Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason and a brief example. Avoid vague phrases like "due to the new technology."

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit documents easily and store them in the cloud, so I don't worry about losing notes.

제안: Use a direct topic sentence and refine grammar and register (avoid 'Yeah'). Add one specific detail about how the desktop helps your work to make the answer richer.

예시: I type on a desktop every day because I work from home. The large screen and full keyboard help me handle spreadsheets and long reports more efficiently.

제안: Be concise and avoid repetition. Give a clear time reference and one specific detail about the learning experience (method or duration).

예시: I learned to type in high school during a computer class when I was about 15. We practiced touch-typing with exercises, which helped me build speed over several months.

제안: Organize the answer: state current methods, give a reason, and a specific example of practice. Avoid long, unclear sentences and redundancy.

예시: I improve my typing by practicing on a typing website several times a week to build accuracy. For instance, I use timed exercises and track my words-per-minute to see steady progress since high school.

× Right now, due to the new technology, I prefer typing rather than handwriting.

✓ Right now, because of new technology, I prefer typing to handwriting.

The original sentence uses 'due to' which is acceptable but 'because of' sounds more natural here; also the idiomatic preposition pair is 'prefer X to Y' not 'prefer X rather than Y'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions/phrasing fitting Present tense context. Suggest replacing 'due to' with 'because of' and 'rather than' with 'to' to make the sentence natural and grammatically correct.

× Yeah, I am typing on a desktop every day because I'm working from home and it is part of my job.

✓ Yes, I type on a desktop every day because I work from home and it is part of my job.

Use simple present for habitual actions ('I type', 'I work') rather than present continuous. 'Yeah' is informal; 'Yes' is better for a test. This corrects tense usage for habitual routines.

× Well, I learned it when I was in high school because we have a subject about computers and this is the first time I learned how to type on a keyboard.

✓ Well, I learned it when I was in high school because we had a computer class, and that was the first time I learned how to type on a keyboard.

The sentence mixes past and present. Use past tense 'had' for a class in high school and 'was'/'learned' consistently. Replace 'we have a subject about computers' with 'we had a computer class' for clarity and correct tense. Also change 'this is the first time I learned' to 'that was the first time I learned' to maintain past-time reference.

× At first I tried to use a typing website to try and improve my typing here for faster learning and then it just takes time because since high school up to now I'm using a keyboard.

✓ At first I tried using a typing website to improve my speed, and then it just took time because since high school I have been using a keyboard.

Multiple tense and verb form issues: use 'tried using' instead of 'tried to use' + 'to try' (avoid repetition). Use past tense 'took' for 'it just took time'. For the period from high school to now, use present perfect continuous 'have been using' to indicate an action continuing to the present. Also streamline 'improve my typing here for faster learning' to 'improve my speed' for clarity.