Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more concise and grammatical: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid redundancy and incorrect prepositions/phrasing (e.g., say "prefer handwriting to typing", "I write in my journal every morning"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect idea and keep within four sentences.

예시: I prefer handwriting to typing because I keep a daily journal. Every morning I read the Bible and then write a short devotion and a few verses in my journal, which helps me focus for the day.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence and correct small errors (remove filler sounds like "MMM", avoid repeating words). Provide one clear example and use a linking phrase such as "for example". Keep it concise and natural.

예시: I type on a laptop every day because it's the only computer I have. For example, I use it to search for jobs and to complete daily tasks like emails and forms.

제안: Use correct tense and a clearer timeline: say when you learned (e.g., "when I was in Grade 1") and give one concise supporting detail about the class or teacher. Avoid uncertain abbreviations and incomplete sentences.

예시: I learned to type when I was in Grade 1 because we had a computer class. The teacher showed us basic typing and we practiced simple exercises on the school computers.

제안: Answer with a clear topic sentence describing how you improved, then add a specific example and a linking word like "because" or "so". Remove unnecessary phrases and adjust tense consistency ("when I worked").

예시: I improved my typing by practicing daily at work. When I worked as a medical technologist, I had to enter laboratory results every day, so I gradually became much faster and more accurate.

× I prefer handwriting than typing because I love to write on my journals wherein every time I wake up I always read my Bible and after that I do the devotion and write verses and how it will help me throughout the day.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because I love to write in my journal; every time I wake up I read my Bible, do my devotion, and write verses about how they will help me throughout the day.

Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A than B'. Use 'write in my journal' rather than 'on my journals' (singular 'journal' is more natural). 'Wherein' is formal and unnecessary; break into clearer clauses. Use parallel verbs 'read, do, and write'. Use 'verses about how they will help me' to make meaning clear.

× MMM, since I only have a laptop, that's what I'm using in my everyday task.

✓ MMM, since I only have a laptop, that's what I use for my everyday tasks.

Use simple present for habitual actions: 'I use' rather than 'I'm using'. 'Everyday task' should be plural 'everyday tasks' or 'everyday work'. 'For' is the correct preposition here.

× For example, when I need to to search for a job, I always use my laptop and type it.

✓ For example, when I need to search for a job, I always use my laptop to do that typing.

Remove duplicate 'to'. Use 'to search' (infinitive) after 'need'. 'Type it' is vague; 'do that typing' or 'type my application' clarifies the action. Maintain infinitive structure after 'need'.

× I learned how to type on a keyboard since I was Grade 1, I think BEC.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in Grade 1, I think.

Use 'when' not 'since' for a specific past time. 'Since' requires a starting point continuing to present. 'Grade 1' usually needs 'in' before it. 'BEC' is unclear; remove unless necessary.

× As far as I remember, we had a computer subject that teaches us how to use the computer and from then on during our computer subject our teacher.

✓ As far as I remember, we had a computer class that taught us how to use the computer, and our teacher helped us from then on.

Mixed tenses: use past 'taught' because it's a past class. 'Computer subject' is better as 'computer class'. The original sentence is incomplete; finish the clause by stating what the teacher did.

× Oh, as far as I remember, I used to be so slow at typing and then when I work as a medical technologist in a laboratory wherein we use computer every day, we had to type our laboratory results and from then I got used to it and became fast.

✓ Oh, as far as I remember, I used to be very slow at typing, and when I worked as a medical technologist in a laboratory where we used computers every day, we had to type our laboratory results, and from then I got used to it and became faster.

Consistency of past tense: use 'worked' not 'work'. 'Where' is more natural than 'wherein'. Use plural 'computers'. 'Very' is a better adverb than 'so' for formal correction; 'faster' is comparative adjective. Maintain past tense throughout for a past job.