Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more concise and natural, correct minor grammar, and add a brief, specific reason or example. Use one clear topic sentence then one supporting detail. Avoid phrases like "majority of the population" without article and reduce redundancy.

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s faster and more convenient. For example, when I take notes on my laptop during lectures I can edit and organize them easily, which saves me time later.

제안: Start with a direct topic sentence and tighten the structure. Use linking words for contrast and be specific about contexts. Correct small phrasing issues ("searching something" → "searching for something"). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: It depends on the task: for long essays I use my desktop because the full-size keyboard and larger screen are more comfortable, whereas for quick searches or short notes I use my laptop or phone because they’re more portable.

제안: Be more natural and avoid mixed metaphors. Use a clear time reference and one concise supporting detail about progress. Replace informal or awkward phrases ("dive faster") with clearer expressions.

예시: I learned to type in third grade during a school computer class, which I found very difficult at first. Since then I’ve practised regularly and now I can type much more quickly and accurately.

제안: Make the explanation direct and grammatical: state a clear method and give specific activities or techniques. Avoid vague phrasing like "synchronized typing" and the awkward final sentence. Limit to two sentences.

예시: I improved my typing by using it every day for university work and personal tasks. For example, I practise touch-typing exercises for 10 minutes daily and type all my essays and messages on a laptop to build speed and accuracy.

× Without a doubt I prefer typing because it's effortless and time saving and I believe nowadays majority of the population have already been accustomed to typing than handwriting.

✓ Without a doubt, I prefer typing because it's effortless and time-saving, and I believe that the majority of the population have already become more accustomed to typing than to handwriting.

Tense and word choice: 'time saving' should be hyphenated as 'time-saving' when used as an adjective. 'have already been accustomed to' is awkward; use 'have already become more accustomed to' to show present state. Also add 'that' before 'the majority' for clarity and include 'to' before 'handwriting' to parallel 'to typing'. This keeps present-tense generalization consistent.

× It really depends on which device I'm using for the project.

✓ It really depends on which device I'm using for a project.

Article use and register: 'the project' implies a specific project; context asks about daily habit, so 'a project' is more natural. No third-person singular error present; correction addresses article choice to match meaning.

× If I'm writing an essay, I would definitely prefer to type on my desktop, but if I am just searching something online or if I'm taking a short note or texting with my friends, I prefer to use laptop keyboard or my phone.

✓ If I'm writing an essay, I would definitely prefer to type on my desktop, but if I am just searching for something online, taking a short note, or texting my friends, I prefer to use my laptop keyboard or my phone.

Preposition and article issues: use 'searching for something' not 'searching something'. Use parallel gerund phrases 'searching for..., taking..., texting...' and include the possessive 'my' before 'laptop keyboard'. Remove 'with' before 'my friends' or rephrase to 'texting my friends' for natural English.

× Back in the third grade of elementary school, we had a computer class in which our teacher taught us how to type with a keyboard.

✓ Back in the third grade of elementary school, we had a computer class in which our teacher taught us how to type on a keyboard.

Preposition use: use 'type on a keyboard' rather than 'type with a keyboard'. The past tense 'had' and 'taught' are correct for a past event; only the preposition needed correcting.

× It felt harder than climbing a mountain back then, but nowadays I dive faster than ever.

✓ It felt harder than climbing a mountain back then, but nowadays I type faster than ever.

Word choice: 'dive faster' is incorrect in this context. Replace with 'type faster' to convey improvement in typing speed. Tenses remain consistent: past 'felt' for past experience, present 'nowadays' + present perfect or present simple for current state.

× After I got into university, I had to deal with most of my project with my laptop.

✓ After I got into university, I had to do most of my projects on my laptop.

Verb collocation and pluralization: 'deal with most of my project' is unidiomatic. Use 'do most of my projects' or 'work on most of my projects'. Also use preposition 'on' for 'on my laptop'. Make 'project' plural to match 'most of'.

× Since then, I synchronized typing into my daily habits, whether it's texting to my friends or working on my daily project.

✓ Since then, I have incorporated typing into my daily habits, whether it's texting my friends or working on daily projects.

Tense and word choice: 'synchronized typing into my daily habits' is unnatural; use present perfect 'have incorporated' to show a change begun in the past continuing to present. 'Texting to my friends' should be 'texting my friends'. 'my daily project' should be plural or 'daily projects' for consistency.

× That's why how I improved my typing.

✓ That's how I improved my typing.

Unnecessary words and poor structure: 'That's why how' is ungrammatical. Use 'That's how I improved my typing' to explain the method. This fixes sentence structure.