Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful with grammar and word choice; make one clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct mistakes like 'work up' → 'work more', 'short note' → 'take short notes', and 'am need' → 'need'. Keep it under five sentences and avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because I can work more efficiently and accurately. For example, I type most reports and emails at work, which saves time. However, I still take short handwritten notes when I need to remember something quickly.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy with previous answers. Correct grammar: 'That's I have to use' → 'I have to use a laptop', and include a linking word to add one specific detail. Limit to three sentences.

예시: I have to use a laptop for work, so I type on a laptop keyboard every day. Because of that, I can complete reports and emails faster. For instance, I typically draft two or three reports daily.

제안: Use correct nouns and verb forms: 'keypad' → 'keyboard', 'speech' → 'speed', and 'I am become' → 'I became' or 'I have become'. Give a concise timeline and one specific detail about practice using linking words like 'after' or 'within'.

예시: I learned to type on a keyboard about four years ago. At first my typing speed was very slow because I wasn't used to the layout, but after three months of daily practice I became much faster and more confident.

제안: Make sentences grammatically correct and fluent by removing fillers ('uh') and fixing plural/singular agreement: 'I used to a keyboard' → 'I used a keyboard', 'This apps helps' → 'These apps help'. Provide one clear method with a result, using linking words such as 'by' or 'so'.

예시: When I started learning, I used a keyboard and practiced regularly with typing apps like 10 Fingers. These apps helped me learn key positions, so now I can type without looking at the keys.

× I prefer typing to handwriting because I can work up more efficiently and accurately.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because I can work more efficiently and accurately.

The phrase 'work up' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'work' in general. Remove 'up' to use the correct verb phrase 'work more efficiently and accurately.' This keeps the present tense and meaning consistent.

× However I still am short note by hand when I am need remember something quickly.

✓ However, I still jot short notes by hand when I need to remember something quickly.

Multiple errors: word choice ('jot short notes' is the correct collocation), word order ('I still am' should be 'I still [verb]'), and missing infinitive/auxiliary ('I need to remember'). This correction uses present tense and correct verb forms and word order.

× That's I have to use laptop for work, so I type on keyboard every day.

✓ I have to use a laptop for work, so I type on the keyboard every day.

'That's' is incorrect here; use a simple declarative subject 'I'. Articles are needed: 'a laptop' and 'the keyboard' (or 'a keyboard'). Also include 'the' before 'keyboard' to be natural. This fixes sentence structure and article usage.

× I learned to type on keypad about four years ago.

✓ I learned to type on a keypad about four years ago.

The countable noun 'keypad' requires an article: 'a keypad.' Adding 'a' makes the noun grammatically correct in past tense context.

× At first my speech was very slow because I wasn't used to it, but after three months daily practice I am become much faster and more confident.

✓ At first my speed was very slow because I wasn't used to it, but after three months of daily practice I became much faster and more confident.

'Speech' is the wrong noun here; 'speed' or 'typing speed' is correct. 'I am become' is ungrammatical; use past simple 'I became' since the learning happened in the past. Also add 'of' after 'three months' for the expression 'three months of daily practice.' This aligns tense and noun choice.

× When I started learning, I used to a keyboard.

✓ When I started learning, I used a keyboard.

'Used to' plus bare infinitive means a past habitual action; here the intended meaning is simply past use of the device, so 'I used a keyboard' or 'I used to use a keyboard.' Removing or changing 'to' corrects the structure. If you mean a habit, prefer 'I used to use a keyboard.'

× I practiced uh, regularly, uh with typing apps like 10 fingers.

✓ I practiced regularly with typing apps like '10 Fingers.'

Fillers 'uh' should be removed for written form. '10 Fingers' is a proper noun for the app and should be capitalized; include quotes to mark the app name in speech transcription. 'Practiced regularly' is the correct adverb placement.

× This apps helps me remember key positions and improve my speed.

✓ These apps help me remember key positions and improve my speed.

'Apps' is plural, so use the plural demonstrative 'these' and plural verb 'help' (not 'helps'). This fixes subject-verb agreement and demonstrative pronoun.