Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more natural: begin with a direct topic sentence stating your preference in general, then give two concise reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear words (e.g. "harmony") and reduce redundancy. Keep to 2–4 sentences, with specific details (e.g. exams require speed; homework benefits from editing).

예시: I usually prefer handwriting for exams but typing for homework. For example, in timed tests I write by hand because I'm faster and don't risk technical problems; however, for assignments I type because it's easier to edit and check my work.

제안: Start with a clear single-sentence answer (desktop or laptop), then give one or two specific reasons with linking words and correct vocabulary. Fix grammar and word choice (e.g. 'too bulky' not 'too volumes'). Combine short fragments into full sentences.

예시: I type on my laptop keyboard every day because it's compact and easy to use. Also, the laptop is portable, whereas desktop computers are usually bulky and not convenient to move.

제안: Answer with a clear time frame then describe the learning method succinctly and correctly. Use proper grammar and avoid unclear phrases (e.g. '2 times is very helpful'). Explain specifically how the method helped your skill (e.g. finger placement, accuracy).

예시: I learned to type in primary school in a computer lab. Teachers used a color-coded system for finger placement, which improved my accuracy and helped me develop proper habits early on.

제안: Give a direct opening sentence about your main strategy, then add a specific practice routine and a concrete improvement result. Avoid vague phrases like 'computer stuff' and be careful with capitalization and connectors. Mention measurable outcomes (speed, accuracy).

예시: I improve my typing mainly by practicing regularly: I spend about one hour a day on typing exercises and online speed tests. As a result, my speed has increased and my accuracy has improved, which also makes me more patient when working on long documents.

× It depends on the situations I'm in.

✓ It depends on the situation I'm in.

'Depends on' requires a singular uncountable or general noun here; 'situation' is more natural and idiomatic in singular when referring to one's current context. Use 'situation' rather than 'situations' to match the general meaning.

× I'm a pretty slow typer so I mostly prefer harmony, especially when I'm taking an exam when they have a time limit so I need to write everything down quickly.

✓ I'm a pretty slow typer, so I mostly prefer handwriting, especially when I'm taking an exam that has a time limit and I need to write everything down quickly.

Multiple issues: 'handwriting' was intended rather than 'harmony' (word choice). Use a comma before 'so' to join clauses. Replace 'when they have a time limit' with 'that has a time limit' to correctly refer to 'exam' (relative clause). Keep verb forms consistent: 'I need to' fits present context.

× Whereas when I'm doing my homework I usually choose to type because I can learn typing during that.

✓ Whereas when I'm doing my homework, I usually choose to type because I can practice typing then.

Use a comma after the introductory 'Whereas when I'm doing my homework'. 'Learn typing during that' is awkward; 'practice typing then' or 'learn to type then' is clearer. 'Practice' is the correct verb collocation.

× I do my typing on my laptop every day and my laptop keyboard.

✓ I do my typing on my laptop every day using its keyboard.

Repeating 'my laptop' is redundant; combine ideas into one clause and use the possessive pronoun 'its' to refer to the laptop's keyboard.

× Very easy to use 'cause it's small and tidy.

✓ It is very easy to use because it's small and compact.

The original fragment lacks a clear subject; begin with 'It is'. Avoid colloquial 'cause' in formal correction; use 'because'. 'Tidy' is awkward for hardware; 'compact' is more appropriate.

× The laptop itself is portable as well, whereas desktop is too volumes.

✓ The laptop itself is portable as well, whereas the desktop is too bulky.

Use the article 'the' before 'desktop' when referring to a type. 'Too volumes' is incorrect; 'bulky' correctly describes large, heavy objects.

× Since primary school, we had a special computer classroom where we practiced our typing and our computer skills.

✓ Since primary school, we have had a special computer classroom where we practiced our typing and computer skills.

'Since' with a period continuing to the present requires present perfect 'have had'. However, if the classroom no longer exists, past tense 'we had' could be correct; here 'since' implies continuity so use present perfect. 'Our' before 'computer skills' is optional; removing makes it smoother.

× We especially given the task to learn how to type by giving each finger a color representing an area.

✓ We were especially given the task of learning how to type, with each finger assigned a color representing an area.

Passive voice needs auxiliary 'were' plus past participle 'given'. Use 'task of learning' rather than 'task to learn' for natural phrasing. 'Giving each finger a color' is better expressed as 'with each finger assigned a color'.

× 2 times is very helpful and thanks to that it helped me type.

✓ Practicing twice was very helpful, and thanks to that I improved my typing.

Use words rather than numeral '2 times' in this context and rephrase for clarity: 'practicing twice' or 'two practice sessions'. Match tense and subject: 'it helped me type' is vague; 'I improved my typing' specifies the result.

× You know what they say, practice makes perfect, So I try to spend one hour typing every day.

✓ You know what they say: practice makes perfect, so I try to spend one hour typing every day.

Use a colon after the proverb and a lowercase 'so' after the comma. Maintain punctuation to connect clauses correctly.

× Typing not only helps me work computer stuff, but also helps me increase my patience and my dedication.

✓ Typing not only helps me with computer-related tasks, but it also helps me increase my patience and dedication.

Add 'with' to create correct collocation 'helps me with computer-related tasks'. Insert 'it' after the second clause for parallel structure. Remove redundant 'my' before 'dedication' for conciseness.