Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答总体清晰，但需要更自然和简洁。避免语气词和重复（如“uh”，“yeah”，“so”），并用一到两句具体原因支持观点。可用连词（because, so, which）使逻辑更连贯。句子不应过长，控制在三到四句内。

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing because putting pen to paper helps me express my emotions more naturally. For example, when I journal I can scribble ideas and doodles, which helps me think more creatively. Therefore I usually choose handwriting for personal notes.

제안: 回答直接但有冗余和口头语。建议先给主题句（I use a desktop), 然后用一到两句具体补充说明用途和频率。删除多余重复短语，使用连词如 because or for example 来增强连贯性。

예시: I type on a desktop every day because that's what we have in my office. I mainly use it to draft documents and prepare study materials, so I usually spend several hours typing each workday.

제안: 回答较符合要求但口头语较多，结构重复。建议用一到两句说明时间并补充具体细节（例如年龄或课程内容），使用连词（since/when/because）使表达更自然。

예시: I learned to type when I was in primary school, around the age of ten, because our school offered basic computer lessons. Since then I've practised regularly and improved my typing skills.

제안: 回答含有明显语言错误和表达不清（如“in my dear life”, “proxy it”）。建议用正确短语描述方法（use typing apps, practice regularly, take lessons），并给出具体频率或例子。使用连接词（for example, by doing）提高逻辑。

예시: I improve my typing by practising with online typing apps for about 20 minutes a day. For example, I use a speed-typing program that gives exercises and tracks my progress, which helps increase both accuracy and speed.

× Personally speaking, I prefer handwriting to typing because I think when you are writing, uh, you can express your feelings or your emotions better than typing on the keyboard.

✓ Personally speaking, I prefer handwriting to typing because I think when you are writing you can express your feelings or your emotions better than when typing on the keyboard.

句中比较结构涉及两个动作的对照，原句缺少第二个从句的连词或时间状语（when），导致平行结构不完整。建议在比较时保持并列结构一致，这里在第二部分加上 when 或者省略逗号并加 when typing，形成“when you are writing ... than when typing”或“... better than typing”两种正确表达。

× I type on the desktop because in my office I have a desktop, so, umm, I type on it every day and I will work on some, uh, documents or some study materials.

✓ I type on the desktop because in my office I have a desktop, so I type on it every day and I work on some documents or study materials.

句中时态和陈述习惯动作时不应使用将来式“will”，且重复使用不必要的填充词。将“I will work”改为一般现在时“I work”，因为描述常规习惯动作要用一般现在时。此外删除多余逗号和填充词使句子更自然。

× When I was in primary school, because back then, uh, we had uh, some classes on computer.

✓ When I was in primary school, back then we had some classes on computers.

原句以过去时描述过去的情况，但短句结构不完整且“classes on computer”中“computer”应为可数名词的复数形式，表示多门与计算机相关的课程。去掉多余的连词“because”使句子结构完整：从句首已是时间状语无需再用 because。

× So I have been learning, umm, how to type on the computer on the keyboard since then, yeah.

✓ So I have been learning how to type on the computer keyboard since then.

原句使用现在完成进行时是可以的，但短语“on the computer on the keyboard”重复介词结构冗余，改为“on the computer keyboard”更简洁。保持现在完成进行时以强调从过去持续到现在的动作。删除多余填充词。

× In my dear life, I usually practice typing on app on my computer, uh, which can improve the efficiency. Efficiency or the, umm, speed over your typing and I'll, umm, try to proxy it intentionally in my dear life, yeah.

✓ In my daily life, I usually practice typing with an app on my computer, which can improve my typing efficiency or speed, and I try to practice it intentionally in my daily life.

原句存在多处问题：'dear life' 用词错误，应为 'daily life'；'practice typing on app on my computer' 应为 'practice typing with an app on my computer'（用介词 with 和冠词 an）；'improve the efficiency' 更自然为 'improve my typing efficiency or speed'（明确所属）；'I'll... try to proxy' 用词错误，'proxy' 不合上下文，应为 'practice'，并且描述习惯时用一般现在时 'I try'。同时去掉多余停顿词，调整语序使句子通顺。