Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer clearer and more natural: start with a direct short answer, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (articles, prepositions, plural nouns) and avoid unclear words like “sugar.” Use linking words if you add details.

예시: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small town in Phuket, not in the city center, so most houses are low-rise and surrounded by trees.

제안: Give a clearer reason and correct grammar; avoid unclear phrases like “bellboard.” Use one concise reason and a specific example of what you like to photograph. Use a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I sometimes photograph buildings because I enjoy their shapes and details. For example, I like taking pictures of skyscrapers with interesting rooftops or decorative facades.

제안: Be specific about which building you mean and why. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the building or type of building, then add a reason with concrete details. Fix vague words like “skycrafts.”

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the tallest office tower near the city center because it has an observation deck and impressive glass architecture, which I think would offer great views of Phuket.

제안: This answer is mostly clear but could be improved by giving a brief additional reason and a linking word. Correct grammar (use articles and verb forms) and add a specific example of a concern to make it more persuasive.

예시: No, I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building because it would feel unsafe during earthquakes or severe storms. For instance, I worry about power outages and slow emergency access in high-rise apartments.

× No, because our home is here in Phuket but not near in sugar or like a city so we don't have a buildings near at home.

✓ No, because our home is here in Phuket and not near a town or a city, so we don't have any tall buildings near our home.

This sentence has several preposition and article errors. 'near in' and 'near at' are incorrect; use 'near' without 'in' or 'at' (e.g., 'near our home'). 'Sugar' seems to be a wrong word; likely 'a suburb' or 'a town' was intended. 'a buildings' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'any tall buildings' for plural. Also clarify word choice ('town' or 'suburb'). Suggestion: replace improper prepositions with 'near' and correct articles and noun number.

× Yes, because I love capturing the tall buildings in the city and there's have any bellboard on the top.

✓ Yes, because I love capturing tall buildings in the city, and some of them have billboards on top.

Errors include incorrect contraction and verb form: 'there's have' is wrong. Use 'some of them have' to refer to buildings. 'any bellboard' is incorrect word and article use; 'billboards' is likely intended and plural without 'any' in this affirmative context. Also remove unnecessary 'the' before 'tall buildings' unless specific. Suggestion: use 'some of them have billboards on top'.

× Yes, I like to visit the nearest building in the city because there are skycrafts and look impressive.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the nearest tall building in the city because there are skyscrapers and they look impressive.

Several issues: 'like to' is acceptable but 'would like to' is more polite for expressing desire. 'Nearest building' is okay, but probably 'nearest tall building' fits context. 'Skycrafts' is a wrong word; correct term is 'skyscrapers'. Missing subject for 'look impressive' — add 'they' to agree with plural noun. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary 'skyscrapers' and include proper subject 'they'.

× No, because it's too dangerous if having a earthquake or a storm in the city.

✓ No, because it would be too dangerous if there were an earthquake or a storm in the city.

Grammar issues: 'if having a earthquake' is ungrammatical. Use conditional 'would be' to express potential danger and the correct past-subjunctive form 'if there were an earthquake' for hypothetical events. Also use 'an earthquake' with the article 'an'. Suggestion: use 'it would be too dangerous if there were an earthquake or a storm'.