Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct articles and plurals, and add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid redundant phrases and keep within 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, there are no tall buildings near my home because I live in a small village. However, the village is developing quickly, and I expect a few modern buildings to appear in the next few years.

제안: Make your answer natural and grammatically correct. Use a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and an example, connecting ideas with linking words like because or so. Avoid fragmented sentences and repetition.

예시: Yes, I sometimes photograph buildings because I find their architecture impressive. For example, when I visit a city I often take pictures of skyscrapers to capture interesting shapes and details.

제안: Answer directly and clearly. Remove fillers (uh, um) and be specific about the building and reason. Use linking words to add one or two supporting details such as why it interests you and when you might visit.

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the Bayterek Tower in Kazakhstan because it is a famous landmark with unique design. I have never been there, but I hope to travel to Kazakhstan next year to see it in person.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and then one or two specific reasons connected with linking words. Fix grammar (articles, plural forms) and avoid unclear phrases. Be concise and natural.

예시: No, I would not like to live in a tall building because it can be inconvenient. For instance, going out for shopping or visiting friends takes longer, and elevators can be crowded or slow.

× No, I live in small village so there is not some buildings, but my village is developed every day.

✓ No, I live in a small village so there are no buildings, but my village is developing every day.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'small village' (article error/number), incorrect use of 'is not some buildings' (plural mismatch and wrong structure). Use 'there are no buildings' for negation with plural 'buildings'. 'My village is developed every day' is passive and unnatural; use present continuous 'is developing' to show ongoing change. Suggestion: use 'a small village', 'there are no buildings', and 'is developing'.

× In the future it will be building.

✓ In the future buildings will be built.

Original lacks proper verb form and count agreement. 'It will be building' is incorrect because 'building' as noun needs an action 'built' or 'there will be buildings'. Corrected to passive 'buildings will be built' or 'there will be buildings' to express future development. Suggestion: use 'will be built' for passive or 'there will be' + plural noun.

× Yes, sometimes when I see tall buildings I always take photos because it is seems. Great and amazing.

✓ Yes, sometimes when I see tall buildings I always take photos because they seem great and amazing.

Errors: 'it is seems' mixes auxiliary and verb forms; use 'seem' for plural subject 'they'. 'Buildings' plural requires 'they'. Remove extra period. Use present simple 'seem' to express general perception. Suggestion: match subject and verb number and avoid redundant auxiliaries.

× So I want to take these buildings every time.

✓ So I want to take photos of these buildings every time.

Original implies taking the buildings literally; need object 'photos'. 'These buildings' is fine but verb 'take' requires object 'photos' in this context. Suggestion: include 'photos' to clarify meaning.

× I yes, I would like to visit, uh, by trekking Kazakhstan.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit Kazakhstan by trekking.

Word order and preposition placement wrong. 'Visit Kazakhstan by trekking' places the method after the destination. Remove filler 'uh' and extra comma. Suggestion: follow pattern 'visit [place] by [method]'.

× It is popular building in Kazakhstan Umm, but I have never been this uh, place.

✓ It is a popular building in Kazakhstan, but I have never been to this place.

Missing article 'a' before 'popular building' and incorrect verb+preposition 'been this place' should be 'been to this place'. Also remove fillers. Suggestion: use 'a' for singular countable noun and 'been to' for visiting locations.

× In the future, I will go this place.

✓ In the future, I will go to this place.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'go' when indicating destination. 'Go to this place' is correct future intention. Suggestion: always use 'go to' + location.

× I really want to go by trick.

✓ I really want to go by trek.

'By trick' is incorrect word choice. The intended noun is 'trek' or phrase 'by trekking'. Use 'go on a trek' or 'go trekking'. Suggestion: say 'I really want to go trekking' or 'I want to go on a trek'.

× No, I don't like living in tall building because it is difficult to live.

✓ No, I don't like living in a tall building because it is difficult to live there.

Missing article 'a' before 'tall building' and missing adverb/place 'there' after 'live'. Also better phrasing: 'it's difficult to live there'. Suggestion: include 'a' and end sentence with 'there' or rephrase to 'because living there is difficult'.

× If you want to go shop or outside you don't go this under please it is difficult to.

✓ If you want to go shopping or go outside, you have to go downstairs; it is difficult otherwise.

Original has multiple errors: 'go shop' should be 'go shopping', missing commas, unclear phrase 'go this under please'. Likely meaning is needing to go downstairs to leave building. Clarify with 'go downstairs' and complete clause 'it is difficult otherwise'. Suggestion: use gerund 'shopping', include 'go' before second verb, and use clear prepositions like 'downstairs'.