Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn; tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn với lý do cụ thể và ví dụ. Sửa lỗi như “take note something” → “take notes quickly”, “handwriting reflect 1 characters” → “handwriting reflects personality”, và dùng liên từ đơn giản (because, so, for example). Giữ không quá 4-5 câu.

예시: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient when I need to take notes quickly. For example, I can edit and organize my notes easily on a laptop. However, some people believe handwriting reflects personality, and I agree that handwriting can sometimes show how careful someone is.

제안: Cần tránh bắt đầu câu bằng liên từ như “Because” mà không có mệnh đề trước; sửa ngữ pháp và chọn từ chính xác (nowadays, collaborate with my friends). Trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về thói quen (thời gian, mục đích). Giữ cấu trúc đơn giản và mạch lạc với từ nối phù hợp (so, therefore, for example).

예시: Yes, I use a laptop every day for studying and working because it is portable and easy to use. For example, I do my homework and collaborate with my classmates online in the evenings, which saves time.

제안: Câu trả lời hiện tại lộn xộn và nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp; cần trả lời trực tiếp với mốc thời gian rõ ràng, mô tả ngắn về quá trình học và kết quả. Tránh câu hỏi ngược về cuối; thay vào đó nêu kết luận (Yes, it helped me). Sửa cấu trúc: “When I was 11” và nói rõ hành động mẹ làm (gave me exercises).

예시: I learned to type when I was about eleven. My mother gave me simple typing exercises during a school break, and practicing those tasks helped me become faster and more accurate over time.

제안: Cần trả lời rõ ràng phương pháp cải thiện: có hay không có kỹ thuật cụ thể, sau đó nêu chi tiết cụ thể (luyện tập hàng ngày, phần mềm, bài tập đánh máy). Sửa ngữ pháp (“I don't have a specific technique” ; “I can type without looking because of muscle memory”). Dùng liên từ để kết nối ý (however, so, therefore).

예시: I don't follow a specific formal technique, but I practice regularly which has developed my muscle memory. For example, I spend 15 minutes each day on typing practice websites, and that consistent practice has helped me type without looking at the keyboard.

× I prefer typing because it's very convenient when I need to take note something quickly.

✓ I prefer typing because it's very convenient when I need to take notes quickly.

Use the plural noun 'notes' with the verb 'take' to express making multiple brief records; 'take note' has a different meaning. The preposition 'to' is not needed before 'take notes'. Example improvement: 'take notes quickly'.

× In addition, all people in my country often say that handwriting reflect 1 characters and I think it inform because I can look at the handwriting thing of someone to know how about them.

✓ In addition, many people in my country often say that handwriting reflects a person's character, and I think it is informative because I can look at someone's handwriting to learn about them.

Multiple errors: subject-verb agreement ('handwriting reflects' — third person singular), wrong noun phrase 'reflect 1 characters' changed to 'reflects a person's character', incorrect adjective use 'inform' replaced by 'is informative', and awkward noun phrases simplified ('handwriting thing of someone' -> 'someone's handwriting', 'to know how about them' -> 'to learn about them'). Improve by using correct verb forms and natural collocations: 'reflects a person's character', 'is informative', 'someone's handwriting'.

× Yeah, definitely. Because in the digital areas, right, nowaday working or studying in the laptop or tablet is become more common.

✓ Yes, definitely. In the digital age, nowadays working or studying on a laptop or tablet has become more common.

Tense and word choice: use present perfect 'has become' to describe a change up to now; 'nowaday' -> 'nowadays'; 'digital areas' -> 'digital age'; preposition 'on' for devices ('on a laptop'); article and number agreement adjusted. Use smooth connectors and correct prepositions.

× So I use laptop to do my homework or adjusting with my friend every day and I think it's quite convenient.

✓ So I use my laptop to do my homework or to chat with my friends every day, and I think it's quite convenient.

Missing possessive 'my' before 'laptop'; parallel structure improved with 'to do' and 'to chat'; 'adjusting with my friend' is incorrect — likely intended meaning 'chat with my friends' or 'communicate with my friends'; plural 'friends' fits general statement. Also added commas for clarity.

× I remember that when I went 11 and I have some days to rest from school and my mom gave me a paper and say let's run cry into a document.

✓ I remember that when I was 11, I had some days off from school, and my mom gave me a piece of paper and said, 'Let's type this into a document.'

Multiple tense and vocabulary errors: 'went 11' -> 'was 11' (age uses 'was'); 'have some days to rest' -> 'had some days off'; 'paper' quantity clarified 'a piece of paper'; 'say' -> past 'said'; 'let's run cry into a document' is unintelligible; likely intended 'let's type this into a document' so corrected accordingly. Use past tense consistently for a past memory.

× I think it top challenge. Would it help me become more proficient at typing right now?

✓ I thought it was a big challenge. Would it help me become more proficient at typing now?

Tense and structure: match past reference ('I thought'/'it was') for memory; 'top challenge' corrected to 'a big challenge'; 'right now' conflicts with past context, changed to 'now' in the follow-up question if referring to present improvement potential. Maintain consistency between clauses.

× I don't have specific technique technique because when because I you only use my laptop when I familiar with it.

✓ I don't have a specific technique because I only use my laptop when I am familiar with it.

Pronoun and article errors: add 'a' before 'specific technique'; remove duplicated 'because when because I you'; use correct subject 'I' and verb 'am' in 'I am familiar with it'. Ensure one clear causal clause: 'because I only use...'.

× I can typing without any glance because use on the musical memory and intuition.

✓ I can type without looking because I rely on muscle memory and intuition.

Verb form: 'can typing' -> 'can type'; 'without any glance' -> 'without looking'; 'use on the musical memory' -> 'rely on muscle memory' (correct collocation) and add subject 'I'. These corrections fix verb form, collocations and clarity.