Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct basic grammar (tense and articles), and add one specific reason or brief example. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas. Keep the answer to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more efficient. For example, I can edit and share documents quickly on my laptop, which gives me a sense of satisfaction.

제안: This answer is clear and relevant but slightly wordy and has minor unnatural phrasing. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid redundancy ("work at home" vs "at home"), and make examples concise. Use a linking word like "because" or "so" to show cause and effect.

예시: I usually type on a laptop every day because it is portable and convenient. For example, I write emails and work on school assignments on my laptop each morning and evening.

제안: Improve grammar and remove repetition. Give a clear timeline, one concise supporting detail, and finish sentences fully. Use linking words like "so" or "and then" to connect actions. Avoid repeating words and correct small errors (‘‘needed for homework’’ → ‘‘needed to complete homework’’).

예시: I learned to type at primary school when I was about ten years old because my class included basic computer lessons. We practiced typing exercises at school, and I continued using a simple typing program at home to complete homework.

제안: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific methods using linking words like "for example" or "also". Correct plural and verb forms ("keep practicing", "family"). Avoid repeating words.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing regularly and using online typing exercises. For example, I use practice websites and ask friends or family for tips when I encounter problems.

× I prefer typing because when I am typing I felt a sense I I think type is more easier and faster than writing, and when I was typing I felt a sense of satisfaction.

✓ I prefer typing because when I type I feel a sense of satisfaction. I think typing is easier and faster than writing.

Errors: inconsistent verb forms and unnecessary repetitions. 'When I am typing I felt' mixes present continuous with past tense; use present simple 'when I type I feel' for habitual actions. 'I I' is a repetition. 'type is more easier' is incorrect because 'more' plus comparative with -er is redundant; use 'easier' or 'more easy' (but 'easier' is correct). Also combine repeated idea 'I felt a sense' with 'a sense of satisfaction' and keep tense consistent. Suggestion: use present simple for habits, remove duplicates, and use correct comparative form 'easier'.

× Well, I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because it's convenient and I carry my laptop to work at home.

✓ Well, I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because it's convenient and I carry my laptop to work and home.

Error: unclear phrasing 'carry my laptop to work at home' mixes locations. This is a pronoun/phrase usage issue causing meaning confusion. Rephrase to 'carry my laptop to work and home' or 'carry my laptop between work and home' to clarify. Use parallel structure for locations.

× For example, I write emails and use local schoolwork on it in the morning and evenings, so I use it almost every day.

✓ For example, I write emails and do schoolwork on it in the mornings and evenings, so I use it almost every day.

Errors: 'use local schoolwork on it' is incorrect wording; 'do schoolwork on it' is the natural collocation. Also use 'in the morning and evenings' -> 'in the mornings and evenings' for habitual times. 'It' correctly refers to the laptop but verb 'do' is appropriate.

× Well, I learned to type on a keyboard when I was at primary school around 10 years old.

✓ Well, I learned to type on a keyboard at primary school when I was around 10 years old.

Word order and article use improved. 'When I was at primary school around 10 years old' is awkward; place 'around 10 years old' after 'when I was' or rephrase to 'when I was around 10 years old.' Keep past tense 'learned' is correct for a past event.

× My school had a basic computer class class class so we practiced typing exercises and I kept practicing at home because I needed for homework.

✓ My school had a basic computer class, so we practiced typing exercises, and I kept practicing at home because I needed to for my homework.

Problems: repetition 'class class class' and missing infinitive 'to' after 'needed.' Also add commas for clarity. 'Needed for homework' is incomplete; 'needed to for my homework' or better 'needed it for my homework' but 'needed to for my homework' inserted 'to' after 'needed' to show purpose. Suggestion: avoid repetitions, include necessary particles, and use clear pronouns.

× For example, I used a simple typing program and now I type every day for.

✓ For example, I used a simple typing program, and now I type every day.

Error: sentence ends with 'for' which is incomplete. Remove the stray preposition to complete the sentence. Keep tense contrast: 'used' (past) and 'now I type' (present) is appropriate for past habit leading to present habit.

× Well, I usually improve my typing through keeping practicing and I often ask my friends or my families if I meet some difficulties when I am typing.

✓ Well, I usually improve my typing by keeping practicing and I often ask my friends or my family if I meet difficulties when I am typing.

'through keeping practicing' is awkward; more natural is 'by keeping practicing' or better 'by practising regularly' (British) or 'by practicing regularly' (American). 'my families' is incorrect plural; use 'my family' or 'family members.' Also 'some difficulties' -> 'difficulties' is fine; remove 'when I am typing' optional. Suggestion: use 'by practising regularly' and singular 'family.'

× What's more, I often search search something I don't know online.

✓ What's more, I often search online for things I don't know.

Error: repeated word 'search search' and awkward word order 'search something I don't know online.' Correct order is 'search online for things I don't know.' Use plural 'things' for general reference. Suggestion: avoid accidental repetition and use natural preposition order 'search online for...'.