Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant and shows reasoning with an example, but it is slightly long and could be more concise and natural. Avoid phrases like 'I believe the brain processes...' without a brief, clear link; use a simple topic sentence then one specific supporting detail. Limit to about 2–3 sentences and add a linking word to connect idea and example.

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing by hand helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes in a notebook, I can recall lecture details more clearly than if I type them.

제안: Good direct answer and reason, but it's slightly wordy and uses formal phrases like 'adverse impact' and 'brain health' that sound unnatural in everyday speech. Be more concise: give a clear statement, one brief reason, and a short example or habitual detail. Use a linking word like 'because' or 'so' to connect idea and reason.

예시: No, I don't use a computer keyboard every day because I try to limit screen time for my eyes. Instead, I usually write in a diary or take notes with a pen.

제안: You answered directly and added background, but the response is slightly unfocused and contains unnecessary details (friends) that don't serve the main point. Keep it to a topic sentence with one brief supporting detail (where/why). Avoid repeating 'I learned' and reduce to 2–3 sentences with linking words like 'so' or 'because'.

예시: I learned to type when I was 17, so I enrolled in a local computer course. I took the course because typing became a mandatory skill for my studies the following year.

제안: Your answer gives a general principle but is vague and repetitive. Instead, give a personal, specific routine or method and one concrete example of practice. Use linking words such as 'for example' or 'by' to show how you practice, and keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing for 20 minutes every day using online typing drills. For example, I use a typing website to work on accuracy and speed, and I track my progress each week.

× I mostly prefer using a pen and a paper or a diary.

✓ I mostly prefer using a pen and paper or a diary.

Use of the article 'a' before 'paper' is incorrect because 'paper' in this context is an uncountable noun or a material; the correct phrase is 'pen and paper'. Remove the extra 'a' to follow natural collocation and maintain parallel structure.

× I enrolled into a computer institution.

✓ I enrolled in a computer institution.

The verb 'enroll' commonly takes the preposition 'in' (enroll in a course/institution) in standard English. Using 'into' is incorrect here. Use 'enrolled in' to indicate joining an institution.

× I learned this because in my next academic year, the requirement was made mandatory for academics.

✓ I learned this because in my next academic year the requirement became mandatory for students.

The original sentence is awkward and uses passive phrasing 'was made mandatory for academics' and the word 'academics' is unclear. Use active/clear phrasing 'became mandatory for students' to match meaning. Also remove the unnecessary comma after 'year' for smoother flow.

× Typing, just like any other skill can be improved by being persistent.

✓ Typing, just like any other skill, can be improved by being persistent.

This sentence misses a comma after the introductory clause 'just like any other skill' which affects readability rather than tense; however grammatically it needs commas to set off the nonrestrictive clause. Adding commas clarifies structure. Tense is correct (present passive possibility).

× By allocating considerable amount of time regularly on a day-to-day basis for the skill development, one can master any skill and get better at whatever they do.

✓ By allocating a considerable amount of time regularly on a day-to-day basis for skill development, one can master any skill and get better at whatever one does.

There are two issues: missing article 'a' before 'considerable amount', and inconsistent pronoun use. The sentence uses impersonal 'one' then switches to 'they'; keep pronouns consistent. Replace 'they' with 'one', and remove 'the' before 'skill development' to make the phrase natural. Also 'a considerable amount' is the correct collocation.