Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more direct and fluent. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, umm), use correct grammar (e.g. "eleven stories"), and provide one or two specific details using linking words. Aim for 2–3 concise sentences.

예시: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home. For example, an eleven‑storey apartment block stands two minutes away, and the city center has many taller office towers, which makes the area feel quite dense.

제안: Improve sentence structure and word choice, reduce repetition, and add specific reasons or examples using linking words. Use adjectives correctly (e.g. "atmospheric"). Keep it to 2–3 coherent sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing buildings because I am passionate about photography. In particular, I often photograph old buildings in the city center because their details and textures are very atmospheric and make great photos.

제안: Be more fluent and precise. Reduce hesitation and use accurate vocabulary (e.g. "unique" instead of "specific", "complex construction" instead of "difficult construction"). Add a short reason with linking words to show why you want to visit.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the Sagrada Família in Barcelona. It is a unique building with very complex architecture, and I want to see Gaudí's intricate facades and interior design in person.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammatical errors ("they have"), and provide concrete reasons with linking words. Avoid repeating ideas. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, I prefer living in a low building because I love old houses and their unique atmosphere. Also, unlike skyscrapers, low buildings often feel cozier and are quieter, which suits my lifestyle.

× I think it's uh, uh, eleven floor maybe, but umm, there are many tallest building in my city, uh.

✓ I think it's eleven floors maybe, but there are many tall buildings in my city.

Errors: missing plural 'floors' (count noun needs plural) and incorrect use of 'the'/'many' with 'tallest'. 'Tallest' is a superlative and requires a definite article and comparison context; the student meant 'many tall buildings'. Suggestion: use plural nouns for counts ('eleven floors') and use 'tall' with 'many' to indicate quantity or use 'the tallest' with a specific comparison ('the tallest buildings').

× Yeah, I really like take photos of building.

✓ Yeah, I really like taking photos of buildings.

Errors: verb pattern and noun number. After 'like' follow gerund 'taking' not base verb 'take'. 'Building' as a countable noun should be plural when speaking generally: 'buildings'. Suggestion: use 'like taking photos of buildings.'

× I really like photography and I really love take a photo of old building in the center of my city.

✓ I really like photography and I really love taking photos of old buildings in the center of my city.

Errors: verb form after 'love' should be gerund 'taking' not 'take'. Also 'a photo of old building' should be plural 'photos of old buildings' or 'a photo of an old building'. Suggestion: choose singular with article ('a photo of an old building') or plural without article ('photos of old buildings'), and use gerund after verbs of preference.

× I think it's a very atmosphere and really good.

✓ I think it's very atmospheric and really good.

Errors: 'atmosphere' is a noun; the adjective 'atmospheric' is required to describe a place. Also unnecessary article 'a' before uncountable adjective. Suggestion: use adjectives to modify 'it' — 'very atmospheric' and keep 'really good' if intended.

× I think it's uh, very specific building and, uh, it, it has, uh, very, uh, difficult construction.

✓ I think it's a very special/unique building and it has a very complicated construction.

Errors: 'specific building' is unnatural here; 'specific' isn't the intended meaning — use 'special' or 'unique'. Also 'very difficult construction' is awkward; use 'complicated' to describe construction. Include article 'a' before singular count nouns ('a building'). Suggestion: choose appropriate adjective and use articles correctly.

× No, I prefer a low building so because I really love old buildings and I think they has unique atmosphere and I don't like skyscrapers and very tall buildings.

✓ No, I prefer a low building because I really love old buildings and I think they have a unique atmosphere, and I don't like skyscrapers or very tall buildings.

Errors: 'so because' is redundant; use 'because' or 'so'. Subject-verb agreement: 'they has' should be 'they have'. Missing article 'a unique atmosphere'. Use 'or' instead of 'and' to contrast preferences. Suggestion: remove redundancy, correct verb agreement, add appropriate articles and conjunctions.