Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答えは分かりやすいですが、具体性と文の流れを改善してください。例えば「どのような用途の建物か」を述べる際に、列挙だけでなく接続語を使って自然につなげ、語順や数の一致を正しくすると良いです。また文は2〜3文にまとめて余計な重複を避けましょう。

예시: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. Many of them are mixed-use, with residential apartments on the upper floors and offices or schools occupying the lower levels.

제안: 短く直接的に答えていますが、理由が曖昧で不自然な表現（"I don't feel anything for them"や"I don't have to take them"）があるため改善が必要です。理由を具体的に述べ、接続語（because, so, therefore）を使って論理を明確にしてください。

예시: No, I rarely take photos of buildings because I usually find them unremarkable. Instead, I prefer photographing people or landscapes that capture an interesting moment.

제안: 答えに意図はありますが文法と表現が少し不自然です（冠詞や語順）。また「なぜその建物を訪れたいか」を明確にし、接続語で理由と結果をつなぐと良いです。具体的な詳細（雰囲気・場所の特徴）を加えると高得点に繋がります。

예시: Yes, I'd like to visit a small restaurant in a nearby building. It serves excellent sukiyaki, and I enjoy going there because the atmosphere is cozy and the staff are very friendly.

제안: 理由は伝わりますが、表現が不自然で冗長です（"not good at the high space"）。シンプルに恐怖の理由を述べ、補足としてどう対処しているかや代替案を示すと会話が豊かになります。

예시: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I'm uncomfortable with heights. I prefer low-rise houses where I feel more relaxed and less anxious.

× Yes there are.

✓ Yes, there are.

Punctuation and spacing: add a comma after 'Yes' for natural spoken response. No major grammatical error; this is primarily punctuation and natural phrasing. Suggestion: write 'Yes, there are.' to reflect spoken pause.

× They are used by residents and workspaces and schools.

✓ They are used by residents, offices, and schools.

The original sentence uses 'workspaces' awkwardly and lists items without commas. 'Offices' is the natural noun for places people work in. Use commas to separate list items. Suggestion: use natural collocations (residents, offices, schools) and comma-separated list.

× No, I don't take photos of buildings because I don't feel anything for them.

✓ No, I don't take photos of buildings because I don't feel any attachment to them.

'Feel anything for them' is unidiomatic. Use 'feel any attachment to them' to express lack of emotional interest. This keeps present simple tense consistent with habitual action. Suggestion: prefer natural collocations like 'feel any attachment to'.

× I don't have to take them.

✓ I don't need to take them.

'Don't have to' means there is no obligation; likely the student meant there is no need or desire. 'Don't need to' matches meaning better. Suggestion: choose the modal expression that matches intended meaning: 'don't have to' (no obligation) vs 'don't need to' (no necessity/desire).

× There is small restaurant near my house in building.

✓ There is a small restaurant near my house in the building.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'small restaurant' is incorrect. Also 'in building' needs the definite article 'the' to indicate a specific building. Suggestion: use 'a' for a non-specific noun and 'the' for a specific known building: 'a small restaurant' and 'in the building'.

× I like Sukiyaki so I enjoy eating there.

✓ I like sukiyaki, so I enjoy eating there.

Capitalize food names only when proper; 'sukiyaki' can be lowercase. Punctuation: add comma before 'so' to separate clauses. Pronoun use is fine. Suggestion: write 'I like sukiyaki, so I enjoy eating there.'

× No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I'm not good at the high space so I'm scared of high buildings.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I'm not comfortable with high spaces, so I'm scared of tall buildings.

Several issues: 'not good at the high space' is ungrammatical; use 'not comfortable with high spaces' to express discomfort. 'High buildings' is awkward; use 'tall buildings.' Also add comma before 'so' for clause separation. Suggestion: use 'comfortable with' for feelings about environments and prefer 'tall' for buildings.