Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 用词和语法需要更自然、准确。避免冗余，把观点放在第一句，然后用一两句具体原因支持。注意固定搭配：’nowadays’ 不用加 ‘in’，说 ‘convenient nowadays’ 或 ‘convenient these days’。可以扩展具体原因（比如速度、可编辑性）。

예시: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and easier to edit. For example, when I write on a laptop I can quickly correct mistakes and reorganize sentences, which saves time.

제안: 回答要直接且简洁，避免犹豫语和模糊表述（如 ‘tapping’ 不太自然用于键盘）。给出一两个具体原因并用连接词衔接，例如说出便携性或舒适性。结尾不要残缺，应完整说明“不方便”的具体情况。

예시: I usually type on a laptop because it's portable and more comfortable. A desktop is bulky and harder to move, so I only use it at home for heavy tasks.

제안: 句子重复且结构不够紧凑。应给出更清晰的时间信息并用一两个细节丰富回答（例如具体年级或年龄，和学习方式）。避免重复 ‘when’ 和不自然的动词 ‘tap’。

예시: I learned to type when I was in primary school, around age nine. Our computer teacher showed us touch-typing techniques and we practised with simple exercises at school.

제안: 回答过于笼统，应提供具体方法和步骤并使用连词使逻辑更清晰。可以提到练习类型（在线练习、打字软件、正确手指位置）和频率来证明可行性。避免含糊的泛泛之谈。

예시: To improve my typing I practise daily with online typing exercises for 20 minutes, focus on correct finger placement, and gradually increase my speed whi

× As far as I am concerned, I like typing best. It is very convenient in nowadays.

✓ As far as I am concerned, I like typing best. It is very convenient nowadays.

错误类型：现在时/短语使用错误。问题在于短语“in nowadays”是不正确的固定搭配。正确表达是“nowadays”或“in modern times”。建议：记住常用时间副词的固定搭配，例如直接使用“nowadays”表示“如今”，不要在前面加“in”。

× Umm, actually I often type on a laptop. I don't like tapping on a desktop. It is not convenient if I want to.

✓ Umm, actually I often type on a laptop. I don't like typing on a desktop. It is not convenient if I want to.

错误类型：动词形式使用。原句中 “tapping on a desktop” 不符合上下文，通常说“type on a desktop”或“use a desktop keyboard”。建议：在表示用键盘输入时使用“type”或“typing”，不要用“tap(tapping)”来描述常规打字。

× When I was a student, when I started in the school, our computer teacher told us how to use the keyboard, how to tap on a keyboard.

✓ When I was a student, when I started at the school, our computer teacher taught us how to use the keyboard, how to type on a keyboard.

错误类型：过去时/介词和动词形式错误。需要注意两点：1) 介词搭配应为“start at school”或更自然的“started school”而不是“started in the school”；2) 动词“told us how to use”语法上可行，但更自然的是“taught us how to use”，并应使用“type”替代“tap”。建议：学习常见动词的搭配（start at school/started school; teach sb. to do sth./teach sb. how to do sth.; type而非 tap）。

× I think everything, if you want to improve, we must spend more time, repeat more, again and again.

✓ I think that if you want to improve, you must spend more time practising, repeating again and again.

错误类型：句子结构与人称不一致。原句中主语和人称混用（先说“I think everything”，随后用“we must”又转为泛指），造成混乱。建议：保持人称一致，使用“if you want to improve, you must...” 或“My opinion is that we must...”。另外将“repeat more”改为更自然的动名词“practising, repeating”。