Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and directly answer the question first, then give clear supporting details. Fix grammar (articles, plurals, word order) and avoid repetition. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: No, there are no tall buildings near my home because I live in a rural area where local regulations limit houses to two or three floors. As a result, most buildings in my neighborhood are low-rise and residential.

제안: Answer directly (Yes/No) then give specific examples and reasons. Organize sentences with linking words such as "but," "however," "for example," and correct tense and agreement. Avoid repeating words and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Not usually. However, when I visit places outside my hometown—for example, relatives' houses, malls, or cinemas—I often take photos to keep memories. I sometimes upload those pictures to my social media.

제안: Start with a clear statement answering the question, then name a specific building you would like to visit and explain why. Use linking words ("because," "so," "for example") and avoid unclear phrases. Correct grammar and remove redundancy.

예시: Yes. I would like to visit one of the large malls in the nearby town because they have many shops, a cinema, and places to eat. I usually visit them on weekends, and I enjoy the variety of activities they offer.

제안: Give a direct answer and a concise reason, then add one supporting detail. Correct vocabulary ("two-storey"), remove filler phrases, and use a linking word like "because". Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, I would not like to live in a tall building because I am afraid of heights. I prefer my two-storey house since it feels safer and more comfortable for me.

× There are a not all buildings in my hometown because I belong to a rural area where the government has allowed it to two to three buildings floor.

✓ There are not many tall buildings in my hometown because I belong to a rural area where the government allows only two- to three-storey buildings.

The original uses incorrect pluralization and articles ('a not all buildings') and awkward phrasing. Change to 'not many tall buildings' to correctly express scarcity. Use 'allows only two- to three-storey buildings' to indicate permitted building heights; 'storey' is the correct noun and hyphenation clarifies the range.

× No one has permission to make tall building in his house.

✓ No one is permitted to build a tall building on their house.

The phrase 'has permission to make' is awkward; use passive 'is permitted to build' or 'is allowed to build'. Also use 'their' as a gender-neutral singular pronoun and 'on' to indicate location; 'build a tall building' is the correct collocation.

× So there are not all buildings in my hometown and my locality.

✓ So there are not many tall buildings in my hometown or in my neighborhood.

'Not all buildings' is incorrect for meaning 'few or not many'. Replace with 'not many tall buildings'. 'Locality' is better rendered as 'neighborhood'. Use 'or' for better flow.

× No, I do not prefer to take photographs of buildings but whenever I go outside from my hometown and like my relatives house and some like like cinemas and malls, I prefer to take pictures or on that places because it make it makes memory for us with and I also uploaded on my social media this pictures to.

✓ No, I do not prefer to take photographs of buildings, but when I go outside my hometown to visit relatives' houses or places like cinemas and malls, I prefer to take pictures there because they create memories for us, and I also upload these pictures to my social media.

Multiple issues: use 'when' instead of 'whenever' for specific visits; 'go outside from my hometown' should be 'go outside my hometown' or 'leave my hometown'. Use possessive 'relatives''. Remove duplicate 'like'. 'Places like cinemas and malls' is correct order. 'It make it makes' has subject-verb disagreement; use 'they create' referring to pictures (plural). Use present simple 'upload' not past 'uploaded' to match habitual action. Fix pronoun and word order for clarity.

× Is there a building that you would like to visit?

✓ Is there a building that you would like to visit?

This question sentence is fine and requires no correction.

× As I earlier mentioned, I belong to a rural area so there is not all and very big building in my locality.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I belong to a rural area, so there are no very large buildings in my locality.

'Not all and very big building' is ungrammatical. Use 'there are no very large buildings' to indicate absence of large structures; 'as I mentioned earlier' is natural word order. 'Buildings' must be plural.

× But there are also two to three malls in my area where I visit on Sunday weekends when I ever pray for my duties or and I also prefer to visit this visit these buildings.

✓ But there are two or three malls in my area which I visit on Sundays when I am free from my duties, and I also like to visit these buildings.

Use 'two or three malls' instead of 'two to three'. 'Visit on Sunday weekends' should be 'visit on Sundays'. 'When I ever pray for my duties' is unclear; likely 'when I am free from my duties' or 'when I have time'. Remove duplicate words and correct 'this visit these' to 'these'.

× Do you want to live in a tall building?

✓ Do you want to live in a tall building?

This question is grammatically correct and needs no change.

× No, I do not prefer to live in a tall building because I have a phobia of height that's why I do not prefer toy building.

✓ No, I do not want to live in a tall building because I have a fear of heights; that's why I do not prefer tall buildings.

'Prefer to live' is acceptable but 'do not want to' is more natural here. 'Phobia of height' should be 'fear of heights'. 'Toy building' is a typo for 'tall building'. Use plural 'tall buildings' or repeat 'a tall building'. Use a semicolon or period to separate clauses.

× So I like my house which is only two Storey building and.

✓ So I like my house, which is only a two-storey building.

Capitalize 'Storey' is incorrect; use lowercase 'storey' and include the article 'a'. Add a comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which is ...'. Remove trailing 'and'. Hyphenate 'two-storey'.