Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap daha net ve daha akıcı olmalı; gereksiz tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimeler (uh, um) azaltılmalı. Önce açık bir konu cümlesi verin (ör. “I prefer handwriting.”), sonra nedeni kısa ve spesifik örnekle destekleyin. 3-4 cümle ile sınırlı kalın ve bağlaçlar (because, so, for example) kullanın.

예시: I prefer handwriting because it helps me think more clearly and remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I can organize ideas in diagrams and retain them longer. Therefore, I usually choose a notebook over a laptop for studying.

제안: Cevap doğrudan soruya yanıt vermeli ve dilbilgisi hataları düzeltilmelidir. ‘I don't prefer’ yerine ‘I don't usually type’ gibi doğru yapı kullanılmalı. Nedeni net ve spesifik olmalı; örnek veya bağlaçla açıklama ekleyin. Dolgu kelimeleri çıkarın.

예시: I don't usually type on a desktop or laptop every day because my work and studies rarely require it. If I have to type something important, I tend to delay it and often leave it until the last minute.

제안: Cevap tarih/veri veremiyorsa daha net ifadeler kullanın ve tekrarları kaldırın. İlk cümlede doğrudan cevap verin (e.g. “I learned to type in first grade.”), sonra belirsizliği veya tercih sebebini ekleyin. 2-3 cümlede kalın ve bağlaç kullanın.

예시: I learned to type when I was in first grade, though I can't remember the exact year. However, typing hasn't become my preferred method because I usually prefer writing by hand for studying.

제안: Cevap daha spesifik stratejiler içermeli; belirsiz ve hatalı gramer (e.g. “be a experience”) düzeltilmeli. Nasıl geliştiğinizi somut örneklerle açıklayın (pratik yapmak, çevrimiçi uygulamalar, hız ve doğruluk ölçümü). Bağlaçlarla mantıklı akış sağlayın.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing exercises and by setting short daily goals for speed and accuracy. For example, I use a typing tutor app for 15 minutes each day and track my progress to reduce errors.

× I prefer handwriting because I'm a traditional person in this kind of things, uh, such as writing and, uh, speaking.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I'm a traditional person when it comes to things like writing and speaking.

The original uses the incorrect phrase 'in this kind of things' and awkward pronoun/reference. Use 'when it comes to' plus 'things like' for natural reference. Also remove filler words. Suggestion: practice set phrases for expressing preferences and reduce fillers.

× I prefer, uh, what's is traditional for me, uh.

✓ I prefer what is traditional for me.

The original contains an ungrammatical sequence 'what's is'. Remove contraction plus extra verb to form 'what is'. Also avoid fillers. Suggestion: say the clause in full: 'what is traditional for me.'

× No, I'm not prefer, uh, type on the desktop or laptop keyboard every day because I have no responsibility about it.

✓ No, I don't prefer to type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day because I have no responsibility for it.

Use 'do not prefer' for negation with I (not 'I'm not prefer') and use the infinitive 'to type'. Preposition should be 'for' when referring to responsibility. Suggestion: learn auxiliary negation (do/does) and correct verb forms after modal/auxiliary.

× Umm, but if I have a responsibility about it, I, uh, probably procrastinate.

✓ But if I have responsibility for it, I will probably procrastinate.

Conditional meaning requires a future/modal: 'I will probably procrastinate' is more accurate than present 'probably procrastinate' for a real future consequence. Also use 'responsibility for' not 'about'. Suggestion: practice first conditional structure: if + present, will + base verb.

× I I don't remember what's the exact date is, but probably in my first grade I had learned this skill.

✓ I don't remember the exact date, but I probably learned this skill in first grade.

Remove duplicated 'I' and incorrect 'what's the exact date is'. Use simple past 'learned' for a past event. 'Had learned' (past perfect) is unnecessary. Position 'in first grade' at end. Suggestion: use simple past for single past events and avoid redundant auxiliary verbs.

× But this is not necessary for me because I would prefer handwriting.

✓ But this was not necessary for me because I prefer handwriting.

Tense consistency: when referring to past learning, use past 'was not necessary'. Also 'would prefer' suggests conditional; use simple 'prefer' to state general preference. Suggestion: keep tense consistent when explaining past reasons for current habits.

× Probably more and more, uh, writing is improving your, uh, writing skills because, uh, when you accustomed to anything, you, uh, started to, uh, be a experience.

✓ Practicing writing more and more will improve your writing skills because when you become accustomed to something, you gain experience.

Multiple problems: 'writing is improving your writing skills' is awkward; use 'practicing writing... will improve'. 'When you accustomed' lacks auxiliary 'are' or 'become': use 'become accustomed'. 'Started to be a experience' is ungrammatical; use 'gain experience'. Also change second-person consistency. Suggestion: learn correct progressive and result structures: 'PracticING will improve...' and 'become accustomed to' and 'gain experience'.