Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid awkward phrasing and grammar errors (e.g. 'electronic form' → 'electronic forms', 'it could correct' → 'it corrects').

예시: I prefer typing. Firstly, it’s faster and makes editing easier because word processors correct typos and let me rearrange sentences quickly. Secondly, many assignments must be submitted electronically, so typing is more practical.

제안: Use a clear topic sentence and fix word choice and grammar. Avoid redundancy and capitalize correctly. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about time or routine.

예시: I type on my laptop every day. As a postgraduate with a heavy workload, I often edit my papers and finish assignments on my laptop, so I frequently work in the library late at night.

제안: Give a direct answer first (time), then one brief detail. Correct phrases: 'hunt and peck' not 'hunt and pack'; 'touch-typing' not 'touching type'. Avoid contradicting verbs ("mastered" vs "never mastered").

예시: I learned basic typing in primary school during a science class when I was about ten. However, I still use the 'hunt and peck' method rather than touch-typing, so my speed remains slow.

제안: Answer directly and describe one specific method with clear linking words. Fix grammar and word choice (e.g. 'tie'→'type', 'improve the practice more enjoyable'→'make practice more enjoyable').

예시: I improve my typing with interactive apps and games. For example, a typing game requires you to type the correct words to hit targets, which makes practice enjoyable and helps increase both my speed and accuracy.

× With advancement of technology, sometimes we have to upload electronic form of assignment to school, which means that it's easier and faster to use typing since it could correct the mistake and move around the sentence immediately.

✓ With the advancement of technology, sometimes we have to upload an electronic form of an assignment to school, which means that it's easier and faster to type since it can correct mistakes and move words around in a sentence immediately.

Missing and incorrect articles: use 'the advancement' for a specific trend and 'an electronic form' and 'an assignment' for singular countable nouns. 'Use typing' is unnatural; use the verb 'type'. 'Could' suggests possibility but 'can' is better for capability. 'The mistake' should be plural 'mistakes' when speaking generally. 'Move around the sentence' is awkward; 'move words around in a sentence' is clearer.

× With advancement of technology, sometimes we have to upload electronic form of assignment to school, which means that it's easier and faster to use typing since it could correct the mistake and move around the sentence immediately.

✓ With the advancement of technology, sometimes we have to upload an electronic form of an assignment to school, which means that it's easier and faster to type since it can correct mistakes and move words around in a sentence immediately.

Verb form consistency: 'could' is not the best choice when describing a typical capability of typing tools; 'can' (third person singular) matches 'it' and expresses general ability. Also adjust surrounding wording for naturalness.

× So I keep typing in the library late into night every day.

✓ So I keep typing in the library late into the night every day.

Missing definite article: use 'the night'. Verb 'keep typing' is fine; only article error fixed. The phrase 'late into night' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'late into the night'.

× Yeah, as a postgraduate with heavy workload, I have to type on my laptop in order to Polish my paper and complement my assignment.

✓ Yeah, as a postgraduate with a heavy workload, I have to type on my laptop in order to polish my paper and complete my assignment.

'Polish' and 'complement' were incorrectly capitalized or wrong word choice: 'Polish' should be lowercase 'polish'. 'Complement' (to add to) is incorrect; 'complete' (finish) fits the context. Also add article 'a' before 'heavy workload'.

× Yeah, as a postgraduate with heavy workload, I have to type on my laptop in order to Polish my paper and complement my assignment.

✓ Yeah, as a postgraduate with a heavy workload, I have to type on my laptop in order to polish my paper and complete my assignment.

Missing article 'a' before 'heavy workload' and incorrect word choice 'complement' → 'complete'. 'Polish' should be lowercase. These are article and word-choice errors.

× Wow, I still use the hunt and pack method and never master the touching type so my speed is quite slow, but I vividly recall that I mastered the skills of how to type during a science class in my primary school.

✓ Wow, I still use the hunt-and-peck method and have never mastered touch typing, so my speed is quite slow, but I vividly recall that I learned typing skills during a science class at my primary school.

Multiple issues: idiom correction 'hunt-and-peck' and noun form 'touch typing' (not 'touching type'). Use present perfect 'have never mastered' to indicate a continuing state. 'Mastered the skills of how to type' is wordy; 'learned typing skills' is clearer. Use 'at my primary school' for correct preposition.

× Wow, I still use the hunt and pack method and never master the touching type so my speed is quite slow, but I vividly recall that I mastered the skills of how to type during a science class in my primary school.

✓ Wow, I still use the hunt-and-peck method and have never mastered touch typing, so my speed is quite slow, but I vividly recall that I learned typing skills during a science class at my primary school.

Tense consistency: 'never master' should be present perfect 'have never mastered' because it refers to an experience continuing up to now. Also 'mastered' in the past for learning is fine but 'learned' is more natural for acquiring skills.

× in order to Polish my paper and complement my assignment.

✓ in order to polish my paper and complete my assignment.

No preposition change needed inside phrase, but 'complement' was wrong word; replaced with 'complete'. Also 'Polish' capitalization removed.

× I vividly recall that I mastered the skills of how to type during a science class in my primary school.

✓ I vividly recall that I learned typing skills during a science class at my primary school.

Use 'at' with 'my primary school' rather than 'in'. Also simplify 'mastered the skills of how to type' to 'learned typing skills' for naturalness.

× In this game we have to tie the correct answer to hit the targets, which improve the practice more enjoyable and improve both the speed and accuracy.

✓ In this game we have to type the correct answers to hit the targets, which makes the practice more enjoyable and improves both speed and accuracy.

Multiple corrections: 'tie' is wrong verb; should be 'type'. Use plural 'answers' if multiple, or 'the correct answer' depending on context—'answers' fits with plural targets. Add 'makes' and 'improves' for correct subject-verb agreement. Remove extra article 'the' before 'speed' and 'accuracy' is fine. 'Improve the practice more enjoyable' is ungrammatical; use 'makes the practice more enjoyable'.