Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer addresses the question and gives reasons, but grammar, sentence structure and clarity need improvement. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences), use a clear topic sentence, and avoid filler words. Improve grammar (e.g., "It really depends"; "typing is easier and takes less time"). When giving contrasting points, use linking words like "however" or "on the other hand". Be specific about what makes handwriting better for studying (e.g., memory retention).

예시: I prefer typing for informal communication because it is easier and faster. However, for formal documents or study notes I prefer handwriting because writing by hand helps me remember information better. For example, when I handwrite summaries after class, I remember the material more clearly.

제안: Good direct response with reasons. Improve clarity and avoid repetition. Use a clear topic sentence: "I use a laptop keyboard daily." Then add supporting details with linking words ("because", "so"). Correct small errors ("more convenient than a desktop"), and remove redundant phrases. Add a brief specific example of when you type during the day.

예시: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I bring my laptop to school. For example, during lectures I type notes and complete assignments on my laptop, so it is much more convenient than using a desktop.

제안: Answer gives a time but is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Start with a clear topic sentence: "I learned to type when I was around ten years old." Then give a concise reason or context. Use correct tense and avoid repetitive phrases. For coherence use linking words like "because" or "when" and be specific: mention where or how you practised (e.g., games or lessons).

예시: I learned to type when I was about ten years old. At that time, many online games were popular, so I practised typing while playing and talking with friends online.

제안: The answer is honest but too short, filled with hesitations and lacks structure. Give a clear topic sentence: "I don't practice formally, but I improve through regular use." Then add specific examples or a plan to improve (e.g., online typing lessons, practice tests, touch-typing exercises). Reduce fillers and hesitation. Use linking words like "however" if mentioning no formal practice then giving alternatives.

예시: I don't follow a formal practice routine; I improve mainly through regular use by chatting and taking notes during lectures. However, to get better I could use online typing exercises or a touch-typing course for 15 minutes a day to increase speed and accuracy.

× It's really depends, like if I want to talk with my friends or just some casual random things.

✓ It really depends, like if I want to talk with my friends or just say some casual, random things.

The verb 'depends' should follow the subject 'It' without the contraction 'It's' which is 'It is'. Using 'It's depends' causes a third person singular auxiliary plus main verb error. Use 'It really depends' to be grammatically correct. Also add 'say' for clarity and separate adjectives with a comma.'

× I prefer typing because it's more easy and take less time.

✓ I prefer typing because it's easier and takes less time.

This sentence has adjective/adverb misuse and subject-verb agreement. 'more easy' is incorrect; the comparative form is 'easier'. Also the verb must agree with singular subject 'it' or 'typing' — use 'takes' not 'take'. Use 'it's easier and takes less time.'

× But for the foremost formal events I prefer handwriting.

✓ But for the most formal events I prefer handwriting.

Article/word choice error: 'foremost formal' is unnatural; use the superlative 'most formal' to compare events. Also no extra article is needed before 'handwriting' in this context.'

× And for the study, yeah, handwriting is makes more clear the memories.

✓ And for studying, yeah, handwriting makes memories clearer.

Present tense and word order issues: 'handwriting is makes' combines two verbs incorrectly. Use 'handwriting makes' (simple present). Also 'more clear the memories' is awkward; use 'makes memories clearer' and 'for studying' is more natural than 'for the study.'

× For me, the laptop keyboard is more often because I carry my laptop to school every day.

✓ For me, I use the laptop keyboard more often because I carry my laptop to school every day.

Incorrect preposition/word order: 'is more often' is ungrammatical; express frequency with 'use ... more often.' Adding subject 'I' clarifies who uses it.'

× I have to type the notes and assignments during lectures.

✓ I have to type notes and assignments during lectures.

Subject-verb agreement/usage: 'the notes' implies specific notes; simple plural 'notes' is more natural. Sentence otherwise correct; removing 'the' improves generality.'

× So I find that laptop is more convenient than desktop desk Desktop you can bring.

✓ So I find that a laptop is more convenient than a desktop because you can carry it.

Sentence structure and redundancy errors: Missing article 'a' before 'laptop', repeated 'desktop desk Desktop' is incorrect and unclear. Rephrase to compare 'a laptop' with 'a desktop' and explain reason with 'because you can carry it.'

× In my very young age I remember it should be a maybe a around 10 years old and that time many online games is become prevalent and popular in that time.

✓ When I was very young, I think I was around ten years old, and at that time many online games became prevalent and popular.

Present tense and past tense issues, and word order: 'In my very young age' should be 'When I was very young'. 'I remember it should be a maybe a around 10 years old' is ungrammatical — use 'I think I was around ten years old'. 'Many online games is become' mixes tenses and subject-verb agreement; use simple past 'became'. Remove redundant 'in that time.'

× Uh, there's no specific thing to improve my typing skill 'cause I, I only use it for casual chatting with my friends online and, uh, type some messages or just, uh, umm, type notes during lecture and study, yeah.

✓ Uh, there's no specific method I use to improve my typing skills because I only use it for casual chatting with my friends online, typing messages, or taking notes during lectures and studying.

Tense and noun form and parallel structure issues: 'typing skill' should be plural 'typing skills'. Replace informal ''cause' with 'because' and create parallel gerund phrases 'typing messages' and 'taking notes'. Use 'lectures' plural and 'studying' for noun consistency. Remove filler words for clarity.'