Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use plural/singular agreement), and avoid repetition. Add one specific detail using a linking word. For example, correct 'do not contain' to 'doesn't have' and 'is of two to three floors' to 'are two or three storeys high.'

예시: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. Most houses are only two or three storeys high, so it’s rare to see skyscrapers in my town.

제안: Make the answer more natural and specific. Use one concise topic sentence and a linked supporting detail. Correct articles and phrasing (e.g., 'the Manhattan' → 'Manhattan' or 'New York'). Mention why you like photographing them and give a clear example.

예시: Yes, I enjoy photographing interesting buildings because they have unique shapes and details. For example, I like taking pictures of skyscrapers in Manhattan because their glass facades look impressive at sunset.

제안: Be direct and specific. Begin with a clear topic sentence naming the building you want to visit, then give a reason using a linking word. Replace vague phrasing ('the building in Dubai') with a specific landmark (e.g., Burj Khalifa).

예시: Yes, I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world and offers amazing views from the observation deck.

제안: Keep it concise and natural. State your preference in one sentence, then add a reason with a linking word. Correct phrasing ('two to three Storey buildings' → 'two- or three-storey buildings') and avoid redundancy ('forever or throughout my life').

예시: I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building permanently because I’m uncomfortable with heights. However, I might stay in a high-rise for a short vacation since short stays feel manageable.

× No, I live in a country which do not contain large buildings or tall buildings.

✓ No, I live in a country that does not contain large or tall buildings.

Use 'that' or 'which' for things but 'that' is preferred here; subject 'country' is singular so verb must be 'does not' (singular) not 'do not'. Also avoid repeating 'buildings' twice: 'large or tall buildings' is concise. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement with singular nouns and use appropriate relative pronoun.

× Instead we have small houses which is of two to three floors.

✓ Instead, we have small houses that are two to three storeys high.

'Houses' is plural so the verb should be plural: 'are' not 'is'. Use 'that' for restrictive clauses and rephrase 'of two to three floors' to the more natural 'two to three storeys high' (or 'two- to three-storey'). Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs and use natural adjective phrases for height.

× So it is rare where I live to see a large or tall building.

✓ So it is rare to see a large or tall building where I live.

Word order is awkward. Move 'to see' before the location phrase for a natural English sentence. Suggestion: place infinitive phrases and location phrases in conventional order: 'rare to see ... where I live.'

× Yes, I do love to take photos of buildings which I feel is quite good and is unique, such as sky skyscrapers in the Manhattan.

✓ Yes, I do love to take photos of buildings that I think are quite good and unique, such as the skyscrapers in Manhattan.

'Buildings' is plural so use 'are' not 'is'. Use 'that' for restrictive clauses and 'think' is more natural than 'feel' here. 'Sky skyscrapers' is redundant; use 'skyscrapers'. 'Manhattan' does not need 'the' when speaking of the borough in general, but 'the skyscrapers in Manhattan' is natural. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, choose precise verbs, and avoid redundant adjectives.

× I'm not sure about all the buildings of the world which are open for visit, but I would love to visit the building in Dubai.

✓ I'm not sure which buildings in the world are open to visitors, but I would love to visit the buildings in Dubai.

'Which buildings in the world are open to visitors' is clearer than 'all the buildings of the world which are open for visit.' Use 'open to visitors' or 'open for visiting.' If the speaker means a specific famous one, use 'the building in Dubai' only if named; otherwise 'the buildings in Dubai' or 'a building in Dubai.' Suggestion: use natural prepositional phrases and correct prenominal modifiers.

× I wouldn't like to live in a tall building forever or throughout my life, but I would rather stay there for a vacation or for a week or a month as I am comfortable to live in two to three Storey buildings and I'm scared of tall heights.

✓ I wouldn't like to live in a tall building forever, but I would rather stay there for a vacation, a week, or a month, because I am comfortable living in two- to three-storey buildings and I'm scared of heights.

Use simpler, parallel phrasing: 'wouldn't like to live... forever' is fine; remove 'throughout my life' as redundant. Use 'rather stay there for a vacation, a week, or a month' for parallel items. 'Comfortable living in' is the correct verb pattern (comfortable + -ing), not 'comfortable to live in.' 'Storey' capitalization is wrong; use 'storey' lowercase and hyphenate 'two- to three-storey.' 'Scared of heights' is the natural expression, not 'scared of tall heights.' Suggestion: use correct modal constructions, parallel lists, and common adjective + -ing patterns.