Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, avoid counting errors and unclear words (e.g. “troll buildings”), and give one specific supporting detail. Use linking words if you add contrast.

예시: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home; there are only about seven small houses. However, in my hometown’s centre there are a few taller office blocks, so the skyline is more varied there.

제안: Answer directly and concisely, avoid unclear phrases and filler words. Give a brief reason and one example if relevant. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so”.

예시: No, I don’t usually take photos of buildings because I’m not interested in photography. For example, when I travel I prefer taking pictures of people or landscapes rather than architecture.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence—answering yes or no—and then give a specific reason and supporting detail. Use linking words (“however”, “because”) correctly and avoid contradictions. If saying you’re not interested but naming one place you would visit, explain why clearly.

예시: I’m not generally interested in tall buildings, but I would like to visit Madison Square Garden in New York because I’ve seen it in many films and it looks impressive. I’d like to experience the atmosphere there in person.

제안: Give a clear, single response (yes or no or maybe) and then explain one realistic reason. Avoid grammar mistakes in conditionals and unclear phrases (“bored a room”). Use a correct conditional form and a linking word like “because” or “so”.

예시: Maybe. If I had a lot of money, I would rent a room in a skyscraper so I could enjoy the views, but I would also keep a small house in the suburbs for quiet weekends.

× Near my house there is only 7 small houses or small buildings.

✓ Near my house there are only 7 small houses or small buildings.

Subject-verb agreement with plural noun: '7 small houses' is plural, so use 'there are' not 'there is'. Use 'are' for plural subjects; count nouns greater than one require plural verb forms.

× However, in my hometown there are some troll buildings.

✓ However, in my hometown there are some tall buildings.

Word choice error: 'troll' is incorrect and likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'tall'. Use the adjective 'tall' to describe high buildings. Choose words that match intended meaning.

× No, I don't say goodbye picture of buildings because actually I don't really like taking a picture.

✓ No, I don't usually take pictures of buildings because actually I don't really like taking pictures.

Incorrect collocation and quantifier: 'say goodbye picture' is meaningless. Use 'take pictures of' for photographing. Use plural 'pictures' when speaking generally. 'Usually' fits typical frequency instead of 'say goodbye'.

× Happens.

✓ It happens.

Fragment: 'Happens' is a sentence fragment lacking a subject. Add subject 'It' to form a complete sentence: 'It happens.' Alternatively integrate with prior sentence.

× I don't think it's necessary, so it's not my cup of tea.

✓ I don't think it's necessary, so it's not my cup of tea.

No grammatical correction needed: sentence is correct. Included here to show no change required; idiom 'not my cup of tea' is appropriate.

× No, because I'm not interested in tall buildings at all.

✓ No, because I'm not interested in tall buildings at all.

Sentence is correct in present tense to express current lack of interest; no change required.

× However, if I could, I want to visit Madison Square Garden in America because I've been there a lot of times in the movies and it was impressive.

✓ However, if I could, I would like to visit Madison Square Garden in America because I have seen it many times in movies and it looks impressive.

Mixed conditional and verb tense issues: 'if I could, I want' mixes conditional and present; use 'I would like' for hypothetical. 'I've been there a lot of times in the movies' is incorrect because one cannot 'be' in a place via movies; use 'I have seen it many times in movies'. Use present perfect 'have seen' for past experiences relevant now; 'looks impressive' or 'seems impressive' fits since appearance in films informs impression.

× Maybe, maybe not.

✓ Maybe, maybe not.

Short answer is acceptable; no grammatical correction needed. Modal nuance is fine.

× If I had had a lot of money I would bored a room in the skyscraper and small house so I can stay wherever I want.

✓ If I had a lot of money, I would book a room in a skyscraper and a small house so I could stay wherever I wanted.

Multiple errors: 'had had' is past perfect unnecessary for a simple hypothetical; use simple past 'had' in a second conditional. 'Would bored' is wrong form; use 'would book' (or 'would rent') — 'bored' is past participle of 'bore'. Add articles 'a skyscraper' and 'a small house'. Match conditional moods: 'I would... so I could...' not 'so I can...'. Also maintain consistent verb forms and word choice.