Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 발음과 문장 정확성을 개선하세요. 또한 반복되는 말(‘it it it's’)을 피하고 문장을 더 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 예를 들어 주제문 뒤에 구체적 이유(속도, 편집 용이성, 검색 가능성 등)를 하나나 두 가지로 한정해 상세히 설명하고 연결어(for example, because, so)를 사용하세요.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and easier to edit. For example, I can quickly copy and paste text and correct mistakes without starting over.

제안: 어휘 선택과 문장 구성에서 구체성을 높이세요. ‘starting’ 같은 단어 사용은 부정확합니다. 대신 일상 활동(예: studying, working, messaging)을 명확히 하고 연결어(and, also)를 자연스럽게 쓰세요.

예시: I use a laptop keyboard every day for studying and messaging my friends. It's convenient and portable, and I also find it faster for writing essays.

제안: 문법과 어순을 조금 다듬고 더 구체적인 정보를 추가하세요. 예를 들어 몇 학년 때였는지, 어떤 연습을 했는지(게임, 타자 연습 프로그램 등)를 말하면 더 좋습니다. 연결어(then, after that)를 사용해 흐름을 부드럽게 만드세요.

예시: I first learned to type in elementary school during computer class, when I was about eight years old. My teacher showed us proper finger placement, and we practiced regularly with typing exercises and simple games.

제안: 응답이 문법적으로 미완성이고 문장 연결이 어색합니다. 현재 방법을 명확히 말하고, 구체적 활동(online typing games, timed practice, touch-typing lessons, regular essay writing)을 나열하면서 연결어(because, by, so)를 사용해 논리적으로 설명하세요.

예시: I improved my typing by practising regularly with online typing games and timed exercises. I also wrote essays frequently to build speed and accuracy, and used touch-typing tutorials to correct my finger placement.

× I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more efficient and convenient. It it it's much easier to edit, copy and paste long sentences.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more efficient and convenient. It is much easier to edit, copy, and paste long sentences.

The original contains a repeated fragment 'It it it's' which is a typo and causes sentence clarity problems. Also add a comma before 'and' in a list for clarity. Suggestion: remove the repeated words, keep a single 'It is', and use commas correctly when listing items.

× I use a laptop keyboard every day, not only for starting but also for texting my friends.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day, not only for studying but also for texting my friends.

The word 'starting' is incorrect in this context; likely intended 'studying' or 'working'. Maintain collocation with 'use a laptop... for studying'. Suggestion: choose the verb that matches the intended activity and keeps meaning consistent.

× Teachers taught me and friends basic type skills, and we practiced regularly to improve our skills.

✓ Teachers taught my friends and me basic typing skills, and we practiced regularly to improve our skills.

Word order for pronouns is typically 'friends and me'. 'Type skills' is incorrect collocation; 'typing skills' is correct. Also use object form 'me' not 'I'. Suggestion: reorder pronouns, use correct noun form 'typing', and keep parallel structure.

× When I was in elementary school, I couldn't type quickly and accurately, but nowadays I can because I practiced a lot using online typing games and. Writing essay.

✓ When I was in elementary school, I couldn't type quickly and accurately, but nowadays I can because I practiced a lot using online typing games and writing essays.

The original has a misplaced period creating a sentence fragment 'Writing essay.' and 'writing essay' needs plural noun 'essays' or the gerund form 'writing essays'. Also tense consistency: 'practiced' is fine for past action leading to current ability. Suggestion: remove the period, combine into one sentence, and use 'writing essays'.