Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise, correct grammar, and add a brief reason with linking words. Avoid repetition and use varied vocabulary (e.g., 'legible' instead of 'ugly').

예시: I prefer typing because my handwriting is often illegible, so typing ensures my messages are clear. Moreover, typing is faster and has spell-check, which helps me avoid mistakes.

제안: Give a clear, grammatically correct statement and add a short explanation. Use correct device names and avoid vague phrases. Use a linking phrase like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: I usually type on my iPad at work because we don't have desktops or laptops there, and the touchscreen is convenient for quick messages.

제안: Provide a clear time reference with correct tense, then briefly explain the current situation with linking words. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: I learned to type in high school, and I used to practice regularly. However, I've been using an iPad at work recently, so my touch-typing skills have become a bit rusty.

제안: Give a specific, structured answer: state whether you try to improve, then list 1–2 concrete methods using linking words. Correct grammar and avoid vague phrases like 'I don't have any idea'.

예시: I try to improve my typing by practicing with online typing exercises and using typing apps to increase speed and accuracy. In addition, I focus on maintaining good posture and regular short practice sessions to build confidence.

× I prefer typing because my handwriting is so very ugly.

✓ I prefer typing because my handwriting is very ugly.

Using both 'so' and 'very' together is redundant; choose one intensifier. Use 'very ugly' or 'so ugly' rather than 'so very ugly'. Suggestion: say 'very ugly' or 'so ugly'.

× Even doctor can't understand my writing.

✓ Even the doctor can't understand my writing.

A singular countable noun such as 'doctor' generally needs an article. Also 'Even the doctor' is idiomatic when referring to a specific reader. Use the definite article 'the'.

× So I prefer typing.

✓ Therefore, I prefer typing.

Beginning a sentence with 'So' is informal; 'Therefore' or 'So,' with a comma is more appropriate in formal responses. Suggestion: use 'Therefore' or 'So,' with punctuation.

× Typing is easy and it has an auto correction, that's all.

✓ Typing is easy and it has an auto-correction feature; that's all.

Use the hyphenated noun 'auto-correction' or 'autocorrect' and add 'feature' for clarity. Also use a semicolon or separate sentences instead of a comma splice.

× I usually use an iPod.

✓ I usually use an iPad.

Context later mentions iPad; if the student meant iPad, correct the noun. If they truly meant iPod, no grammar error, but ensure consistent vocabulary. Suggestion: use the correct device name.

× We don't have desktop or laptop in our workplace.

✓ We don't have a desktop or a laptop in our workplace.

Countable singular nouns require articles: 'a desktop' and 'a laptop'. Also include articles before each item.

× Typing on a iPod as much as much easier for me.

✓ Typing on an iPad is much easier for me.

Use the correct article: 'an' before a vowel sound, but here 'iPad' begins with a vowel sound so 'an iPad' would be grammatical; better restructure: 'Typing on an iPad is much easier for me.' Also remove redundant 'as much as' and correct device to 'iPad' for consistency.

× As far as I remember, that's when I am in high school and now I'm slowly forgetting it because I don't have a laptop and a desktop in my workplace.

✓ As far as I remember, that was when I was in high school, and now I'm slowly forgetting it because I don't have a laptop or a desktop in my workplace.

Mixing present and past tenses is inconsistent. Use past tense 'was' for past events. Use 'or' between two alternatives and maintain tense consistency.

× I only type on my iPad.

✓ I only type on my iPad.

This sentence is correct; no change needed. Keep device name consistent.

× I don't have any idea on improving my typing but as much as I can and typing as fast as I could and it's on and it's depend on my confidence.

✓ I don't have a clear idea how to improve my typing; I practice as much as I can and try to type as fast as possible, and it depends on my confidence.

The original is run-on and ungrammatical. 'Have any idea on' should be 'have a clear idea how to'. Use parallel structure: 'practice as much as I can' and 'try to type as fast as possible.' Use 'depends on' (present tense) rather than 'it's depend on'. Also replace informal fragments with complete clauses.