Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Reduce hesitation and grammar errors, make the answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct verb tenses and articles (e.g., “in recent years,” “I prefer typing to handwriting,” “it’s easier to correct mistakes”). Avoid filler words like “umm.”

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting. Mostly, I find it much faster, and it’s easier to correct mistakes on a computer. For example, when I write emails or reports I can quickly edit and rearrange sentences, which saves time and improves clarity.

제안: Speak more fluently and organize thoughts into a clear topic sentence plus brief supporting details. Fix repetition and tense errors, and use linking words (e.g., “because,” “and,” “also”) correctly. Replace vague phrases with specifics (e.g., “I work on an e-commerce platform” and “I practice IELTS writing on weekends”).

예시: Yes, I type almost every day on my laptop because I work for an e-commerce platform. During weekdays I use the laptop for customer messages and product listings, and at weekends I practice IELTS writing and edit my drafts.

제안: Provide a clear time reference and correct grammar. Use a simple, accurate timeline and avoid unclear expressions (e.g., “around 5:00” is confusing — probably meant age five or grade level). Use linking words to make the sequence clear.

예시: I learned to type when I was about five years old, when I started primary school. At that time the school offered basic computer classes, and we practiced typing letters and short exercises every week.

제안: Clarify the methods you use to improve typing with specific activities and correct grammar. Structure the answer: say how you improved, give examples (practice, online lessons, touch-typing), and mention results. Avoid vague phrases and repetition.

예시: I improved my typing mainly through daily practice at work and targeted exercises. For example, I used online typing lessons to learn touch-typing, timed drills to increase speed, and proofreading to reduce errors. As a result, my accuracy and speed have improved significantly.

× In this recent years, I prefer typing rather than, umm, handwriting.

✓ In recent years, I have preferred typing rather than handwriting.

Use of 'in this recent years' is incorrect (article and number). 'In recent years' is standard. Preference over a period uses present perfect ('have preferred') to show a continuing situation. Also remove filler and extra commas for clarity.

× This is because when I'm typing, I can specifically change the incorrect information or adjust the text that I wish to adjust easier than handwriting.

✓ This is because when I type, I can easily correct incorrect information or adjust the text more easily than with handwriting.

Use simple present 'I type' for habitual actions (question asks general preference). 'Specifically' is unnecessary and awkward here; 'easily' fits better. 'Change the incorrect information' is better phrased as 'correct incorrect information'. Also use 'more easily than with handwriting' for a clear comparison and include 'with' before 'handwriting'.

× I would say I type almost every day because in in this day I have work in the ecommerce platform which I have to use my laptop every day and during the week.

✓ I would say I type almost every day because I work on an e-commerce platform where I have to use my laptop every weekday.

Remove duplicated 'in'. Use 'work on an e-commerce platform' for correct preposition. 'Every weekday' or 'during the week' is clearer than 'every day and during the week'. Use present simple for habitual actions ('I work', 'I have').

× During the weekdays I type keyboard for working and during weekends I typing the keyboard to practice ILS writing.

✓ On weekdays I type on the keyboard for work, and on weekends I type on the keyboard to practice IELTS writing.

Use 'on weekdays/weekends' not 'during the weekdays'. Add 'on' before 'the keyboard'. 'Type' (base form) is needed after subject 'I' for present habitual actions; 'I typing' is incorrect. 'ILS' likely intended 'IELTS' so corrected. Use commas and conjunction for sentence joining.

× I think I have learned on this skill since I was very young age, probably at around 5:00 when I starting to enter the UMM.

✓ I think I learned this skill when I was very young, probably around age five, when I started school.

'Have learned' with 'since' plus a point in time can work, but simpler past 'learned' fits with 'when'. Remove 'on' and 'this' misplaced. '5:00' is incorrect for age; use 'age five'. 'Starting to enter the UMM' is unclear; likely meant 'started school', so corrected to make sense and grammatical.

× The school at that time that has also a subject studied for for the computer and teaching students to type a letter.

✓ The school at that time also had a subject on computers that taught students how to type letters.

Fix word order and verb tense: 'had' (past) instead of 'has'. Replace 'subject studied for for the computer' with 'a subject on computers'. Use 'taught students how to type letters' for correct verb structure. Remove duplicate 'for'.

× Well, I would say that before, before I'm working in this position, I have type very, very long period of time.

✓ Well, I would say that before I worked in this position, I had been typing for a very long time.

Use past simple 'worked' for the earlier state and past perfect continuous 'had been typing' to show an action that continued for a long period before the referenced past. 'I have type' is ungrammatical: need correct tense and form 'had been typing' and 'for a very long time'.

× I used all an extensive time to hide and I often, uh, type incorrectly.

✓ I spent a lot of time practicing, and I often typed incorrectly.

'Used all an extensive time to hide' is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Spent a lot of time practicing' is natural. Use past simple 'typed' to match past timeframe. Remove filler 'uh' in corrected sentence.

× But after I have to use it every day. I think it's kind of skills has occurred from the times.

✓ But after I had to use it every day, I think this skill developed over time.

'I have to use it every day' mixes tenses; context refers to past change so use 'had to'. 'It's kind of skills has occurred from the times' is ungrammatical; 'this skill developed over time' is clear and grammatical. Use singular 'skill' and past tense 'developed'.