Travelling— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, use correct tense and more natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g. use present simple for habitual actions). Avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I find it relaxing because watching passing landscapes helps me unwind, and it makes the journey feel shorter.

제안: Give a direct answer and add a brief reason using linking words. Fix hesitations and duplicate words. Provide a specific detail or occasional exception to enrich the response.

예시: No, I usually don't take photos; I prefer simply watching the view because it helps me stay present. Sometimes I do take a quick photo if the light or a scene looks unusually beautiful.

제안: Give a clear preference (or explain that you have no strong preference) with a topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. Use correct word order and avoid vague wording. Limit to two to three concise sentences.

예시: I don't have a strong preference between mountains and the sea; both are appealing to me. For example, I enjoy the peace and fresh air in the mountains, whereas the sea is relaxing because of the sound of waves and open views.

× Yes, I did. I just watch out and I feel patient. I feel relieved.

✓ Yes, I do. I just watch and I feel patient. I feel relieved.

The question asks about a habitual action in the present (Do you look out the window...), so the student should use present tense rather than past. 'I did' is past; change to 'I do'. Also 'watch out' is incorrect here because 'watch out' means 'be careful'; the correct phrasal verb for observing is 'watch'. Use present simple for habitual actions: 'I do' and 'I watch'. Suggestion: Use present simple for regular habits: 'Yes, I do. I just watch and I feel relaxed or relieved.'

× No I don't. I just, I just like watching the scenery.

✓ No, I don't. I just like watching the scenery.

The original is mostly correct but has a repeated fragment ('I just, I just') which is redundant. Keep a single 'I just' and use present simple for habitual preference: 'I don't' and 'I like watching'. Suggestion: Remove redundant repetition to make the response fluent: 'No, I don't. I just like watching the scenery.'

× I like all things sometimes when I feel want to look mountain or sea maybe is.

✓ I like both the mountains and the sea. Sometimes I want to look at the mountains, and other times I want to look at the sea.

This sentence has several structure problems: word order is incorrect, missing prepositions, and unclear meaning. 'I feel want to look mountain or sea' is ungrammatical. Use clear subjects and verbs, include the preposition 'at' with 'look at', and use 'both' or 'either' to express liking both options. Break into two clauses for clarity and use present simple/habitual meaning: 'Sometimes I want to look at the mountains, and other times I want to look at the sea.' Suggestion: Use correct word order and prepositions: 'I like both the mountains and the sea. Sometimes I want to look at the mountains; other times I want to look at the sea.'