Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and clear. Start with a simple topic sentence stating your preference, avoid vague phrasing like "connecting" and contrast with concise reasons. Use one linking word to add a specific reason and an example. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing because it feels more natural and helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I retain ideas longer and can organize them more freely.

제안: Be concise and avoid repetition. Begin with a clear topic sentence (laptop), then add a specific reason and one brief supporting detail. Replace repeated phrases and use a linking word for coherence.

예시: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it’s more comfortable and portable. For instance, I can work anywhere in my home and the laptop layout suits my typing style.

제안: Answer directly with a clear time reference and then give a short specific detail about the learning context. Avoid informal words like "etcetera" and use past tense consistently. Use one linking word to add clarity.

예시: I learned to type when I was in sixth grade at school. During computer class, the teacher showed us proper fingering, how to use the mouse, and simple typing exercises.

제안: Be more natural and eliminate filler words like "uh" and awkward phrases such as "more faster." Start with a clear method (daily practice), then give two specific activities and a brief result. Use a linking word to connect reason and outcome.

예시: I improve my typing through daily practice; for example, I write reports and summaries regularly. As a result, my speed and confidence have increased.

× I feel like connecting is most preferable thing for me as it feels more natural whereas typing feels artificial for me.

✓ I feel that handwriting is the most preferable option for me, as it feels more natural, whereas typing feels artificial.

The sentence used 'connecting' incorrectly; the intended noun is 'handwriting'. 'Most preferable' is redundant—use 'the most preferable' or better 'the most preferable option' or simply 'prefer'. Word choice and article use were corrected and the sentence reworded for naturalness and grammatical accuracy. Suggestion: Use precise nouns (handwriting) and avoid redundant modifiers (most preferable -> most preferable option or simply 'prefer').

× I usually type on a laptop keyboard for my documents and everything because it feels more comfortable and easy to type in a laptop keyboard.

✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard for my documents and other things because it feels more comfortable and easier to type on a laptop keyboard.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'keyboard'; use 'on'. Also 'easy' should be the comparative form 'easier' to match the comparative sense. Replaced 'everything' with 'other things' for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'on' with keyboards and use comparative adjectives (easier) when comparing.

× I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in my 6th standard.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in sixth grade.

'6th standard' is nonstandard in many varieties of English; 'sixth grade' is the common American form (or 'Year 6' in British English). Numerals in text are spelled out and ordinal form should match: 'sixth grade'. The past tense 'learned' is correct; only terminology and style were adjusted. Suggestion: Use the appropriate educational level term for the target dialect and spell out ordinals in formal writing.

× We have a computer class where my lecturer taught me how to type, paint and use mouse etcetera.

✓ We had a computer class where my teacher taught me how to type, paint, and use the mouse, etc.

Mixing present 'have' with past 'taught' creates a tense mismatch; since learning occurred in the past, use past 'had'. Also 'lecturer' is fine but 'teacher' is more natural in school context. 'Use mouse' needs the definite article 'the mouse'. 'Etc.' placed at end with a period and commas used for list items. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and include articles with singular countable nouns ('the mouse').

× In my perspective, I improve typing by daily practice, uh, by making reports, documents and summaries of essays, which helps me type more faster with confidence.

✓ In my view, I improve my typing by practicing daily, by writing reports, documents, and essay summaries, which helps me type faster and with more confidence.

Use 'in my view' instead of 'in my perspective' for naturalness. 'Improve typing' needs a possessive: 'improve my typing'. 'Daily practice' can be expressed as 'practicing daily' (verb + -ing) which matches list form. 'Making' is less precise than 'writing'. 'More faster' is incorrect; use 'faster' (comparative) or 'more quickly'—removed redundancy and adjusted 'with confidence' to 'with more confidence' for clarity. Suggestion: Use gerunds consistently for activities (practicing, writing) and avoid double comparatives like 'more faster'.