Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason with a linked example. Avoid redundant phrases and incorrect tense/form (e.g., "when I was studying at university", "made my memory stronger").

예시: I prefer handwriting. When I was studying at university we mostly wrote by hand because computers were not widely available, and I found that writing notes by hand helped me remember information better, especially before exams.

제안: Give a direct, natural response and support it with one clear reason. Avoid vague claims about being "hardworking"; focus on how typing helps you specifically. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "so") correctly and keep to two or three sentences.

예시: Yes, I use a desktop keyboard every day because I do a lot of typing for work and study. This daily practice helps me take notes efficiently and improves my English writing skills.

제안: Answer directly with correct time expression and a brief specific detail about the lesson. Fix grammatical errors ("in ninth grade", "our teacher taught us"). Keep it to two sentences and use a linking phrase if adding why it was useful.

예시: I learned to type in ninth grade when our computer teacher showed us proper typing techniques. It was useful because the skills helped me type faster for assignments and later at work.

제안: Be clearer and more direct about what you do to improve. Use simple condition-result structure ("If I practice daily, my speed improves"). Avoid repetition and correct grammar ("I don't actively practice, but working at reception helps because I type every day").

예시: I don't do formal typing exercises, but working at a reception helps me improve because I type emails and notes every day. Regular daily use has gradually increased my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because when I was studied at university, mostly we did handwriting because on that time we didn't have lots of computers and we didn't have access to use them.

✓ I prefer handwriting because when I was studying at university, we mostly wrote by hand since at that time we didn't have many computers or access to use them.

The phrase 'was studied' is incorrect; the past continuous or past progressive 'was studying' or simple past 'studied' should be used. 'Did handwriting' is awkward; use 'wrote by hand' or 'handwrote'. 'On that time' should be 'at that time'. Use 'many' with countable 'computers'. Suggestion: use 'when I was studying' and 'we mostly wrote by hand'. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× I mean, in our university, yes.

✓ I mean, at our university, yes.

Use the preposition 'at' with 'university' to indicate location; 'in our university' is possible but 'at' is more natural in this context. This is an incorrect preposition/adverbial choice. (Grammar problem type ID: 13)

× And I think it also helped to make your memory more stronger.

✓ And I think it also helped to make your memory stronger.

'More stronger' is redundant and incorrect because 'stronger' already expresses the comparative. Use either 'stronger' or 'more powerful', not both. Remove 'more'. (Grammar problem type ID: 13)

× Yes, I do. I tap on a desktop.

✓ Yes, I do. I type on a desktop.

The verb 'tap' is not the usual collocation for typing on a desktop keyboard; 'type' is the correct verb. This is a word choice issue affecting verb meaning; correct verb needed for third person or general statements. (Grammar problem type ID: 2)

× And I think it's also so helpful for me.

✓ And I think it's also very helpful for me.

Use 'very' instead of 'so' in formal responses; 'so helpful' is conversational but not incorrect grammatically. This correction improves register and clarity. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× I mean like you have more motivation to make some notes and I will do.

✓ I mean, you have more motivation to take notes, and I do that too.

'Make some notes' is acceptable but 'take notes' is more natural. 'I will do' is unclear and mismatched in tense; use 'I do that too' to show habitual action. Pronoun and verb phrase needed adjustment for clarity. (Grammar problem type ID: 12)

× I'm doing this job almost every day because I'm very hardworking and I would like to learn English and I think it's very helpful.

✓ I do this work almost every day because I'm hardworking and I want to learn English, which I think is very helpful.

Mix of continuous and habitual tenses: 'I'm doing this job almost every day' is fine but 'I do this work almost every day' better matches habitual meaning. 'I would like to learn' indicates future desire; 'I want to learn' is more direct and consistent. Rephrase for clarity and tense consistency. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)

× Definitely at school when I was in nine class, our teacher, she taught us how to type on a keyboard and it I still remember these things.

✓ Definitely at school, when I was in ninth grade, our teacher taught us how to type on a keyboard and I still remember it.

Use 'ninth grade' (or 'Form 9' depending on variety) instead of 'in nine class'. Remove the redundant subject 'our teacher, she'—use either 'our teacher taught us' or 'she taught us'. 'It I still remember these things' is ungrammatical; use 'I still remember it' or 'I still remember those lessons'. Also use simple past 'taught'. (Grammar problem type ID: 5)

× I think it's a good memory for you because you do remember how they did it and it's mostly was very useful information from her.

✓ I think it's a good memory because you remember how she taught it, and it was very useful information from her.

Problems: 'for you' is unnecessary; 'you do remember' is emphatic but awkward—'you remember' is fine. 'How they did it' conflicts with singular 'teacher'; use 'she' or 'she taught it'. 'It's mostly was' mixes tenses; use 'it was'. Rephrase to fix pronoun and tense agreement and adverb placement. (Grammar problem type ID: 13)

× In my personal view, I think I'm not doing improvements or typing, but sometimes I do reception work and uh, if you do, it's more, more constantly.

✓ In my view, I don't actively practice typing, but sometimes I do reception work, and if you do that more consistently,

Original sentence has awkward structure and redundancy: 'I'm not doing improvements or typing' is ungrammatical. Use 'I don't actively practice typing'. 'If you do, it's more, more constantly' should be 'if you do that more consistently'. Fix sentence structure and adverb placement for clarity. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× I think it could be improve your skills.

✓ I think it could improve your skills.

'Be improve' is incorrect. Use base verb 'improve' after modal 'could'. Alternatively, 'could improve' is correct; if using passive, 'could be improved' would be correct. Remove 'be'. (Grammar problem type ID: 8)

× And if you are do every day, I think like doing this job every day, you can improve your abilities.

✓ And if you do it every day, I think doing this job daily can improve your abilities.

'If you are do every day' is ungrammatical; use 'if you do it every day'. Remove filler 'like'. Use consistent present simple for habitual conditional. (Grammar problem type ID: 6)