Typing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Overall a good, relevant answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. To improve, remove minor redundancy, finish the final clause, and add a short linking phrase to contrast typing and handwriting. Also vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., "formal tasks" instead of "formal works") and avoid repeating "because" twice in succession.

예시: I prefer typing for formal tasks such as assignments because it's faster and easier to edit; however, I handwrite personal items like journals or cards since they feel more intimate and enjoyable.

제안: Answer is direct but contains hesitations ("umm"), a grammar error (subject-verb agreement: "homework is"), and slightly informal phrasing. To improve, remove filler words, correct grammar, and use a linking phrase to explain frequency or reason.

예시: Yes, I do. I use my laptop for studying every day, so typing has become part of my daily routine since most of my homework is submitted online.

제안: Clear, concise and well-structured answer with specific detail about classes and practice. To improve further, tighten the second sentence using a linking word (e.g., "and") and replace "picked it up" with a slightly more formal phrase like "became proficient."

예시: I learned to type in elementary school. We had computer classes and, with weekly practice, I gradually became proficient.

제안: Good explanation but a bit repetitive and informal ("like a natural thing"). To improve, be more specific about incidental practice and offer a brief example of activities that helped (e.g., messaging, schoolwork). Use a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: I haven't practiced deliberately; instead, I improved incidentally by frequently texting, composing emails, and completing online schoolwork, so typing became second nature.

× 'It depends on the situations and what I'm writing.'

✓ 'It depends on the situation and what I'm writing.'

'Situations' after 'depends on' sounds unnatural here; English typically uses the uncountable singular 'situation' or 'the situation' to refer to context in general. Use 'situation' without plural to sound natural: "It depends on the situation."

× 'For formal works like assignments, I prefer typing because it's faster and easier to edit.'

✓ 'For formal work, like assignments, I prefer typing because it's faster and easier to edit.'

'Works' is odd in this context; 'work' as an uncountable noun refers to task-related activities and fits better. Adding commas around 'like assignments' clarifies the example. This makes the sentence more natural and grammatically correct.'

× 'However, when I'm writing my journal or a card, I use handwriting because it feels more personal and I enjoy the.'

✓ 'However, when I'm writing in my journal or a card, I handwrite because it feels more personal and I enjoy it.'

'Writing my journal' is acceptable but 'writing in my journal' is more natural. 'Use handwriting' is awkward; 'handwrite' or 'write by hand' is preferred. The sentence ends with 'I enjoy the.' which is incomplete; it should be 'I enjoy it.' to complete the object of 'enjoy.' This fixes sentence structure and completes the idea.'

× 'Yes I do, I use my laptop for studies every day so typing is like umm my daily routine because umm most of my homework are done online.'

✓ 'Yes, I do. I use my laptop for my studies every day, so typing is like my daily routine because most of my homework is done online.'

Punctuation and minor wording: add commas and a period to separate ideas. 'Studies' should be 'my studies' to specify. 'Homework' is an uncountable noun and takes singular verb 'is', not 'are'. Also remove filler 'umm' for clarity. This corrects subject-verb agreement and improves fluency.'

× 'I learned to type when I was in elementary school. We had computer classes where we learned basic computer skills and with weekly practice I naturally picked it up.'

✓ 'I learned to type when I was in elementary school. We had computer classes where we learned basic computer skills, and with weekly practice I naturally picked it up.'

Grammatically the original is acceptable, but it needs a comma before 'and' to connect independent clauses smoothly. This improves readability and correctly joins the coordinated clauses.'

× 'I don't think I intentionally practiced typing.'

✓ 'I don't think I deliberately practiced typing.'

'Intentionally' is not wrong, but 'deliberately' is a more natural collocation with 'practiced' in this context. Both are grammatically acceptable; this is a stylistic improvement to match typical English usage.'

× 'I grew up using smartphones, iPads and computers, so typing is like a natural thing in my daily life.'

✓ 'I grew up using smartphones, iPads, and computers, so typing became a natural part of my daily life.'

'Like a natural thing' is awkward. Use 'became a natural part of' to express that typing integrated into daily life. Also add the Oxford comma after 'iPads' for clarity. This fixes preposition and collocation use.'