh, I think, uh, uh, I type on the computer keyboard every day. Uh, especially when I work at my company, it's, uh, necessary scale in today.

✓ I type on a computer keyboard every day, especially when I work at my company; it is necessary nowadays.

Replace 'the computer keyboard' with 'a computer keyboard' when speaking generally (article error/usage). 'It's, uh, necessary scale in today' is ungrammatical; 'necessary nowadays' conveys the intended meaning. Also remove filler words. Suggestion: use 'a computer keyboard' and 'necessary nowadays.'

× Well, I think it happened in my primary school, in the computer classes I think. So at that time my teacher touched me this scale.

✓ I learned in primary school during computer classes. At that time my teacher showed me this method.

'Happened' is awkward; use 'I learned' for acquiring a skill. 'My teacher touched me this scale' is incorrect—'touched me' is wrong verb choice and 'this scale' unclear; likely meant 'showed me this method' or 'introduced me to it.' Suggest saying 'my teacher showed me this method' or 'introduced me to it.'

× Uh, well, I think, umm, just, uh, to practice it, uh, and uh, uh, to use it in every day.

✓ Well, I think I just practice it and use it every day.

Do not use infinitives 'to practice' and 'to use' in this context; use simple present verbs 'practice' and 'use' to answer how you improve a skill. Also 'in every day' is incorrect; use 'every day.' Suggestion: 'I practice it and use it every day.'