Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct plural and article forms, and avoid repetition. Add one specific example and a linking word to make it coherent. Keep to under 5 sentences.

예시: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, several apartment towers and office blocks line the main road near my neighborhood. Because Dhaka is the largest and most developed city in Bangladesh, tall buildings are common there.

제안: Speak naturally and avoid fillers. Use correct names and vocabulary, and give one clear reason and a specific example. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" and correct word forms (e.g., 'stunning buildings').

예시: Yes, I often photograph buildings, especially when I find them visually striking. For example, I took photos of the Lal Bagh and the Pink City building in Dhaka because their architecture and colors are very striking.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, then one or two clear supporting reasons. Correct grammar (singular/plural, articles) and avoid repetition. Use linking words like "because" and be specific about what attracts you (height, design, views).

예시: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai. I want to see it because it is the tallest building in the world and its modern design offers spectacular views of the city.

제안: Start with a clear opinion and give one strong reason with correct grammar. Use linking words like "because" and avoid awkward phrasing. Be specific about which facilities matter to you (e.g., gym, security, parking).

예시: I would prefer to live in a building that has good facilities rather than simply being tall. For example, I value buildings with reliable elevators, good security, ample parking and a communal gym because they make daily life more convenient.

× This is because there are lots of stall building near my home.

✓ This is because there are lots of tall buildings near my home.

The noun phrase has singular noun 'building' after 'lots of', which requires a plural noun 'buildings'. Also 'stall' is likely a misspelling of 'tall'. Use plural to agree with 'lots of' and correct the adjective: 'lots of tall buildings'.

× The major reason is I live in a Dhaka city which is the most developed city in Bangladesh.

✓ The main reason is that I live in Dhaka, which is the most developed city in Bangladesh.

Redundant article 'a' before 'Dhaka city' is incorrect; use the city name without an article. 'Major' can be replaced by 'main' for naturalness. Add 'that' to introduce the clause and comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which is the most developed city in Bangladesh'.

× So tall buildings is common in this city.

✓ So tall buildings are common in this city.

Subject 'tall buildings' is plural, so the verb must be 'are' not 'is'. Ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Certainly, yes, I take photos buildings which buildings are very stunning, such as uh Lal vakila and uh, pink domestication in Dhaka cities.

✓ Certainly. Yes, I take photos of buildings which are very stunning, such as Lalbagh Fort and the pink mosque in Dhaka.

Missing preposition 'of' after 'take photos'. Remove the redundant second 'buildings' and use 'which are' for the relative clause. Several place names were incorrect or awkward; use likely intended names and singular 'Dhaka' for the city. Also split into clearer sentences.

× I take photos in front of these villains because of the adhesive buildings are very stunning.

✓ I take photos in front of these buildings because the architectural details are very stunning.

'Villains' and 'adhesive' are incorrect word choices. 'In front of these buildings' is fine, but the clause 'because of the adhesive buildings are very stunning' is ungrammatical. Replace with 'because the architectural details are very stunning' to convey reason and correct clause structure.

× The building is located in Dubai and the building name is Burj Khalifa.

✓ The building is located in Dubai and its name is Burj Khalifa.

Repeating 'the building' is awkward; use the possessive pronoun 'its' to refer back to the singular noun. This keeps it concise and grammatically correct.

× I want to see these buildings be because of the because of the buildings beauty and the is located is very environment friendly location and which is and which I really want to visit this.

✓ I want to see this building because of its beauty and because it is in a very environmentally friendly location, and I really want to visit it.

Wrong pronouns and demonstratives: 'these buildings' -> 'this building' (singular). Remove duplicated 'because of' and fix possessive 'building's beauty' to 'its beauty'. Correct 'environment friendly' to 'environmentally friendly'. Fix word order and eliminate redundant phrases; use 'it' to refer back to the building.

× Actually I want to live in a attractive and facility full buildings instead of tall buildings because of the buildings will justify how facilities it provides compared to its size.

✓ Actually, I want to live in an attractive, well-equipped building instead of just a tall one, because the building should justify the facilities it provides compared to its size.

Article and adjective order errors: use 'an attractive' before a vowel sound and change 'facility full' to 'well-equipped'. 'Buildings' should be singular to match 'a'. Clarify 'instead of tall buildings' to 'instead of just a tall one'. Fix clause 'the buildings will justify how facilities it provides' to 'the building should justify the facilities it provides' for correct pronoun agreement and natural phrasing.