Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Good direct response with clear reasons and a brief example of benefits. To improve further, vary vocabulary (e.g., substitute “faster and more convenient” with alternatives), tighten sentences to avoid mild redundancy, and add one linking phrase to show contrast or emphasis.

예시: I prefer typing because it is quicker and more convenient for long essays and note-taking. Moreover, typing lets me reorganize and edit ideas easily on a computer, which saves time when drafting and revising.

제안: Clear and natural answer with routine detail. Improve by combining sentences to form a stronger topic sentence and adding a short linking word to explain frequency or contrast (e.g., “therefore” or “so”). Also replace vague phrase “pretty much” with a more precise adverb.

예시: Yes, I type on my laptop every day because I study online a lot, so typing has become part of my daily routine and I now type far more often than I write by hand.

제안: Good chronology and personal detail. Improve grammatical accuracy (use past tense consistently: “became” not “become”) and tighten phrasing. Add a linking word to show progression (e.g., “gradually” or “over time”) and a brief specific example of practice.

예시: I learned to type in primary school during computer classes. At first I typed slowly, but over time I gradually became faster by practising on homework and chatting online, and now I can type without looking at the keyboard.

제안: Good, direct answer with concrete methods. To improve, avoid filler (“I think”) in the opening, add a linking word (e.g., “also” or “in addition”), and give a specific example of a website or exercise to make the response more concrete.

예시: The best way is to practise regularly. Because I use my laptop every day for studying, my speed improved naturally, and I also use online typing drills—such as timed tests and accuracy exercises on TypingClub—to build speed and precision.

× I can also add it and reorganize my ideas much more easily on a computer.

✓ I can also edit and reorganize my ideas much more easily on a computer.

The original sentence uses 'add it' which is unnatural and likely a word choice error rather than a grammatical form; replacing with 'edit' fits the intended meaning (modify or add text) and keeps correct verb forms. Use of base verbs 'edit' and 'reorganize' after 'can' is correct.

× I probably type far more than I write by hand now.

✓ I probably type far more than I write by hand nowadays.

The original 'now' is not incorrect grammatically but 'nowadays' is stylistically more appropriate to indicate a general current habit. Both are present-tense habit statements; change is a stylistic improvement to match habitual present tense.

× I think I learned it in primary school when I started having computer classes.

✓ I think I learned it in primary school when I started taking computer classes.

The verb collocation 'having computer classes' is awkward; 'taking computer classes' is the correct and natural collocation in English for attending courses. Tense remains past simple for a past event.

× At first I typed very slowly, but over time I naturally become faster through studying and chatting online.

✓ At first I typed very slowly, but over time I naturally became faster through studying and chatting online.

The clause refers to a change in the past, so the verb should be past tense 'became' rather than present 'become'. This is a past-tense agreement issue.

× Since I use my laptop everyday for studying, my typing speed has improved naturally over time.

✓ Since I use my laptop every day for studying, my typing speed has naturally improved over time.

Two issues: 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'common' but the adverbial phrase 'every day' (two words) is required for frequency. Also, adverb placement: 'naturally' better precedes the verb 'improved' (or immediately after auxiliary) for clearer emphasis: 'has naturally improved'. Both corrections make the sentence grammatically and idiomatically correct.