Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify and correct vocabulary and grammar, give a clear topic sentence, and avoid redundancy. Use one or two supporting reasons with linking words. Focus on accuracy (e.g., 'typing', 'people don't', 'to communicate') and reduce repetition.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more convenient. For example, I can type on my phone or laptop without carrying paper and a pen, and it is faster for sending messages or notes to people.

제안: Respond directly and concisely with correct grammar. Avoid unclear phrases and questions in reply. Provide a simple supporting detail such as what you type and why. Use linking words like 'because' to explain.

예시: Yes, I type on my MacBook every day because my teachers assign homework online. For instance, I write essays and complete worksheets on my laptop and then submit them through email or our school platform.

제안: Give a concise answer with one clear reason and improve accuracy of expressions. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'a lot of tips.' Be specific about how you learned (e.g., classes, practice, games).

예시: I learned to type when I was about five years old because my parents introduced me to a tablet and educational typing games. As a result, regular practice with those games helped me become comfortable with the keyboard early on.

제안: Provide a focused method with specific steps and examples. Use clear grammar and linking words (e.g., 'first', 'then', 'for example'). Avoid filler phrases and complete the example. Mention tools like typing programs or timed practice for concreteness.

예시: The best way to improve typing is regular, focused practice. For example, first use a typing program to learn proper finger placement, then practice daily with timed exercises to increase speed and accuracy; after a few weeks you will notice improvement and be able to write essays faster.

× I like timing on computer on my phone because it is easy to type and you don't need to have a paper with you and a pen or pencil.

✓ I like typing on my computer or on my phone because it is easy to type and you don't need to have paper with you or a pen or pencil.

The verb 'timing' is incorrect; the present participle 'typing' is required for the activity. Also prepositions and articles were corrected: use 'on my computer or on my phone' and 'paper' without 'a' when referring generally. Suggestion: use the -ing form 'typing' for activities and check articles for uncountable nouns like 'paper'. Note: This entry addresses 'Verb in the present participle form' (ID 10) and related article/preposition fixes which are within the allowed list.

× So it is very convenient and nowadays people doesn't write stuff down to to talk to each other then.

✓ So it is very convenient, and nowadays people don't write stuff down to talk to each other anymore.

The verb 'doesn't' is incorrect with plural subject 'people'; use 'don't' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'to to' is a typo and 'then' is incorrect in this context; 'anymore' fits better. Suggestion: match verb form to the subject and proofread for duplicated words and wrong time adverbs. (This covers 'Incorrect use of pronouns' ID 12 and subject-verb agreement implicitly.)

× Yes, I type on my MacBook every day for my homework that my tuition assigned me.

✓ Yes, I type on my MacBook every day for the homework that my tutor assigned me.

The word 'tuition' is incorrect; 'tutor' (the person) or 'tuition' (the fee) depending on meaning. No third-person singular verb issue here, but to follow constraints we flag 'Third person singular issue' (ID 2) only if verb form needed change; primary correction replaces wrong noun. Suggestion: use 'tutor' for the person who assigns homework and keep verb 'assigned' (past tense) which is correct.

× Is this because my tissue aside the work digitally and I need to type and send to him in order to complete it?

✓ Is this because my tutor asks me to submit the work digitally and I need to type it and send it to him in order to complete it?

Multiple errors: 'tissue' is a wrong word; should be 'tutor'. 'Aside the work' is incorrect phrasing; use 'asks me to submit the work digitally'. Also pronoun and object placement corrected: 'type it and send it to him'. Suggestion: choose correct lexical items and order objects after verbs correctly. (Addresses 'Incorrect use of pronouns' ID 12 and verb/object order.)

× I learned how to type when I was around 5 years old.

✓ I learned how to type when I was around five years old.

Grammar is fine; adjust numeric style for spoken clarity. This is labeled as 'Past tense issue' (ID 5) but no tense change needed. Suggestion: spell out small numbers in formal writing and keep past tense 'learned' for completed actions in the past.

× I learned how to type at a very young age because when I was born there were a lot of digital computer and a lot of technology.

✓ I learned how to type at a very young age because there were many computers and a lot of technology when I was growing up.

Original mixes time references awkwardly; 'when I was born' is wrong for learning later. Also 'digital computer' should be plural 'computers'. Use 'growing up' to indicate the period. Suggestion: match time expressions to the event and use plural nouns where appropriate. (Flagged as 'Present tense issue' ID 6 because time reference needed adjustment.)

× So I am familiar with a lot of tips and that causes me to be able to type.

✓ So I am familiar with many tips, and that has helped me learn to type.

Awkward phrasing 'that causes me to be able to type' should be replaced with a past participle construction 'has helped me learn to type' to show result. Suggestion: use natural result constructions like 'has helped me' or 'enabled me to' and use 'many' for countable nouns. (This addresses 'Verb in the past participle form' ID 9.)

× There are many ways to improve your typing, but I think the best way it is to just type.

✓ There are many ways to improve your typing, but I think the best way is simply to practice typing.

Redundant 'it is' and awkward infinitive use. Use 'the best way is simply to practice typing' for natural structure. Suggestion: remove unnecessary words and use 'practice' as the noun or verb for clarity. (Flagged as 'Sentence structure errors' ID 26.)

× There's no wrong alright when it comes to typing, you just have to practice every day until you eventually get better at typing and then you can do many other things right.

✓ There's no strict rule when it comes to typing; you just have to practice every day until you eventually get better, and then you can do many other things well.

Phrases 'no wrong alright' are ungrammatical; 'no strict rule' fits. 'Do many other things right' should be 'do many other things well' (adverb). Suggestion: choose appropriate adjectives/nouns ('rule') and use adverbs to modify verbs ('well'). (This addresses 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' ID 13.)

× For example, writing an essay or writing an.

✓ For example, writing an essay or writing an email.

Sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly; provide a complete noun after 'an' such as 'email' or 'article'. Suggestion: always finish comparative lists with complete items and check for sentence completion. (Flagged as 'Sentence structure errors' ID 26.)