Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và chính tả, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Nên mở rộng chi tiết cụ thể hơn (ví dụ: tốc độ, công cụ sửa lỗi, hoàn cảnh). Đồng thời rút ngắn để không quá 5 câu và dùng các liên từ phù hợp.

예시: I prefer typing because it is much faster and more convenient for long pieces of writing. For example, when I write essays I can reorganize paragraphs quickly and use spell-check to correct errors. Also, typing on a computer helps me save drafts and collaborate with classmates.

제안: Cải thiện: Tránh dùng từ không chính xác (ví dụ 'try' không phù hợp), sửa ngữ pháp và viết rõ ràng hơn. Thêm kết nối logic và một chi tiết cụ thể (thời lượng/ngữ cảnh) để câu trả lời giàu thông tin hơn.

예시: Yes, I type on my laptop every day for studying. I usually spend about two to three hours typing assignments and researching online. Because most coursework and online shopping require a computer, typing has become a daily habit for me.

제안: Cải thiện: Sửa nhiều lỗi chính tả và ngữ pháp (try → type, familiar → unfamiliar?; exactly → accurately; ties → type; case → keyboard). Cấu trúc câu cần rõ ràng: nêu thời điểm, quá trình và kết quả. Dùng liên từ để nối ý và duy trì tối đa 5 câu.

예시: I learned to type when I was in secondary school. At first I typed slowly because I was not familiar with the keyboard, but after regular practice I became much faster and more accurate. Now I can type comfortably without looking at the keyboard.

제안: Cải thiện: Tránh lặp từ 'try', sửa ngữ pháp ('help' → 'helps'), và đưa ra phương pháp cụ thể để cải thiện (ví dụ: bài tập gõ, tốc độ mục tiêu, phần mềm luyện gõ). Thêm liên từ để làm mạch lạc.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing every day, for example by doing typing exercises and timed tests. I also set small goals, like increasing my speed by 5 words per minute each month, and use online typing programs to track my progress.

× I prefer typing because it is much faster and easy for me, especially when I have to write a long easys or respond.

✓ I prefer typing because it is much faster and easier for me, especially when I have to write long essays or respond.

Using 'easy' is incorrect adverb/adjective form; 'easier' is comparative to match 'much faster'. 'Easys' is a misspelling and wrong plural form; correct plural is 'essays'. Use parallel structure 'write long essays or respond'. Suggestion: use comparative forms for comparisons and check spelling of nouns.

× I can also fix my mistakes quickly on the computer.

✓ I can also fix my mistakes quickly on the computer.

This sentence is correct; modal verb 'can' pairs with base verb 'fix'. No change needed. Suggestion: none.

× Yes, of course I try on my laptop everyday for my studies.

✓ Yes, of course I use my laptop every day for my studies.

Using 'try' is inappropriate for habitual action; 'use' correctly expresses regular activity. 'Everyday' as an adjective differs from 'every day' meaning each day; here 'every day' is correct. Suggestion: use 'use' for habitual actions and write 'every day' as two words in this context.

× Most of my homework and purchase need to be done on the computer, so typing has become a daily habit for me.

✓ Most of my homework and purchases need to be done on the computer, so typing has become a daily habit for me.

'Purchase' should be plural 'purchases' to match 'most of' and plural verb 'need'. Ensure noun forms agree with quantifiers. Suggestion: make nouns plural after 'most of' when referring to multiple items.

× I started learning to try when I was in secondary school.

✓ I started learning to type when I was in secondary school.

'try' is incorrect verb; intended verb is 'type'. Use simple past 'started' with infinitive 'to type' to describe past beginning of an action. Suggestion: use correct verb and infinitive form after 'started'.

× At first I tried quite slowly because I was familiar with the keyboard.

✓ At first I typed quite slowly because I was unfamiliar with the keyboard.

If the intended meaning is difficulty, use 'typed' (past) not 'tried', and 'unfamiliar' rather than 'familiar' to explain slowness. 'Tried quite slowly' is illogical. Suggestion: use accurate adjective 'unfamiliar' and past tense 'typed' for past habits.

× After practicing regular I become much faster and more exactly.

✓ After practicing regularly I became much faster and more accurate.

'Regular' should be the adverb 'regularly'. 'Become' should be past 'became' to match past timeframe. 'More exactly' is awkward; use 'more accurate' or 'more accurately' depending on structure; here 'more accurate' fits. Suggestion: use adverbs for verbs, match tense, and choose the correct comparative adjective.

× Now I can ties comfortably without looking at the case all the time.

✓ Now I can type comfortably without looking at the keys all the time.

'Ties' is wrong form; correct verb is 'type' base form after modal 'can'. 'Case' is wrong noun; intended word is 'keys'. Ensure verb form after modal is base form and use correct vocabulary. Suggestion: after modal verbs use base verb; check word choice for keyboard vocabulary.

× I try to type every day, like when I'm doing homework or chatting with friends online.

✓ I try to type every day, for example when I'm doing homework or chatting with friends online.

Original is mostly correct; changed 'like' to 'for example' for clearer, more formal expression. Tense and structure are appropriate. Suggestion: use 'for example' in formal speaking to introduce examples.

× The more I try, the better I get at it.

✓ The more I practice, the better I get at it.

'Try' is less precise here; 'practice' better expresses repeated action leading to improvement. Tense and comparative structure are correct. Suggestion: use 'practice' for habitual improvement contexts.

× I think just using my computer a lot help me improve.

✓ I think just using my computer a lot helps me improve.

Subject 'using my computer a lot' is a gerund phrase acting as subject; it requires the singular verb 'helps'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement when the subject is a gerund phrase; use third person singular verb form 'helps'.