Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more accurate: start with a direct topic sentence, correct city name and grammar, and keep to 2–3 concise sentences. Use linking words like 'because' correctly and provide a specific example or location to make the answer more concrete.

예시: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home in Seoul because the city is densely populated. For example, large apartment complexes and office towers line the main avenues to accommodate the high number of residents.

제안: Give a direct, grammatically correct response and add one supporting reason with a linking phrase. Avoid repetition and be specific about what you prefer photographing instead.

예시: No, I rarely take photos of buildings because I prefer photographing natural landscapes. For instance, I enjoy taking pictures of rivers and fields when I visit the countryside.

제안: Answer directly and give clear, accurate facts and a short reason why you want to visit. Use connectors like 'because' or 'so' properly, and avoid vague fillers.

예시: Yes. I would like to visit the 63 Building in Seoul because it is a famous landmark with an observation deck. I want to see the city view from the top and visit the aquarium inside.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific reasons with correct grammar. Use a linking word such as 'because' and avoid hesitations and repetition.

예시: No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I prefer a house with a garden. For example, I enjoy having outdoor space for plants and more privacy than an apartment offers.

× Yes, uh, when I lived as a soul, there was a lot of tall building in there because Seoul is very small city, but there are lots of people in there, so they need to build that kind of building.

✓ Yes, uh, when I lived in Seoul, there were a lot of tall buildings there because Seoul is a very small city, but there are lots of people, so they need to build that kind of housing.

Errors: 'soul' is a misspelling of the proper noun 'Seoul' (not a grammar category here but corrected), 'there was a lot of tall building' mixes singular/plural and count/noncount. Use plural count noun 'buildings' and plural verb 'were' to agree with plural subject. 'in there' is unnecessary; 'there' or nothing is better. Also 'a very small city' needs article 'a'. Suggestion: identify countable nouns and make subject-verb number agreement; use 'a lot of' with plural count nouns as 'a lot of buildings.'

× Uh, no. I don't like to take photos of the building because I really doesn't. I really don't like the building because I am a country person, so I like country scenery.

✓ Uh, no. I don't like to take photos of buildings because I really don't. I really don't like buildings because I am a country person, so I like country scenery.

Errors: 'doesn't' is third person singular form and is incorrect with first person subject 'I'; use 'don't.' Also use plural 'buildings' for general statements. Remove repetition and keep consistent plural. Suggestion: match auxiliary verb form to subject ('I' takes 'do not') and use plural nouns for general preferences.

× MMM, Especially I like to see 63 building in Seoul, because the 63 building is the highest building in Seoul, especially in East Asia, So when I have time to visit there.

✓ Mm, especially I would like to see the 63 Building in Seoul, because the 63 Building is one of the tallest buildings in Seoul and in East Asia, so I will visit it when I have time.

Errors: Use of articles and proper nouns: '63 building' should be 'the 63 Building' (capitalized and with 'the'). 'the highest building' is likely inaccurate; safer to say 'one of the tallest' if factually unsure. Sentence fragment 'So when I have time to visit there' lacks main verb; corrected to 'so I will visit it when I have time.' Suggestion: use 'the' with named buildings and include verbs to complete sentences.

× No, I really don't want to live in a tall building because I I want to live live a a house rather than to be in like apartment because I don't think the tall building is is not a.

✓ No, I really don't want to live in a tall building because I want to live in a house rather than in an apartment; I don't think tall buildings suit me.

Errors: Repetition ('I I', 'live live', 'a a') and awkward structure 'rather than to be in like apartment' are problems. Article use: 'an apartment' needed. Ending 'is is not a.' is incomplete and ungrammatical. Suggestion: remove repeated words, use parallel structure 'live in a house rather than in an apartment,' and finish the thought concisely ('I don't think tall buildings suit me').