Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, correct grammar, and use clear linking to explain reasons. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct singular/plural and article use (e.g., "a tall building" vs "tall buildings").

예시: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. Most people there prefer living in detached houses rather than apartments, so the neighbourhood mainly has two- or three-storey houses.

제안: Answer directly and improve grammar and word choice (e.g., "take photos of buildings" vs "take photos of buildings"). Use a linking phrase to contrast preferences and give a brief specific example of what you photograph.

예시: Not really — I don’t usually photograph buildings. Instead, I prefer natural scenery; for example, I often take pictures of rivers, forests and local parks because I enjoy capturing greenery and wildlife.

제안: Respond directly and avoid hesitations. Use correct phrasing and more precise details: if you don't want to visit buildings, explain clearly and give one concrete alternative activity with a reason.

예시: Not really — I’m not especially interested in visiting buildings. Instead, I’d rather go hiking in a forest to see different plants and animals, because I enjoy being close to nature.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and two concise reasons with correct vocabulary (e.g., "feel uncomfortable" not "on uncomfortable", "high-rise flat" not "high rise flash"). Mention what you prefer and why. Keep sentences short and grammatically correct.

예시: No, I wouldn’t like to live in a tall building. I would feel isolated living alone in a high-rise flat, so I’d prefer a small house or shared accommodation where I can be near other people.

× No, there are not any tall building around my homes because everyone prefer to be live in their own house rather than in a apartment.

✓ No, there are not any tall buildings around my home because everyone prefers to live in their own house rather than in an apartment.

Multiple errors: 'building' should be plural 'buildings' to match 'any'; 'homes' should be singular 'home' (refers to my home); 'prefer' requires third person singular 'prefers' to agree with 'everyone'; 'to be live' is incorrect verb form — use 'to live'; 'a apartment' should be 'an apartment' because 'apartment' begins with a vowel sound. Suggested improvement: check noun number agreement, ensure subject-verb agreement for indefinite pronouns like everyone, and use correct article before vowel sounds.

× So it's an every house are small that maybe two or three storeys.

✓ So every house is small, maybe two or three storeys.

'It's an every house are small' has several issues: 'every house' is singular and requires singular verb 'is' not 'are'; the extraneous 'it's an' is unnecessary and incorrect; word order corrected to 'every house is small'; moved 'maybe' for clarity. Also 'storeys' is acceptable (British spelling) but ensure consistency. Suggested improvement: when using 'every + singular noun' use singular verb and avoid redundant pronouns.

× No, I don't usually take a photos of building because I am somebody that loves a green scenery and a landscape.

✓ No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because I am someone who loves green scenery and landscapes.

Errors: 'a photos' mixes singular article with plural noun — remove article ('photos') or use 'a photo' and singular; 'of building' should be plural or take an article: 'of buildings'; 'somebody that' is better as 'someone who' for people; 'a green scenery' and 'a landscape' are uncountable or plural: use 'green scenery' and 'landscapes'. Suggested improvement: match articles to countability, use 'someone who' for people, and choose singular/plural appropriately.

× I prefer photographing a river, forest, parks, gardens rather than a urban architecture.

✓ I prefer photographing rivers, forests, parks and gardens rather than urban architecture.

Issues: inconsistent singular/plural — list should be parallel, so use plural forms 'rivers, forests, parks and gardens'; 'rather than a urban architecture' is wrong: 'urban architecture' is uncountable here and should not take 'a'; 'a' before 'urban' is incorrect. Suggested improvement: maintain parallel structure in lists and remove incorrect articles before uncountable nouns.

× I don't think there is a building I'd like to visit because I already told you that I am fond of greenery.

✓ I don't think there is any building I'd like to visit because I already told you that I'm fond of greenery.

Minor issue: 'there is a building' can be improved to 'there is any building' to match negative meaning 'don't think'. Also 'I am' contracted to 'I'm' is optional. Suggested improvement: use 'any' after negative verbs when referring to nonspecific things.

× So I do want to visit, uh, the forest or by going hiking, visiting a different kinds of plants, animal.

✓ So I do want to visit forests, go hiking and see different kinds of plants and animals.

Problems: 'the forest or by going hiking' is awkward; 'a different kinds' mixes singular article with plural noun — should be 'different kinds'; 'animal' should be plural 'animals'. Rewritten for natural parallel structure: 'visit forests, go hiking and see different kinds of plants and animals.' Suggested improvement: keep parallel verb forms and match number (singular/plural).

× No I would not like to live in a tall big building because I'm on uncomfortable for living alone.

✓ No, I would not like to live in a tall building because I'm uncomfortable living alone.

Errors: 'a tall big building' adjective order should be 'tall big' is odd — use 'tall building' or 'big, tall building' with correct order 'big, tall' but 'tall building' suffices; 'I'm on uncomfortable for living alone' is incorrect: 'on' is wrong and 'uncomfortable for living alone' should be 'uncomfortable living alone' or 'uncomfortable to live alone'. Suggested improvement: remove unnecessary prepositions and use natural adjective order.

× I feel isolated in the high rise flash.

✓ I feel isolated in a high-rise flat.

Errors: 'high rise' should be hyphenated 'high-rise' when used as adjective; 'flash' is wrong word — likely 'flat' (British) meaning apartment. Use appropriate article 'a'. Suggested improvement: learn common compound adjectives and correct vocabulary ('flat' not 'flash').

× I would prefer a small house or a serial accommodation where I can be around with other people.

✓ I would prefer a small house or shared accommodation where I can be around other people.

'serial accommodation' is incorrect vocabulary; likely 'shared accommodation'. Also 'be around with other people' should be 'be around other people' (no 'with'). Suggested improvement: use correct collocations like 'shared accommodation' and avoid redundant prepositions.